The Nation's Lawyer

Excluding the embarrassing pretentious slaps, ambiguous incidents, and "killing people if you don't get it" scenes, it is indeed a good novel. And as someone who has met Teacher Che Hao once, I feel a little uncomfortable.

I read more than 10 chapters. Good subject matter, but the traces of routines are too heavy. It follows the path of old urban literature. One set after another. The look and feel is not good. The whole article is nonsense. It does not promote the main line and there are no redundant lines. It is just for the sake of money. The main line is currently finding the murderer of my grandfather, and the protagonist is eager. But you have not written any action. The center is for the country and the people. This opening It's too big and it just rises to the top. There is no psychological journey or foreshadowing. I really don't understand. Now look at what the protagonist is doing now. You don't push the plot or write other lines. You start to pretend to shut down and slap the face. Can I understand it this way? The expectations are really in vain. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The opening few chapters Chapter 1: Describe the protagonist who has just entered college. Write out the foreshadowing and character tone. He will graduate directly and become a formal lawyer. Open a small invincible and then drive the main line while promoting the branch line. Draw the character more fully, one branch line and a small climax. The main line will be connected step by step, such as becoming the murderer of my grandfather, a company or an episode. The legal advisor of the group This group has a lot of illegal properties. Grandpa died because of some profit issues. After the evidence was found, the murderer and the illegal group were severely punished The protagonist's thoughts are sublimated and he is directly invincible. Some of the branch lines written earlier become the main line. It can be completed at a small end point. For example, getting married or changing industries. Anything is fine. I really didn't expect it to be a novice novel. I really couldn't wait for it. Although the first two chapters are pretentious and slap in the face, the tone is very good. I didn't expect it to be really interesting from beginning to end.

Can the lawyer have a position? Don't you agree with whomever you accept money from?

The writing is very good. I like to read niche professional articles. My suggestion is to write more defense cases. You can also popularize the law from the cases. You can also feel refreshed from the situation where it is impossible to reverse the case. The protagonist wins. Or various weird cases, Currently I don't know if this is the heroine Wu Xinyue, which makes me feel like a trouble and very annoying. Knowing Chu Yunfei's background or personality, he deliberately caused trouble for the protagonist within a few days of meeting him, and then told the protagonist that he should be careful, green tea? It's more vicious than green tea. Also, if the character Chen Liang showed any courtesy, would he have been killed by Chu Yunfei long ago? , There is no need to add anything similar to fantasy, family, genius, fingertips for marriage. Killing people at every turn? In a society governed by the rule of law, you are also writing a legal article. I can't think of any family or group of companies that would take huge risks to kill a person whose background covers the entire political and legal circles. (After all, my grandfather is a leading figure in the legal field) It may even offend the entire Wu family later. Another reason is that I am curious about how the author will explain the murder of the protagonist's grandfather.

Can you stop being so handsome? Isn't it necessary to write it? Just write an introduction at the beginning. If this aspect appears too often, you won't feel it. If you rely on your face to make a living, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Big countries don't need this stuff. They are unreasonable again. What they want is strong military power.

Generally speaking, I read that the contents are all written around Pig's Foot as a trainee lawyer and a freshman, and there are many female characters. The father of a female anchor whom I know is the chief, and the law firm assigns its own lawyer. She is the daughter of the Wu family, and she also has a fiancé. She hired a murderer just because she saw Pig's Foot partnering with his fiancée, and the daughter was forced to marry in order to maintain the family marriage. This is really mindless.

Very well written indeed! Come on!

It's hard to see serious articles about lawyers. Come on, author.

What climate is the protagonist of this book preparing to wake up in?