Great Sage Huntian

For fantasy, I can only read the ones written in July by Jin Feng. The protagonist is wealthy yet heroic, has a superior IQ without sacrificing a lovable personality, acts in a self-interested manner but is not out of line in his outlook on life, is a genius but is also a struggler and does not care about the love between his children at all. He is simply a role model for our generation. From a writing perspective, the writing style is relaxed and has nothing to do with gags, and the scale is just right. It is full of the passionate qualities of a refreshing novel. It is full of details on the protagonist's standard leapfrogging battles, endless hole cards, and pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It also takes into account logic. The branch lines of the plot are all wonderfully arranged. Large-scale battles of wits are often connected in the form of martial arts. Various small climaxes can well create a sense of freshness. And in terms of writing skills alone, I think the author's choice of words and sentences can definitely be ranked at the forefront of the starting point. It can be seen that the author has read many classic martial arts novels. The descriptions in the paragraphs are vivid, the pictures are strong, and the appropriate allusions are eye-catching. At the same time, it is not obscure or sloppy. One shot to the end, the battle scenes are very enjoyable. I have read all four of the author's novels. Contrary to the reviews, I have the best impressions of The Great Sage Tongyou and The Great Sage Huntian. The characters in these two books have the least bonds, and the protagonists are the most "alone", which is in line with my preference for lone heroes. The rhythm is also relatively tight, there are no too large-scale dungeons and too long window periods for explosions. The events will not be very long, which allows me to maintain sensory excitement. Among them, The Great Sage of Tongyou is particularly stunning. The addition of supernatural and thriller elements is very novel. The horror scenes depicted by the author are very fascinating and are very compatible with curiosity lovers. It's a pity that the end is really bad, full of pitfalls, to the point where I just threw my phone and cursed after watching it. Although it is unlikely, would the author consider having time to continue writing and fill in the pitfalls? Seeing that the response to the new book is not as good as the previous one, I am worried that the author will give up this relatively niche style to cater to the market. There are always people complaining about the normal chapter. I can understand the high threshold of coolness that has been fostered by the flood of coolness in the starting point. But to be honest, there are a lot of works to choose from if you just pursue that kind of fast-food "pleasure". There is no need to force the same in works that are wrong in themselves. The tone of the new book may not be too strong, but I think the quality is not inferior to the previous work. I hope the author can continue his own style as much as possible, and I also wish the new book will get better and better results.

This new book in July feels a little bit toxic, not as good as the first two... I have to keep up the good work, author, come on!

En, to be honest, I'm a little disappointed. I would give it five out of ten at most.

Book Review I have renewed my order, hoping that the plot will speed up and my strength will increase. I will read the later chapters.

Reminds me of a previous book, The Great Sage, Nine Transformations of Gods and Demons, Li Qingshan, and Xiao An. The bull demon is stuck in the mud with great strength, the tiger demon is crazy about practicing his bones, the ape demon fishes for the moon but it will be empty, the snake demon swallows the sun without regrets, the turtle controls the sea, which is a sign of good and bad luck, the phoenix's nirvana is undying, the unicorn creeps to pity the common people, the dragon and the sky move through the destiny, the gods and demons change nine times, but they remain unchanged. I still remember Li Qingshan's words, the weak draw their swords against the weaker, and the strong draw their swords against the stronger. What a pity, I wish the author will eat instant noodles without seasoning packets for the rest of his life.

I don't know if it's an illusion. I feel that July's book is not as good as the previous ones. I don't have any particular desire to watch the subsequent plot.

I don't know what kind of mentality people have nowadays. Psychopath? Unsatisfactory life? I saved a few women at the beginning and it's the Holy Mother. I'm speechless.

The class representative is here: The strongest villain system The male protagonist Su Xin The female protagonist Li Huai Meet the leader The male protagonist Chu Xiu The female protagonist Lu Fengxian The Great Sage Tongyou The male protagonist Gu Cheng The female protagonist Xiao Yi The Great Sage Huntian The male protagonist Li Xuanzong The female protagonist? ? ? Looking forward to the new book and the new heroine😏

Compared with the first two novels, this Goldfinger is weakened to a certain extent, with an increased political emphasis, and a certain combination of styles from the first two novels. However, in the later stages of the current update, the Golden Finger has been weakened again. For example, the previous Qi training method was said to be able to cultivate a physical constitution, and the body training method was not reflected in the later ones? And since it is a transvestite world, it can be fused if you meet the right bloodline. After all, the protagonist is not the kind of person who is particularly racist... Overall it is good, come on, give me a 2-month pass, 5 recommendations and support, and collect the book list.

