Asking About Immortality Starting from Mortals

Is there a female protagonist? Are there any female supporting characters in Mortals?

I'm just confused, why don't mortals want the heroine to watch the protagonist fight and upgrade throughout the entire later stage? One by one, they don't want the heroine. Have they been eunuchs for a long time?

Does the author know why we don't want to see the heroine? It should be because at least eight of the ten authors can't write emotional dramas, and one can watch it in general, so I don't want a heroine, thank you! I really want a woman, so I suggest you write a pornographic novel to practice and see if it works for you.

With the qualifications of the Three Spiritual Roots, Golden Finger has the ability to grow and take into account both cultivation and farming. Since it can initially absorb spiritual veins from the outside world, it can also absorb spiritual beasts from the outside world, water-based spiritual plants, and inanimate treasures of heaven and earth, such as mineral veins, like the blue crystal mine or the spiritual stone mine. Use the spiritual energy of the spiritual lake to nourish and accelerate the growth of spiritual beasts and mineral veins. Like a spiritual fish fry, a spiritual shrimp fry, a spiritual turtle fry, a spiritual crab fry, and finally a shrimp soldier and a crab general directly transformed into a shrimp, wouldn't it be great for you to be the wild dragon king😁. (Directly accelerate growth in the Spirit Lake space) There are also seeds of aquatic plants, such as Spirit Lotus and Spirit Lotus Root, you can directly come to the aquatic product encyclopedia. The time profile can be changed to, I have a Crystal Palace in my heart. It depends on your settings. As your cultivation level increases, it will eventually become a water-attributed paradise, right? So, the protagonist has to go out from time to time to look for these heavenly materials and earthly treasures to fill the space where the water spirit beads are filled. The premise is that he has enough self-protection to avoid being killed and snatched away. (Going out to hunt for treasures after boring training can also adjust the plot) Although the plot at the beginning is not too amazing, it is quite satisfactory. If you follow this context, you will have no problem getting through the early plot.

I don't want to read it anymore if I write about the incarnation. It will cause me to get frustrated. If I can't master it, I might as well give up. Take a look at how many people who write about incarnations can succeed.

What is missing after all! Cultivation to immortality is a matter of struggle. The author did not describe the cruelty and difficulty of cultivating immortality. The vastness of the world of immortality, the complexity of human nature, the intrigues and intrigues, the various techniques, techniques, secret techniques, magic weapons, magic weapons, spiritual treasures, spiritual materials, and elixirs.

I don't want a heroine. Now when I see a story about a beautiful woman, I immediately become a heroine. It feels like I have never seen a woman before. Very disgusting

I have read many fan novels about mortals cultivating immortality. The first one was to grab the green bottle and trick Han Li into using the small green bottle. Later, when I saw the small green bottle on the ground, I didn't dare to touch it, saying that if I touched it, there would be great terror. I thought about it, it would be very scary if I touched it, so I told the mortals to use the matryoshka doll, and then asked the mortals to make dolls with dozens of layers to get the little green bottle, and threaten the martial arts masters. Let the martial arts masters threaten Han Li's parents, brothers and sisters to get the little green bottle on the ground. If there is a big terror, then these people will die if they touch it. If these people don't die, it means it's not a big deal.

Author, you are reading this book every day. There are too many original plots, and they are all meaningless copies.

Why is there another thunder tribulation? Mortals only have thunder tribulations in the spirit world. The next thunder tribulation will come. In the original work of mortals, Han Li formed elixirs and Nascent Soul did not have thunder tribulations. The spiritual world only has 3,000 major thunder tribulations after becoming a god. It is known as the immortality tribulation.

The functions of the golden finger are too complex. In the early stage, it is best to have only one function like the palm bottle. I have been busy for a long time and there is no plot. I am writing about Goldfinger. In the end, the novel still depends on the plot.

This book is not about immortality, it is about the world of beast control. It is time-consuming and labor-intensive to control beasts in the mortal world. Catching a potential and relatively comprehensive spirit beast and producing its own resources is almost the same, regardless of the spirit beast that cooperates with the protagonist's golden finger. The protagonist in the author's novel insists on raising two, three, four or five. Did the author just come from the Pokemon novel to write this novel? It is inexplicable and poisonous.

