One Piece: I Can See Entries

It's hard to understand that the Navy has a wanted order. You, a Navy man, suddenly have a wanted order? Is it passed down openly? The navy has no face? The world government has no face? Are the intelligence systems of world governments and navies rubbish? Do you know it was Tianyaksha who did it?

This book doesn't have a pirate flavor. After reading a few chapters, it felt like reading an ancient military novel, and the dialogues had the flavor of a drama.

Can this Chamberlain bring peace for a generation?

The protagonist is too naive. Even I know that to be a pirate, if you don't talk about your ancestors, you must at least be a native of the motherland. I even felt a little guilty in Genshin Impact by deliberately destroying the flowers that the flower shop wanted to bury.

There is a system to change the devil fruit, why not change it to Yinglong, Zhulong or something like that. Red Dragon feels like a weakened version of Kaido that doesn't have the strength.

Multiple devil fruits? Be careful, I feel like one or two is enough, too many will feel confusing, just like twin martial souls are already strong, three souls are a bit outrageous and redundant

In fact, in fan fiction, the protagonist only needs to practice the three hegemons. Taijutsu and swordsmanship can be practiced together. In my opinion, Devil Fruit does not need any powerful fruit at all. You can choose to eat it or not. Devil Fruit is just a regular type. It is used to assist. In my opinion, it is the first fruit. This ability can defeat the One Piece world view from beginning to end. Ninety-nine point nine percent of people, As long as there are no accidents, there will be no accidents. The protagonist eats the phantom beast species and has to practice the three domineering skills, physical skills and sword skills Human dragon form + physical skills + tyrannical entanglement + sword skills, flying, slashing, entangling, overlord color and armed color plus the phantom beast species flame ability, to unleash the strongest attack →_→ That's it?

The navy is written the same as the pirates. .

Don't tell me that Qian Lexia is a time traveler? ?

Can this Chamberlain score 100 points in a single game?

The name of the protagonist makes people feel uncomfortable and affects their desire to read.

The name is a bit of a joke. A pirate who plays basketball and knows how to use a hammer might as well be called Zhang Wei.

Are there any fans of common species of animals?

If domineering is the standard, white-bearded Kaido's mother is the main fruit, Roger and red hair are the main sword skills, Kapu Zefa is the main skill, and the three generals are the main fruits. There has never been a strong man who can shoulder the fruit physical swordsmanship. Nowadays, pirate novels seem to be written as if the main character is not complete. I hope the author will stop writing like this. It is really boring, just like cultivating immortals must be good at formations, alchemy, and weapon refining. It makes me vomit.

Two words, good, good style. New type.

This is peace for our time (British Prime Minister Chamberlain)

The author's next pirate novel can be more bold. For example, the protagonist's baby is born in time travel. The father is either a billionaire pirate or a noble of the kingdom or a rear admiral and his intelligence and qualifications are improved by the age of three. Started to practice life return Mastered the three hegemons and taijutsu swordsmanship at the age of five Precognition of the tyrant Sakura at the age of seven Shichibukai level at the age of nine Vice Emperor level at the age of twelve Yonko level at the age of fifteen Invincible pirate world at the age of eighteen

The latest information makes people sigh that Vegapunk is really awesome. If he is captured and hidden, he will be able to fight against the World Government sooner or later.

Qianxia Le's prototype Haibara Ai! ! ?

If you eat the second fruit, you need the green cow fruit. It can be elementalized to absorb nutrients and then developed to achieve photosynthesis during the day and immortality.