This new book was released in July. I can honestly say that I am speechless. It doesn't have the flavor of the villain and the leader books at all, and your last book was both secluded and inexplicably poorly finished. It can be said that it's a bit of a bad book among casual fans and your loyal fans. It's not unreasonable for this book to have such bad results now.

It's time to change to Xianxia. It seems that martial arts is really going to be cool.

The writing is getting worse and worse, others are making progress while others are regressing. The first part, the villain system was well written, the second part, The Leader, was unfinished in the later stages, and the third part, The Great Sage of Tongyou, can understand your sudden physical illness and forcibly speed up the process, but it ended up being unfinished. But this fourth part... Eh

I'm helpless... I'm at work or something. I'm starting a new book.

If you don't cut it quickly, you might be able to save some readers by writing the next one.

You readers who think a few women should be saved are the only ones talking too much! You are right! The family "Feng Qiyue" was founded by the protagonist's decisive killing! On the one hand, continuing to use this kind of character design can attract some old readers! Why do those readers who say that the protagonist Our Lady is called "July July"? It's because they are old readers! It's even more attractive to know the author's decisive writing style! On the other hand, even if the author lets the protagonist not save people, he may not lose many new readers! On the other hand, the character design will definitely collapse! The protagonist was an "evil king" in his previous life, good at killing and possessing evil aura! Defects must be reported! At first glance, he looks like a cold-blooded murderer. From an overall perspective, there are potential risks in saving these women! On the other hand, the method of rescue is wrong, commonly known as "reducing wisdom"! In addition, the plot of "saving an unrelated woman and getting into big trouble" is a poisonous point in itself! Saving people is not the key! If you really send the woman away smoothly with ease, no one will say anything about you! The key is that rescuing people has caused big trouble, leading to a precarious situation! In the end, you can only survive by luck! This is the biggest failure! If it was really written like this! Do you know how many readers will be lost? Do you think it's good and that's it? ! The author finally changed this part of the plot, and I applauded! All of a sudden, the differences were gone, and the character of the protagonist was preserved, and the author did a great job changing it! Do you know why? Because the author changed the book, you did not abandon the book, and the old readers are also happy! Wouldn't it be better to have the best of both worlds? How about you, you are so gibbering, constantly thinking that your values ​​are correct? The author also said that it was to deal with it and prevent it from being locked up in a small dark room, which shows that the author's tendency is to kill decisively! You can write better if you write what you are good at! Do you teach authors to write books? Extremely ridiculous! Why do so many readers now know that writing articles about dog licking and nannying will end badly, but they still write them anyway? It's because this kind of author holds your kind of thoughts, this matter needs to be taken care of! Take care of that! Don't worry! West Guan Guan! Can you die if you don't express your three views? In the end, it can only be written as a "nanny article"!

I have been a fan of Buddhist readers for four years, and I have followed the book since the villain's late stage. Personally, I feel that among the four books, The Leader should be the one with the most mature writing, the most coherent narrative, and the best characterization in July. This one is actually the most regrettable in my opinion. The world view created in the early stage is obviously much grander than the previous ones, but in the end the skeleton is too big and the content is not substantial. . . My immature suggestion is to settle down and clarify the creative direction during this period. In fact, the new martial arts is really a good choice. The writing style of the villain and the leader should be relatively mature. The martial arts + system flow, combined with a bit of suspense and adventure elements, is also in line with the public's taste. If you really can't find the theme, it is also a good choice to improve the previous pitfalls and produce a few villains and leader peripherals. . . Especially the leader, if a prequel is made with Dugu Weiwo as the protagonist, and the origin of the demon lord is well written, readers of the Unified Demon Sect will also be satisfied (the extra chapters about the leader and the villain are both good, you can consider expanding and writing a few novellas or character biographies, especially the leader, there are really many places that can be explored in the IP of Kunlun Demon Cult). Finally, come on, July is great, and I look forward to better works!

