My Proficiency in Cultivating Immortality

This setting of the Kagong method is very interesting. You need to buy spells, weapons and elixirs, but you also need to buy the kung fu. So compared with sects that do not need to buy kung fu, a mortal will be three years slower to practice Qi, three months slower to practice Qi one to Qi two, 15 months slower to practice Qi two to Qi three, maybe less, and 30 months slower to practice Qi three to four. This is a rough calculation. If you reach Qi training nine, the non-second-generation monks of this sect may be slower than that. The monks of the sect that does not pay for the cultivation of skills spend decades longer, which means that it is impossible to break through the qi training mirror, and even in the later stage of qi training, it is basically impossible to break through. This is a rhythm that is purely asking for death, and is this system really considered a sect? Everything is clearly calculated, where does the cohesion of the sect come from, and the enemy is coming. Who do you expect to fight? This is the cultivation stream, not the wizard stream, but the equal exchange of wizards. Have you seen too much?

This book is very good and has a sense of life, but the pace is too slow and a bit wordy. It was okay when I was reading it, but I didn't want to read it after waiting for two days on the bookshelf.

You wrote too many expansions and too many psychological descriptions, which made it uncomfortable to read.

Looks good, very good! Pretty good for everyday life! It's just a little too watery!

The protagonist is a bit dumbfounded. The first level of Cao Mu Jue is already maxed out, so he doesn't buy the second level. He just lets it sit there. One dish costs 96 spirit stones. Just for the sake of deliciousness, it's better to buy the raw materials and make it yourself. I don't see what's so cool about it.

This technique is too expensive! It's ridiculously expensive. Is it so profitable during the base period?

As for the junior level, is there also an advanced level?

It's written too slowly and needs to be speeded up, otherwise it won't attract too many people.

The layout needs improvement, some paragraphs are too dense.

Also, after reading the comments, don't worry about what they say, just write them down. As for the concept of the novel's insistence on money, it is actually easy to explain. After all, it is just a sect, and those disciples do not have a master to accept disciples. Spending some money to allow people who are not qualified to practice is already very good.

Author, please give me a shout out, we have been waiting very hard.

In fact, I think what is written is quite interesting Although I feel that few people who read it are at risk of being eunuchs, I still subscribe. Unfortunately, he is still a eunuch.

Just two words! Forage. I won't say how beautiful it is, but it's really watchable, there's no big problem, and the pace is okay. Come on.

Your introduction is very attractive, but the content is a bit verbose. I hope the next one will be better (if you still write it)