Cultivation: I Became an Immortal's Virtual Dao Companion

This book is also called, Neptune Simulator

I feel that the pace of the book is a bit strange, perhaps because it is delivered once a day, and high-end goods are delivered. It is only a few days in the book, and the protagonist has already collected a lot of things. However, I basically can't digest so many things in one day in the book. For example, a primary essence seems to have not been used at the beginning. Of course, it may also be that I am not careful in reading; for example, in the cave, it took two days to pick up the goods. This caused me to read this book and feel that it was very compact and confusing. There were obviously many things that were left unfinished before entering the next plot, and then the previous events would be interspersed with the subsequent plots. Personally, I feel that if this is not handled well, it may collapse in the later stage, especially when more and more clouds are raised in the later stage. In my opinion, either you need to give some gifts that don't consume the protagonist's daily time, or you need to upgrade the system or the game. The subject matter of this book is really interesting, and I hope I can continue writing it smoothly.

As a Shennong who has experienced hundreds of poisons (poison resistance is very strong), I can tell you responsibly that although this book is slightly illogical, it is worth reading compared to other books 🙂. I hope the author will update it soon and stop being a eunuch.

One of the rules of the game is that if the favorability level is less than 90, you cannot reveal your identity as a cloud breeder, but you will find out this information when you go to Wanbao Tower to check. I don't know what the author is going to write next. After all, the protagonist now wants to know the identity of the cloud breeder so that he can waste the money of the game together.

It doesn't matter if the charm is greatly improved at the beginning, but a numerical critical hit will make it a bit blue and slim. An ordinary standard suddenly turns into an immortal appearance, and the appearance changes too much. If the heart is darker, the protagonist will be suspected of having some adventure and then be targeted. The total is 5500, and almost all the charms are spent on various choices. What kind of good-looking dog is this?

The subject matter is quite interesting, the layout is too small, the cloud support system. For such a small sect, the foundation is the elder's low-end sect. Why do you arrange so many people? Are the same sect still called Yunyang? The whole point is particularly interesting for sects located far away. What you wrote seems less and less novel the more I read it. You've changed your mind.

I have three things to say: 1. The third chapter doesn't feel like it's well grasped. 2. When describing a person's appearance, sometimes you can first write about the reaction of the person you see. For example, the simplest thing is that the eyes light up, like white skin, beauty, and long legs, but they look dry (of course, this supporting role does not need to be described in detail, this description is enough). The main thing I want to complain about is the protagonist's fairy appearance. The author has definitely not seen in real life. Women who make people feel beautiful at a glance are amazing at most, let alone men. Having said that, the important thing about Xian is ethereal, which means that Xianzi only needs a few simple outlines, and the rest is left to the reader to figure out through the reactions of the supporting characters. When the protagonist and the supporting character meet, it can also be written that the supporting character loses consciousness after seeing the appearance of the protagonist, and has some thoughts and feelings in her heart. It is not until the protagonist waves in front of her and calls her name that she comes back to her senses. This effect is better than the supporting character directly asking why you are so handsome. I personally think it is better. . Of course, I'm not saying that it can only be written this way, but the original text makes this extremely valuable fairy figure very weak. . If this is foreshadowing, just pretend that I didn't say it. If not, I suggest that the protagonist be too weak and directly adding the fairy posture will lead to disaster. As the strength increases, the effect of the fairy posture will be gradually released, otherwise the fairy posture will be too overwhelming. 3. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't be a eunuch. This is my first time writing a long comment, please don't scold me if there are any shortcomings●●

Is this a eunuch? Hey, dog eunuch

For now, it feels very average, the creativity is okay, and the writing is generally readable, but the plot is really average. It's just fun to watch. I suggest you find a job, although you can tell by the number of updates that you should be looking for one.

The worst thing about the setting is that too many male protagonists get something for nothing.