It's so funny. There's such a huge difference in this first book. Forget it, don't write if you don't want to write. It will make you tired and make us unhappy 😜

New book in July, start catching up ●‿●

I really can't stand it. It's completely incomparable to the first two novels and even the previous one. This book seems to be filled with water. I just couldn't stand the latest one. From Su Xin to now, the more I read, the more disappointed I get. The more I write, the more outrageous the system is. The characters are rough and the levels are confusing. I just keep writing martial arts after a few times. If I can't write fantasy, why should I be so perfunctory with readers

You have to start killing people in July. Killing people, setting fires and ransacking homes is the way to become rich and powerful.

I have withdrawn it. I no longer have the desire to read it. I will come back when the next book is about martial arts or if this book becomes popular in the later stage. See you again!

I've finished reading it all. Please don't change the author's name and keep writing. Occasionally, if you don't write well, it doesn't represent your true level! I have been following the book since the first few chapters of The Strongest Villain System. I have followed so many books and I really like the author's writing style! If the author had changed his pen name, I might not be able to find such an excellent author. What a pity!

I'm coming back in July and I have no books to read 😭

There is always news when a new book will be released! Why do so many books? Personally, I feel that Tongyou Monkey King's template is the best. It's very thoughtful, but the writing is extreme, otherwise it would definitely be platinum!

Donkeys in labor don't dare to rest like this.

What about the new book? What about the new book? You won't forget, right? Drunk and lying in the gentle countryside, I don't know what night it is? I'm not rushing you. If you are busy polishing your new work, of course you can't rush it. I'm afraid you...

It's too short! What a pity, I really like the author's writing! I will wait for the new article, the article without the heroine is good!

I'm getting married in May, congratulations in advance.

Ouch, where is the new book? Is the author recovering well?

