Knock the Door of Pupil Technique in the Original God

I think it's okay. The current plot is quite interesting. After all, Genshin Impact has entered the drafting stage now. If you want to be inspired, you have to watch the follow-up activities and plots. It's good to transition to another world. Of course, the character design of the protagonist is very good and he is suitable for being a husband. Is there anyone who can draw a picture? I want to draw the protagonist's book.

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The writing is good, but I came to see Genshin Impact, not Naruto. Genshin Impact only has three or four chapters in total, and the rest are all about Naruto.

Isn't it bad that the heroine is a shadow? But no matter who the heroine is, it's best not to be from the Dragon Clan. There are a lot of Dragon Clan fandoms now. If the heroine is from the Dragon Clan, I'd probably give up. After all, I'm here to watch Genshin Impact fandoms. (Representing only personal opinions.)😁😁

Was this novel written by one person? The Dragon Clan is really in chaos! ! !

The eye colors don't match, but I only found this one

In your book, since I came to Liyue, I feel that there is very little connection between your chapters. You are still in Liyue Port, and suddenly it jumps to Long Xi. It is strange. It is no longer a problem of poor writing, it is completely incoherent, and there are many times in the Dragon Clan chapter. Moreover, since the Dragon Clan came back, the strength is very unclear. Where is your Sharingan, did you eat it? So speechless

The Naruto part is quite full, and I hope there will be content about the masters of the redemption class in the future. The Genshin part is also pretty good so far, and it matches the cp feeling of Thor, but the dragon part is too far apart. Of course, the author must have realized it when he deleted it. I hope there will be an eye-catching plot in the future. The time-travel plot is not too abrupt at the moment, and there is no need to fully listen to the readers' requests and write all the Genshin Impact parts. After all, there are only so many Genshin Impact plots, and it is difficult to increase the number of words except for writing about daily life in large sections. It would be nice if Genshin Impact could finish Mondstadt and Riyue before entering the Land of Grass. Quick travel is also a good method, with Genshin as the main world and other worlds as subordinates. However, I hope that the combat power will not collapse. Although it is written in the invincible style, after all, fast travel will be meaningless if it is always invincible, cutting grass and crushing. I still hope to leave emotional bonds in each world.

I didn't compile it, but I compared the encyclopedia and the original text and found no gaps. The extra stuff may come from Dragon Fantasy and his personal speculation. I quit after playing for a few days, and I'm not sure. Copying by hand is still very hard. If you are interested, please support it

The connection between the previous chapter and the next chapter of this book written by the author has always been confusing. There is always a feeling of time and space crossing, which makes me feel really uncomfortable.

If you set the protagonist to belong to Inazuma, there will definitely be less plot. There is no other way, and it will inevitably lead to the need to continue traveling to other worlds. Then how do you integrate the pupil technique? Just like you wrote that you want to go to the Dragon Clan so that the protagonist can obtain the golden pupil, then how do you integrate the golden pupil and the kaleidoscope? Together, it's a bit complicated to use each one's own, and you finally came back with a training system for your pupil technique. Chakra is enough in the original God world, so the elemental power of the God's Eye is useless. Is the future path fixed, or can it be changed when the time comes. I feel that if these issues are not handled well, it will be a bit shaky. Although I have not read Dragon Race, but the author, come on, your writing is interesting. I may make up for it because of your novel 😁, come on!

How should I put it, it feels okay but not very good. Rating: Grain-. I gave it an initial order as an encouragement, and later threw it into a bookstore to see if it would survive in the end.

Choose one of the two, Mond Liyue. Uh-huh! (●´∀｀●)ﾉ

The author is a puppet, so why can Lei Cannon have self-awareness, but I, General Leiden, cannot? So~ you know the author?😏

The book is quite good, but the early part of the Genshin Chapter is too short. It suddenly jumps to Naruto and ends hastily. It would be a pity to at least take the Ten-Tails with you. Even if you mention it briefly and then rush to the dragon clan, it's a pity. Come on

Now let me update at 12 o'clock at midnight. Anyway, there must be two chapters in a day. It's hard to say when. I will update after the holidays... Trust me... As long as it's a legal holiday, I definitely have a day off.

Come on author Jun (filmed my wife as "funny")

When did you change your hair color?

Keep it, keep it, keep it. .

So where did the kaleidoscope go?

Does anyone know where the author's new book is from?

Are there too few people pursuing it? I'm already in the top 3. Everyone showed off the rankings they had grabbed.

Doubts from the handsome boy

I like this book very much. I have ordered it all. Come on!