I Reincarnate in the Heavens and Become a God

I am an old fan of July. I saw from the leader's recommendation that a new book will be released in July. I came here to support it and to share my thoughts on the new book. What can I say about the subject of unlimited streaming? I have mixed feelings about it. The advantage is that by dividing a long novel into many different novellas or even short stories, it will be easier for the author to advance the plot and control the content. It will also bring more freshness to the readers, so that they will not get bored after reading it for a while. But the disadvantages are also obvious. First, the length is too short, and it is difficult to establish the characters in each part for readers in a short time. It is easy to fall into a "facial" design, which will test July's writing skills; second, it is easy to create a sense of separation between each part, and the story routines in each part will inevitably have similarities. Readers will feel like they have seen each other before, which will cause repetition and affect the reading experience. After reading more than thirty chapters in this book, I feel that it should be about 70% to 80% of the level of the beginning of the book between the villain and the leader, especially the drama plot, which continues the consistent dark style and wits plot, which must be praised. But the shortcomings are still the two I mentioned above, insufficient character development and the plot seems to advance too fast (it would be understandable if there are other long plots later), and it feels a bit like a running story. My humble opinion is that you can add one or several characters who follow the protagonist throughout the world in the different worlds of Infinite Flow (the villain the protagonist offends, the boss behind the system, or even the protagonist's younger brother or... The heroine?), So that there is not such a strong sense of distance between the various parts. In addition, due to the long time between new books, many old readers may not come back for a while, and they are not used to the sudden change of writing style, so you can consider adding some Easter eggs from previous books (for example, the Zhenwu Hall in the introduction of the new book, could it be the one in the world of the leader ten thousand years later? 😜) Finally, I wish the new book in July a great sale and a successful career!

This author's books are getting worse and worse. I'm almost halfway through, and it's already written like a running account. The villains are basically based on the same template. They pretend to be stupid, and they are old and young. The upgrade of the protagonist is still the same routine. I have skipped reading it now, and it has no effect on understanding the plot. After all, you can guess it. It seems to be unfinished, so I can only say to be cautious 😥😥

The copy of The Dynasty of the Zhou Dynasty is still good to read. After finishing this book, I will continue to write novels about high martial arts. That is the author's strength. To be honest, I stopped writing for a few years before starting a new book. The popularity is not as good as it used to be. Many plots can be seen in the previous books. Anyway, give it a try 😁

In fact, the protagonist in the July book said that decisiveness is more of a seeker-like character. They all have their own clear goals, which is to become stronger! For this goal, neither power, money nor beauty can seduce them.

The author can make this mistake

Here comes another suggestion After reading Chapter 107, I always feel that something is missing, and I feel like I can't finish it in one breath. Today I finally found out what the problem was. After more than 100 chapters, the opponents that Brother Sheng encountered were all opponents that he could easily defeat. At present, there is no opponent who is truly on the opposite side of Brother Sheng and can fight with Brother Sheng stably online. Almost all are disposable cannon fodder supporting characters. If you look at it from a reader's perspective, you will think: Why does the protagonist deal with these unworthy people every day? It is not strong enough. Appropriate sense of difficulty and crisis can bring some excitement to readers and improve Brother Sheng's style. I hope Fei Qi can make adjustments from this aspect. Just like Brother Xiu met his friend Fengxian in more than sixty chapters in The Leader, at the same time, Nie Dongliu and Bai Wuji, who were also strong opponents of Brother Xiu in the early stage, appeared one after another. Not to mention how much crisis it brought to Brother Xiu, there was definitely a sense of tit-for-tat tension. This book now gives me the feeling that it lacks such a flavor.

The theme of Zhutian is not a popular one. There are very few updates now and the volume is not increasing, so the results are not very good. If there can be more, please update more.

There are so many B things in a sunset club

When will I write a copy of the Great Zhou Dynasty again? Will the Great Zhou Dynasty be better?

I've given you all the tickets I've saved up for a month. Hurry up and add more. Can you give me a blast?