I am here to publish my fantasy martial arts novel again. There are two paragraphs. Please read it patiently. If there are any shortcomings, please let me know! On the night of the 15th, Lanlong came to Liangzhu Lake alone and saw no pavilions or pavilions outside the lake. There was only a table floating on the water in the middle of the lake. It could be seen that several people around used their internal strength to lift the table to the lake. Although there was a gentle breeze, it did not move like a mountain. Lan Long used the Falling Leaf Technique and floated to the center of the lake, where he saw a few faces. "Sect Master Nangong was so happy that he started eating directly on the lake." Lan Long said calmly. A middle-aged man in blue said coldly: "Lan Long, I didn't want to invite you originally, but President Wan insisted on meeting. Today we will only talk about the situation, not grudges." "Master Lan, it's a pleasure to meet you. Since the battle at Rufeng Mountain, you and I haven't seen each other for half a year. Today, it seems that Master Lan is indeed not a thing in the pool. He has been ranked third in the list of heroes. It is gratifying and congratulatory." A young man in a black mandarin jacket said with his hands. This is none other than Wan Jinghua, the richest man in Daliang Kingdom and the head of the Jiangnan Merchants Association, whose wealth can reach heaven. Lan Long handed over to Wan Jinghua and said: "Wanhui leader Liao praised him, but he is just a fool, and he has never taken the martial arts chart list seriously." For Wan Jinghua, Lan Long still admires him very much. It is not easy for an ordinary person, without any martial arts talent or hands to tie the chicken, to be able to achieve today's power by relying on extremely high means of gathering wealth. "Humph, the martial arts chart list is the ancestor of the sects in the world and was created by the Qiongmen. How can you, a junior, question it?" At this time, a middle-aged man with an eight-stroke beard said coldly. "He's just a defeated general, but he has a big heart. If you hadn't run as fast as you could on Rufeng Mountain, do you think you could still be eating here?" Lan Long said with a glance. The Demonic Vajra Art in his hand is about to be used. "What did you say..." Fu Xinhuai was about to explode, but Wan Jinghua quickly stopped him, "Everyone, Wan invited everyone here today, just to have a meal and talk about the situation. Today is also the Mid-Autumn Festival, so it is not appropriate to use force." "Okay, give Master Wan some face, and only talk about the situation, not grudges." Lan Long put away the Vajra Art and sat down with the others. The third-stop man snorted coldly: "Old man, if you don't want to die, just get out of the way." The old man didn't seem to hear him, "Let's sing a song together and let you share the sorrow of the ages." He started to drink wine again. When the second guard saw it, he directly pulled out the Tian Yu Lei Punishing Sword and said: "No need to talk to him, just send him back to the west." After saying that, the sword in his hand was filled with light, thunder was deafening, and the sword passed through, the sword energy was like lightning passing through the clouds, mixed with thunder, and the speed was so fast that people could not avoid it. After taking a sip, the old man's face glowed red. He waved one hand, and the powerful energy directly blew away the thunder and lightning sword energy. He made a fist with one hand and struck out towards the second blocker. The fist was as powerful as a mountain and tsunami. The second blocker hurriedly blocked and was knocked back three feet. The second blocker said in surprise: "This old man is not easy. Let's fight together and fight quickly." It can be seen from the fact that he blocked his full blow with one hand. This old man is very powerful. I have never heard of anyone blowing away the sword energy with the wind of his palm. He didn't even use his internal strength, so the second blocker didn't dare to be careless. Hearing the words of the second blocker, the others immediately drew their weapons and killed the old man. The old man couldn't help but shook his head, "Young man, you're too angry. You have to change things." He put away the wine bottle and started swinging his fists. His body was like a fish, like a snake, like water. The four of them used all their techniques, but none of them hit him. Although the fifth gear head is famous for its speed, it is not of the same level at all. He is only fast in movement, but does not have the strength of the old man. The old man avoided another wave of attacks, blocking the others with his left hand, making a fist with his right hand, with the back of his hand pointing up, condensing his true energy, and the huge fist directly knocked the fifth head away, "Lü Dongbin, you are so drunk that you can lift a kettle!" With one careless move, the shadow of the fist condensed into an eagle claw, locking the neck of the fourth gear head, and tearing it horizontally. The fourth gear head quickly used the secret skill of Exquisite Body Protection, plus burning blood essence, and survived. However, it was still torn away by the eagle claws, leaving a gash on his neck. "Uncle Cao Guo, the immortal toasts and locks the throat!" After the old man said this, he shot fifteen cold-current ice cones at the old man with his third head, and there was no escape from the sky or the earth! Since the martial arts competition, the strength of the third-block head has taken a step closer. It used to be able to control ten rounds, but now it is fifteen. Seven rounds are at the bottom, and eight rounds are at the top. It is inevitable to chase life until death! The old man shook the others away and swept his legs. The internal force was transferred to his legs. The energy came out of his body. The seven ice picks on the ground were directly swept away. Then he jumped into the air and kicked the eight ice picks flying towards him eight times. "Zhang Guolao, you are drunk and threw a cup and kicked them in succession!" Seeing that all his ice picks were destroyed, the third block head was still unbelievable. How could anyone kick his own ice pick away with the strength of his feet? But the old man wouldn't give him a chance. He pushed his feet hard and hit him like a cannonball. His three heads hurriedly condensed ice picks in an attempt to block him in mid-air, but the old man was too fast. As soon as the ice pick was halfway completed, he was pushed away by the old man. "Han Zhongli, drunkenly holding the altar with your heart in your arms!" Before it was