Konoha: I Am a Disciple of Captain Yamamoto!

The values ​​​​are still too thin. If Naruto is a world of ignorant people, where does the protagonist show his wisdom?

A man who only kills his own people to retaliate against Captain Yamamoto, and yet he flaunts Aizen? You're not even as good as Obito.

Chapter 4. If chakra forms a pillar of support when treading water, how much chakra is needed in a lake or sea? Are ordinary ninjas still alive?

Quan and the protagonist alone are enough to persuade people to quit. The assembly line relationship is not good at all. It is better not to write it

I feel like you, the author, still don't quite understand Uchiha. First of all, Uchiha and Senju are the founders of Konoha, and other families joined later. Since Senju Tobirama believes that Uchiha is an evil clan (because Senju Tobirama's brother was killed by Uchiha), the top management of Konoha is to suppress Uchiha, although Uchiha himself is also There is a problem (too extreme) But this is not a reason to suppress Uchiha. To put it in another way, it is: I, Uchiha and Senju built this home, and other people just moved in. Now other people manage this home, and they want to suppress me, Uchiha, the founder. Can this be agreed to? Especially after the Nine-Tails Rebellion, Konoha's top management's fear of the Sharingan reached its peak. Even Uchiha Shisui didn't trust it. The third generation only talked about finding a way. After all these years, have you thought of it? In fact, I just don't want to think about it. Uchiha is just a piece of fat. Konoha only has so many resources. You Uchiha are so fat. If not, who will do it? Just look at the Sarutobi clan and you will know that with the Uchiha gone, the Sarutobi clan has become the strongest fire escape clan in Konoha. Just think about it and you will know what is dirty about it.

To be honest, I don't really understand this book. The protagonist and supporting characters seem to behave in an irregular manner, which is inexplicable.

I came in for no other reason than to shout Yamamoto! I'll make you a fairy!

I took a look at the catalog and, um, I finished it.

I was so impulsive that when I saw the Grim Reaper, I immediately ordered it all. What the hell is this? Love story, right? And the main character is a psychopath. I really want to curse him.

Also, Obito became insane after turning on the kaleidoscope. If he really wants to resurrect Rin, the reincarnation jutsu, and the meeting, the filthy soil reincarnation jutsu, and Chiyo's reincarnation, find a scapegoat to control the Sharingan to activate it. In short, the jutsu to resurrect a person can always be found, but he can't. He can only execute the Eye of the Moon. Then everyone will dream together because he is desperate for the world. So what if he is resurrected. First, Lin only needs to be in the ninja world. Sooner or later he will die in battle. Secondly, Lin is not going back to Konoha after she is resurrected. Thirdly, Lin may not like Obito. She may like Kakashi. So Obito will only create a world where Lin likes him. Execute the Eye of the Moon and go dreaming.

I always feel like the characters in your world are not obsessed enough. The protagonist changed their behavior after just a few words. Anyone who can become a strong person has his own path, okay?

I always feel that Obito's obsession in this world is not deep enough. His kaleidoscope was only awakened after escaping from the world.

There are a lot of problems First of all, there are a lot of typos, and then, knowing that Uchiha is being monitored by the village, he goes outside to practice. Can you freely control the evolutionary state of the Sharingan (open three, and then you can decide whether to open two or three when using it)? And these are just the problems that arise in the first few chapters

Brothers, look here

Do people nowadays like to put random things into their bodies? When should I leave it unspeakable?

The first chapter is a bit vicious, wanting to use Izumi as a ninja to threaten Itachi and leaving the clan to practice in order to avoid ANBU surveillance•᷄ࡇ•᷅

Have you forgotten Konoha's famous trick? The spirit transformation technique can directly exit the body. Although it doesn't last long, it can also be used as a trump card.

Naruto still has some logic, but the whole thing behind is water, crazy water.

Come on, you let me see a very different Naruto fan fiction.

Just look at the table of contents and you'll know the content!

This cow can be raised

Wuhu!

First time

Am I finally going to see the ending of One Piece?

Moreover, Ōtsutsuki itself is the most powerful biotechnology, but the weaker soul technology is such as the resurrection creation of the shell tissue, the resurrection of the Samsara Eye, the reincarnation of the dirty earth, Ōtsutsuki's descendants, the Uzumaki clan's Shinigami and the Six Paths Sage in the Soul Land, and other miscellaneous cosmic super technologies, such as spaceships and various advanced mechanical puppets. The modern instruments in the universe are just super technologies and the like.

Sofa