Looking for the Way to the Heavens

Water, jumping to see. Typos messed up the plot, and there was no follow-up to the character's younger sister. This can be understood by a novice author. Slightly poisonous, please be careful when entering the trap

It's a pity that when I read "Join Yuan Shao's Camp" I no longer had the desire to read it. First of all, regardless of ancient and modern times, when a person sees that the fate of another person is death, he will not consider joining his camp, unless he is a blood relative. Seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages is the nature of every scholar, and it is also the way of thinking of modern people. You actually chose to join just for the ultimate luck... Short-sighted! Secondly, does Yuan Shao's demise really have no impact on you? Not quite! Yuan Shao is destroyed and you still want to be a prince? You think too much... In fact, I have a lot to say, but I always say something wrong and stop saying it. In short, joining Yuan Shao's camp will ruin this book. Even if there are so many comments saying it is a running account, I still have the desire to read it! But... After joining Yuan Shao, I can't stand it anymore!

The introduction of Goldfinger is awesome, but the actual application is garbage.

The writing is good and the updates are relatively stable. It is a good book. I recommend everyone to read it 😁

Since there is a theory of luck, the pigs' feet that worship others as their lord should also be gathered on Yuan Shao's head. Xu Shao commented that the author has the qualifications of a prince, Yuan Shao would not care about it, laughed, and was inconsistent.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style feels a bit poor, which makes people have no desire to continue reading.

Come on, come on, wait, don't be in a hurry.

Everything else about this book is okay, but there is a "young" feeling between the lines, and the protagonist doesn't look like an adult.

If you want to know what kind of character and ambition the protagonist has, you expect the hero to have a scheming character. Nowadays, everyone likes to see a character whose character is fixed as soon as he appears. Who would watch that kind of growth character?

Replenish your health, the little guy has been a little weak lately.

After reading the 55th picture, I asked: Who is the protagonist going to defect to? Whose 🐶 is it? ? ? ?

Since it is Zhutianliu, I can tell some things after reading so many Zhutian books. At first, I looked at movies and TV shows or movie novels. Because they were written too much, many of them no longer had any appeal. Therefore, the worlds you choose to travel to at the beginning must be chosen carefully. Also, you need to write an outline again, otherwise it will be easy to write in a mess, thinking about where to write. Zhu Tianliu gradually becomes stronger. This is the most important and exciting point. The process of becoming stronger must be careful. Determine the world in which you want the protagonist to become stronger. Do not change the world you have decided to become stronger just because you have added a world recommended by readers. Another exciting point is naturally the involvement of plot characters, etc. This is where the author's writing skills are tested the most. The characterization and plot development depend on the author's imagination. You also need to grasp the scale well. I have watched several hodgepodge movies, the kind where one plot starts and then other plots are slowly added. In the end, I only read one book, and I skipped it. So if you can have one world, try not to do two-in-one. Of course, if you have the strength, pretend I didn't say it. That's all I'm thinking about now.

This is the first time I have seen Zhutian write something so boring and boring, just like keeping a running account.

Writer, I support you, as long as you don't fail

The core of the world of high martial arts is force, everything else is nonsense...

The author must be a newbie, and his writing ideas are very immature. Let's just talk about the first Republic of China world. At the beginning, he wanted to write about a sister, but after two chapters, he basically disappeared. Later, when the world was over, he added it to the extra chapter. I guess he forgot about this person and forgot to write it, so he made up for it. Then he said that he would do great things for the country and the people, but he was basically just making soy sauce. Finally, the positioning of the protagonist is not clear. As a disciple of an aristocratic family, he usually follows a literary path, which seems normal. However, in the world of the Republic of China, he basically didn't read many books. You didn't have so many books in the main world of the Three Kingdoms. Why didn't you read more books to enrich yourself in the Republic of China? The writing on martial arts training is also very rough.

I just saw that chapter and decided to go out. With the help of luck cultivation, I have the luck of being a prince. What force can I get more luck from joining than becoming the leader of the force? As for being the leader of a force, how much will it affect your cultivation speed? As a leader of a force with the blessing of luck and the ability to travel through the heavens, can you be slower? Will it affect the speed of cultivation? Not to mention taking off. Besides, how much more resources can you get by relying on the resources rewarded by others than by becoming the master of power? Top resource people don't need it? Give you a reward for a wage earner who doesn't want to work hard for others, but just wants to practice peace of mind? Dreaming!

The novel should be a narrative, but this is obviously an expository essay or an argumentative essay. The author himself keeps saying that there is no storyline and character dialogue, or there is very little storyline and character dialogue, which makes it boring to read.

I don't know what state you are in after you have entered Xiantian, and the traces of "Rise of the Heavens" are very big, but you are far from being as good as it. Are you better than others and weaker than others?

Kung Fu is a world of internal strength, and if I try to write it into a system of Chinese martial arts for you, I'm speechless.

I followed the literary path and went to the Republic of China to practice Ma Zhe directly. Why not start my own line 🤭

Is this a eunuchl

I heard that the whole order comes with extra fines (Qian Mimi adds one)

You looked like a eunuch on the first day?

Just read a few chapters of Soul Transmigration and try to keep it to a minimum.

When will it be updated

Practicing exercises invented by others, (this behavior is really good) Do you know why Chinese people have their own cars, mobile phones and computers? The things they use are all other people's. Others say that if your mobile phone stops, it will crash immediately, including the computer (once a war starts, all your mobile phones and computers will stop in your hand). How can it be troublesome to give some advice (it is still a magic way to practice other people's exercises. I will directly give you the hidden dangers of the exercises and the perceived location, you can just say how you want to do it)

Cell phones are not allowed in the military, and this is also true in boot camps. Russian officials are not allowed to bring mobile phones to meetings because there are monitoring apps and positioning. (That's why I'm madly complaining, is it really true to practice other people's skills or magic skills) The most important thing for the protagonist to develop now is to choose. The skills that consume the most resources require specific things to practice, rather than using space things to practice elixirs.

Only then did I realize that I was dying 😰