over, the old man rushed towards him again. The fifth-block head attacked with sharp legs. The fifth-block head could not resist, so he could only use his true energy to protect his body. The old man bent one leg, condensed his true energy, and used his knees to reach the door. The fifth-block head was not good at defense. After the fragile Gang Qi was broken by one blow, the second-block head was kicked by the old man again. The second-block head wanted to help, but the old man turned around and hit the overlord's elbow to repel him. "Tieguai Li, it's true that you got drunk with your heels and knees!" The second gear head was furious when he saw the fifth gear head who was vomiting blood and shouted: "Death!" Thunder and lightning flashed in his hands, and the zhenqi behind his back condensed into a Thunder God holding a long sword, with an angry look on his face. The long sword struck down, and all the people in front of him would be wiped out by thunder and lightning! The old man used his body skills and actually shuttled through thousands of lightnings. He turned and twisted, and his posture was graceful, just like a dancing girl. Although it was indecent, in the eyes of the second blocker, this was clearly a humiliation to him! "He Xiangu, let's get drunk and walk around drunk!" The second block head started to chop left and right again, and the magic sign behind him also followed him. It was a mess with flying sand and rocks in a radius of three hundred feet, but not even a hair on the old man was hurt. The second block head stood with his sword upright, and the sword light burst out, more dazzling than the sun. The old man couldn't help but use his arms to block it, "Now!" The magic sign behind the second block head Suddenly divided into four, surrounding the old man from the front and back, each one shining brightly, thunder and lightning overflowing, the second blocker held a sword in one hand, and held a red electric ball in the other hand, throwing it towards the old man, and the four Dharma Appearances also held the electric ball in their hands, making the same action. Not only that, a thunder formation appeared at the feet of the Dharma Appearance, and the thunder light was imprisoning the old man! After five loud noises, thick smoke billowed and dust flew. "Is he dead?" The fourth gear driver said, supporting the fifth gear driver, and the third gear driver also staggered over. "I don't know, no one has ever been able to survive my Five Thunder Heavenly Tribulation." The second blocker just looked ahead, his eyes intense. After a while, the thick smoke gradually dissipated, and only a shout was heard from inside, "A drink will solve a thousand worries!" Then the four of them felt a strong pressure, and saw a statue of a Dharma figure who was eighty-point acquaintance with the old man condensed in front of them, shirtless, with muscles The flesh crushed the anaconda with a punch, and the world began to shake. The four of them had no time to think about why he was not dead yet, so they all used their strongest defense. The fifth gear head was seriously injured and could not use its internal strength. The fourth gear head had to use half of its internal strength to defend him. Even so, the four of them felt absolutely unable to block the punch. "Senior, show mercy!" Just when he was about to hit a few people, a person flew over at high speed from a distance. He saw that the person was wearing a black wolf official uniform with wolf head embroidery on his chest. The corner of the old man's mouth curled up, and his fist suddenly changed direction and hit the small hill behind. There was a loud noise that leveled the entire hill! "The person coming is Shen Pingyang, the head blocker of the Black Wind Team in Dongchang?" The old man put away the Dharma photo and asked. "That's right. Thank you for your mercy, senior." The man didn't dare to be rude and said with a cupped hand. "How is your Governor Cao's health?" The old man asked. "I have always been in good health, and these guys are also the other front-blockers of the Black Wind team." "Do you recognize me?" The old man asked. "I heard the Governor mentioned you." The old man waved his hand, "That's all, since you are under Governor Cao, I won't embarrass you, but you can't chase Li Juntao." "What, brother..." The second block just wanted Shen Pingyang to give it another try, but was stopped by shouting, "Shut up!" "Of course, we will go back immediately to resume our duties, and I will also report the news that you are still alive to Governor Cao." "Haha, since ancient times, the sages have been lonely, only the drinkers leave their names." After the old man finished speaking, he picked up the wine bottle and started drinking, and walked slowly away. After the old man walked away, the second-level leader asked: "Brother, who is this old man? Could he be the governor's brother?" Shen Pingyang said slowly, "He is Han Sicheng, the "Drunken Immortal" who was number one on the list of heroes two hundred years ago! Because he was injured when he was young, his realm is very unstable. Sometimes he is in the Tianyuan realm, and sometimes he is only in the Tiangang realm." "So what? Plus the eldest brother, can five of us still be unable to defeat one person?" Third Block asked as he wiped the blood from his mouth. "Don't raise me up, there are just a few of us who can't hurt him at all." "Didn't my eldest brother practice the Wild Fire Tyrant Flame Kung to the fifth level? Even this can't hurt him?" The second blocker asked in surprise. "That's another drunken fist trick that you have never seen before. If we really fight, the governor will be at a disadvantage!" "Then let's not chase Li Juntao? Such a good opportunity." Asked the second blocker. "Forget it, we have already obtained the things. It will be a matter of time to kill him. Let's go back and report to the governor first." Several people looked at each other and had no choice but to leave. I have been thinking about this novel for at least five years, and I consider the details almost every day, because I think novels are the same as other arts, and they must consider the feelings of the audience. , You cannot be irresponsible, speculate, fish in troubled waters, and be perfunctory is extremely disgusting. The audience has invested a lot of time to watch your art, but you treat the audience like a monkey. Not only is it a waste of the word art, it is also a waste of your own principles. In short, you can gain recognition by treating the audience like your parents.         ，，， ， When I finish thinking about it, I will definitely put it on the shelves!