How many chapters do you owe now and you still don't update it?

Hahaha

The chapter breaks at the critical moment, speechless😓

Why don't you drag Luo Li into the water? The worst thing is to give him a share of the skills to complete. It's so tiring to bring a stick and a dog-legged Song Joong-ki to join him vertically and horizontally.

Please write more, it's not enough😄

When will we add more updates? It's not enough.

Not up or down yangweiba

Three thousand words for one chapter is too little. It's not enough to read. Please write more. Five thousand words for one chapter is almost enough😜

There are either typos or omissions in every chapter. You should check it when you upload it. You are not reading a pirated version.

The book of July has a unique flavor. It is decisive in killing with some resourcefulness, and it also leaves some suspense in the plot. The emotional line is also quite ambiguous. I think it is more enjoyable. It would be great if there is a copy of this book in the universe of July. I look forward to the encounter of Su Xin, Chu Xiu, and Gu Cheng 🙂 It would be better if it has a Vegito fusion function similar to Dragon Ball 😏

Chapter 1: Dissuade people from quitting directly. One-third of the people in a local city of a group work for the group or its controlled companies. What is the concept? ? Alibaba, Tencent and Wang Jianlin together can't do this, let alone where are you? Writing a novel is not just random writing. I guess someone must have said: If you can do it, you can do it.

Is this definitely a book by a great god? 😰

Although the subject matter has changed, July's style is still as strong as ever. I have only written thirty chapters now, but you can guess that it is July's book even without looking at the author's name. Qidian now has a separate category for Infinite Streaming. If it is written well, the results should be good. Come on July! I am a former villain and leader of the student party and have no money to subscribe. I would like to say sorry to Qiyue. I am sorry. I will definitely read the original version of this book. I will make up for those two books if I have the opportunity in the future. Finally, I would like to make a small suggestion. I don't know if it is suitable or not. The heroic figure of the protagonist has already begun to emerge, but I feel that there is still room for improvement in the depiction of the fighting scenes. If possible, it would be better to polish it carefully. I think the descriptions of the fighting scenes of Cuckoo Bird, Pei Tugou and Get Out are all very good. I wonder if Qi Qiyue has the idea to study them. Of course, these are all personal opinions and should be written according to the author's own ideas. One last thing, come on July! I hope the new book does well!

I've read over a hundred chapters, and I'm going to complain. Since the protagonist can directly bring items out of the reincarnation world without paying a price, why does the protagonist choose to return directly after completing all the tasks, even though he can stay and search for them before returning? In the protagonist's first world, at the end of the mission, a bunch of people around him were having a gunfight. It was no problem for the protagonist to return directly after completing the mission. You shouldn't return directly to the second and third worlds! Especially the third world, which is the Great Zhou World. The protagonist has just saved the emperor and has made such a great contribution. Why should he ask the emperor for a batch of centuries-old medicinal materials, a bunch of elixirs for various purposes, a few magical weapons, and dozens or hundreds of martial arts secret books as a reward? The protagonist chose not to care about anything and just returned. It was really a loss.

Feng Da should not always think about writing books and getting results. He should think about writing what he wants to write, so that the results will come naturally. The more he thinks about commercialization, the harder it is to get results. The most pity is that the book "The Great Sage of Tongyou" was so well designed, but it was a pity that it failed in the middle. Even though I jumped, I still created many books of that type of subject matter. If you are not popular, others will become popular through these designs, and it is not just one or two books that will become popular.

Was this plot written by a great author? Sell ​​your account!

I have been resting for almost a year. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest.

Martial arts can't do without you, we can't find any writing that suits our taste 😭

Let's just say it's not a good idea to return to martial arts. The first part of this book was pretty good, but when it got to the fantasy stage, it really didn't feel that way.

Brother Qi should continue to write martial arts novels. The ones that include the demon sect leader and villain systems are absolutely beautiful. It would be great if he could write sequels to these two 😁