All the Elves I Modified Came True

I don't understand why they broke up. The plot is a bit confusing and I can't quite understand it…

This is a bloody emotional drama. Who is Sirona? She lives in the same room with you, a man you have only known for a few days, and the male protagonist still has this whole ambiguity.

The writing of these chapters is really baffling. Instead of writing a good animation + special chapter, I have to write a fusion of the world view. That's not to say it's not possible, but you should have the integrated world view, self-created regions, maps, special elves, quasi-gods, mythical beasts, four heavenly kings, and champions. And then there is that wealthy family, which is really a classic, it is really poisonous to write it like this. Especially when it comes to playing the Baby Cup. A level 70 elf is going to play the Baby Cup. Are you okay? If the author keeps writing like this, he will most likely send it. Since your story is an elf modified by the protagonist, you can use this road as a clue to find the protagonist's lost elf, meet the characters in the special episode along the way, and write some heartwarming stories. Isn't this better than a baby cup? Also, the emotional line with Zhu Lan gave me the feeling that it was like an ancient Long Aotian-style cool novel, where the tiger's body trembles, and the beautiful woman throws herself into his arms 😅 Since you want to write about a growth-oriented heroine, then why can't you let the protagonist be a sparring partner, slowly develop feelings secretly as she grows up, and finally be rescued by the protagonist in a crisis, and then confess her love. Although it's cliche for a hero to save a beauty, isn't it much better than your Long Aotian? Isn't Baiyang Town's Time and Space Double Dragon a good opportunity? There is also the power of Viridian given to a passerby. It is not appropriate. You said that the passerby at the back is the protagonist's tool. It is difficult for anyone to explain, and the power of Viridian can only be possessed by people born in Viridian City. At least explain the birth. Also, it's best to change the conversation with Dr. Oak. What characteristics are the same as those of the earth god from Hoenn? The protagonist knows it, but people in the elf world shouldn't know it, right? Really, you either don't touch the baby cup, or you have to play it after regaining the elves, and it is not recommended to play it even after regaining the elves. Even if you wrote about the return of the protagonist, the Dragon King, and directly won the Donghuang Championship, it would not be so vicious. The writing was mediocre in the first place, and given the Baby Cup and the wealthy family, giving the Rainbow Feather to Zhu Lan was also a failure. My suggestion is that since you want to write, you can write about Donghuang's unique elves and the Five Heavenly Kings, stories in various regions, solving the beast riots and villains during the journey, and recovering the lost elves by the way. Write these well, not to say it is a blockbuster, at least it will not be a hit, but you have written the most poisonous one, I don't understand 😅😅😅

Why is there something wrong with the writing? I feel like the author wants to write about such bloody things about the family, but no.

To be honest, I don't know if you can see it yet, but you are really not suitable for writing books, and your mentality breaks down after being told a few words by others... This is the reason why you are not suitable for writing books.

If the power of Changqing is given to a passerby, who is not a native of Changqing, can he compare with Du (who is not a native of Changqing)? There are also families that are divided inexplicably

Although bamboo orchids are good, they are all bamboo orchids. So many female characters, ugh

Hmmmm, not as good as one-tenth of another elf modifier. I was looking forward to it when I saw the name... In the end, I picked up the concept of a modifier and didn't absorb any of the advantages of that book...

Sent it, but send it again

I read it at the beginning, and the rest of it was just the title. I really had no interest in reading the content. It felt like a running story, but not entirely a running story. The plot was also a bit boring.

The beginning seemed okay, I thought it was a Pokémon fanfic, and then a fusion world came, and it turned out that it was a domestic Pokémon, and it slipped away.

Listen to my uncle's advice, you can't control it when writing about China😭. You have to create your own character. It's obviously not as useful as copying what's already in the game. Moreover, it's too boring to write about a family, a sister, and so on. Big guys have seen a lot of this kind of plot. And there are no new tricks. When it comes to this sister, I can only say that the tsundere has withdrawn from the environment. She has an awkward personality and looks weird. There is almost nothing written about the sister's elf training. The last few chapters seem to be weak. After a long time, the protagonist has a cook for nothing. Where are the superpower cheats given by Wu Song, and the baby cup that I will fight later. Now that every elf has penetrated a king, this baby cup is not that exciting anymore.

I vomited, the emotions were written in a pulp. Let me watch it while thinking. As a result, I was given a trim every now and then. Can you just write it off if you can't write well? It's really speechless to force obscenity.

Yes, yes, isn't this the protagonist? Isn't it? !

I hope you don't pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. Your original writing is not very good, but you still pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. Are you really not worried about the readers running away?

What I wrote before was fine, but now it's starting to get weird, and I'm a little discouraged.

I'm almost a eunuch, my next book will be about traveling through La Lulas

These few pictures are very confusing, and I have no interest in reading them. Let's wait until this paragraph passes.

In fact, modifying the fire-breathing dragon and the quasi-god race value of the elf in Land of the End is illegal. It is not the original version of Sword and Shield. Magicians can only change the elf but not the race value. Even if the magic version is modified, it will not fit into Sword and Shield. It can only be said that the author has not played Sword and Shield, or it is a pirated emulator. A normal magician modifies legal elves and transfers them to the genuine game. However, the game can only transfer legal elves. If they are not legal, they cannot be transferred and cannot be played. It seems that a large number of illegal elves were banned some time ago. The author can only modify the modified elves and they can only appear in pirated versions. They cannot be found in Sword and Shield.