Isn't it very good at the front? Why does the writing in the back become more and more watery?

It was said earlier that no one could beat him during the foundation building stage, but within a few shots he was beaten like a dog and ran very fast.

Mortals are all trying to catch up with each other. The only opportunity in the human world is to hold the Sky Vase. Old Devil Han is Da Luo, not Taoist Ancestor. The Taoist Ancestor among mortals is not Hongjun. You did not travel through time to watch anime. You are a cultivator. You can also become a Taoist Ancestor. Maybe you can go home after becoming a Taoist Ancestor. So if there are good things, you must grab them. Think of your relatives.

I still hope that the protagonist will not just be a nanny and meddle in other things, such as the subsequent development of Miaoyinmen, and not be involved in the subsequent development of Miaoyinmen. There are so many fanfics that are so badly written that it hurts to read them. It seems like I can't write without leaving the Wonderful Sound Gate. The author might as well write more copies of the protagonist's own adventures. As big as a mortal

Haha, the rest of this is too confusing. It can explain something clearly in just three or five sentences. Can the author describe a chapter? I'm convinced. Can the language be more concise and clear?

And if you analyze that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, shouldn't the sect competition result in more disadvantages than advantages? Don't you know how rich your net worth is? There is really no need to do this! You are consuming readers' interest in reading in advance, and you are still unable to get to the point. Is it so difficult to choose whether to break through the pill formation stage or directly cut to Han Li and get to the point? It's nothing more than a choice between two!

Everything else is fine and acceptable! It's the writing style, word order and typos that made me frown and affected my reading experience! ! !

I guess that spiritual roots must be a method used by Heaven to control the number of monks and transcendence. Only those with spiritual roots can cultivate immortality, but monks with spiritual roots certainly cannot transcend. If you look at the worlds where spiritual roots are not used for cultivation, there are basically transcendent people, such as the Great Thousand Worlds, The Wild Era, Star Transformation, The Sky Covering Trilogy, etc.

Opinion Building, if you have any ideas and suggestions, you can put forward them here.

Seeking refinement

Boss, let me show you this The Lord of the Blessed Land Cave is in the realm of refining Qi, refining Qi to become God, refining God to return to the void, and refining the void to combine with the Dao In the early stage, the Lord of the Small Thousand World is in the realm of earthly immortals In the mid-term, the Lord of the Small Thousand World is in the realm of heavenly immortals In the later period, the master of the small thousand worlds is in the realm of true immortals In the early stage, the master of the middle thousand worlds is in the realm of xuanxian In the middle period, the master of the middle thousand worlds is in the realm of golden immortals In the later stage, the master of the Middle Thousand World is the realm of Taiyi Golden Immortal (the Small Thousand World and the Middle Thousand World cannot exist independently in the Chaos World. The violent energy of chaos in the Chaos World can easily destroy the Small Thousand World and the Middle Thousand World. They can only be used as subsidiary worlds of the Big Thousand World. Those that exist in the Big Thousand World In the inner chaotic world shrouded by the world barrier, there is the power of the consciousness of the great thousand worlds to suppress it. The chaotic energy in the inner chaotic world is not as violent as the chaotic energy in the outer chaotic world. Only the small thousand worlds and the middle thousand worlds can withstand and transform it into useful materials.) In the early stage of the Great Thousand World, the consciousness of the world was promoted to the way of heaven, and the sun, moon and other stars in the sky evolved. It was separated from the attached Great Thousand World and independent of the outer chaotic world. The Great Thousand World in the middle period is the world that gave birth to the thirty-third heaven. The master of the world at this time is the realm of Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. The Great Thousand World in the later period is a world with six paths of reincarnation. The world at this time is a complete Great Thousand World, and the master of the world at this time is the realm of Hunyuan Wujiluo Jinxian.

When we arrived in the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars, we kept writing about ruins and adventures, and the clones were superfluous. The plot was incoherent and inexplicable There were also many typos, including calling the demon core. Has the author really read the original work?