Mystery Revival: I Can Create Paranormal Objects

This book has too many plot holes. The original work should have said that Ah Hong's ghost makeup should be able to exert 60% of its power. When Ah Hong and Li Jun took their final bow, he was dressed as the ghost messenger Wei Jing, with 60% supernatural power. Furthermore, the premise of the wish card from the wishing ghost is that Zhao Kaiming has already borne the consequences.

The plot is exceptionally well-written, but it's very easy for it to fall apart, so you have to be extremely careful.

The moment it's released, it's already poisonous; the headquarters is accused of murder and robbery on social media, a direct slap in the face; and Li Jun, who was so aggressive towards the protagonist, a starving ghost, doesn't even utter a sound on social media.

When did the protagonist get sent to the research institute by headquarters? When did he get instantly killed by Fang Shiming? This plot is all wrong!

Being covered in supernatural items, but not being able to control the right ghost, feels like a small horse pulling a large cart—it just can't move it.

The writing is not bad, but the protagonist is too timid in front of Wang Xiaoming. He seems inferior to Wang Xiaoming and has no temper at all.

It looks interesting now, but it would be better if the protagonist's power increase was gradual, with a step-by-step process; writing it as an invincible story wouldn't be good.

Sure, sure! Keep writing according to your own ideas. The latest chapter I've read so far is quite good. Other fanfiction is too wordy. This one has pretty good writing. I support it!

It's a bit toxic, but you can barely take a look.

The protagonist just imprisoned the starving ghost, and then someone who couldn't even get into the ghost realm dared to jump out? Also, why didn't he dismember the starving ghost and take away the coffin nails?