I'm a Ninja, Not a Pirate

I don't know what the protagonist wants to do. Whether he is traveling freely or competing for hegemony, individual and team strength are indispensable. But in terms of "strength", they are high and low in ability. Yamato also let go. According to the setting and configuration of the protagonist, let alone a hero or a king, he must have some personality charm, right? As a result, it neither has the skill and quality of a ninja to analyze intelligence step by step, nor the enthusiasm and boldness of a pirate, who is free and unrestrained in his pleasure and revenge. The writing is really boring!

Words have power. So many exclamation points made me tired and couldn't read any more.

Slow heat = not good-looking in the early stage, not good-looking in the early stage = don't want to watch it

Another "Save Ace" book? I hope Ace will die soon. I used to enjoy reading "Ace", but now I have read too many "Save Ace" novels and it's really uninteresting. I even resent having Ace alive,

Is it possible to absorb the taste of Haibuki? Since it is about the fusion of different world views, I will compare them. The most direct way to compare combat power is to see the pitfalls. The strongest pirate right now is the City Blast. The strongest Naruto is Blast Star. The magnitudes are different. Can sea blowing remove the smell?

I was shocked again. Meeting Ace was like meeting my father. How can so many people like a scumbag who has money to eat but doesn't give him any money? Fortunately, many people like him as a father.

I found that many people don't know that chakra is not given by the sacred tree. Boruto has given a more detailed setting. The Ten-Tails is just a seed. It is planted on the planet to absorb the chakra of all life. In other words, all creatures on the planet have chakra, but they can't use it. It's not surprising that pirates can learn to use chakra.

As far as I'm concerned, not being able to learn domineering is the biggest drawback of this book. I immediately abandoned it when I saw that.

The contrast in combat power between Naruto and Pirates is obvious, I don't know what's there to argue about. Only the leader of the Hokage has reached the level of a pirate general, the other shadows are only at the level of a lieutenant general, and the six paths are one level higher than a general. As for Naruto's "Explosive Star" placed on the ground, it would only be weak to continental level at best. And Naruto's planet is indeed much smaller than Pirates' planet.

Is Ace the most beautiful woman in the world? I want to save him as a human being, but the fanfics about rescuing Ace can basically be ignored. The navy catches pirates and executes pirates. It is absolutely natural. A time traveler has to save him, so why not save Orochi? Not going to save the Celestial Dragons? Did the time traveler's brain get eaten by a dog? Is it possible that criminals are being shot in China now, and then the author wants to rob the execution ground?

It's outrageous that pirates can refine chakra. Only those who have chakra divided by the Sage of Six Paths or are descendants can do it. Otherwise, there wouldn't be so many ordinary people.

According to the rules of the world, it is impossible for people in the pirate world to learn chakra, and it is impossible for people in the Naruto world to learn Haki. The essence of chakra is the combination of spiritual and physical vitality, and Haki is also the combination of spiritual will and physical strength. Three-color domineering requires not only physical strength, but also mental and will blessings. The ingredients are the same, but the results are different. This is the rule of the world. Just treat it as a joke if you mix the two worlds.

Is the Eternal Eye so rubbish? ? ? Even Sasuke's eternal eyes don't bleed with a pupil technique like yours.

Sorry, it's Ace again. Is Ace the biological father of every protagonist in One Piece? Or is it Whitebeard? If you don't want to go to the war, just don't go. Damn, you have nothing to do with it. You have to go to the war to join in the fun. What's wrong, do you really think Ace is a good person? He is a pirate. Do you think he has never killed ordinary people or stolen anything? The Whitebeard Pirates themselves are not clean. Among the Yonko, the red-haired ones are slightly better, but they are not much clean. The Whitebeard Pirates have definitely done a lot of burning, killing and looting. Do they really regard pirates as explorers?

Author, are you writing about ninjas? Author, I hope you will find out the role of the protagonist. The protagonist is not Naruto, not a ninja like Naruto. How can a ninja like Naruto survive on the battlefield without cheats? The protagonist should be a traditional ninja in the world of Naruto, not a shouting funny boy, not a hot-blooded boy. Your initial setting for the protagonist in the first chapter determines that the protagonist cannot be funny. Which traditional ninja in the world of Naruto is like the protagonist? Could the protagonist have some depth? The protagonist should feel like a person like Uchiha Kakashi. Can you imagine Kakashi traveling through time as a pirate and becoming Naruto? Can you accept it?

I have read about thirty chapters so far, First, Pigfoot has been in Naruto for more than 20 years, and he is over 40 years old in his previous life. But I really want to complain about the author's characterization. What kind of world is the early and middle stages of Naruto, and why does Pigfoot have such a character? I can't see any of Pigfoot's elements and decisiveness as a ninja, and he is also an Uchiha with a kaleidoscope. Are his actions and dialogues so bland? Second, in terms of combat, really, you are a strong Uchiha man with kaleidoscope, you have been in Hokage for so long, how do you still have to adjust your mentality when you travel to Pirates? Doesn't being the number one ninja mean gathering intelligence? And in terms of fighting, wow, wow, a Uchiha who can fly thunder, and can water escape and illusions, even if he is seriously injured and has not recovered, is it so difficult to beat Ace? Doesn't the author know that water escape in a place like the sea doesn't consume much chakra? ? Why is there a tie? Just add water and illusion to fight back? Third, I'm sorry, I forgot, it's a pig's foot with the Eternal Kaleidoscope turned on. Ah, I'm so confused. I can fly the God of Thunder and have the Eternal Kaleidoscope. Can the force level be higher? Even if I can't defeat the three generals of the Yonko, it's no problem to run away. Can I just wander around? Can the force level be higher?

If you see Chakra teaching and have any questions about Haki, I'll see you soon.

Can you give the Kozuki family a good ending? The requirements are not high, just die for the country 😏

I have caught up with the latest chapter and would like to briefly comment on it. If the total evaluation score is up to 5 points, I personally can give this book a score. It is currently between 3.5 And 4 points. It has the potential to become a high-quality fan novel. Next, let me talk about my current views on this book in detail: ① I personally think that the most lovable thing about this book is the protagonist. While he has strength, he has a clear self-awareness and is not blindly arrogant or pretending to be meaningless. This actually reflects the author's writing level. I like it very much, it's great. ②The current development of the entire plot, from Wano Country to the Spade Pirates, to the plot with certain contacts with the four emperors, and finally to the latest chapter to become the world's number one bounty hunter. I personally think that the development of the entire plot is relatively smooth and reasonable, which is actually commendable. At the same time, the author's reverse development path from the New World to the Grand Line, and possibly to the Four Seas in the future is also quite innovative. ③At present, although there are some self-designed by the author, overall it is relatively reasonable and does not seem to be inconsistent. Then, the portrayal of the characters in the original work does not go too far beyond the characters themselves, and is all within the acceptable range. However, the portrayal of the protagonist is actually a little weak. I only know that the author is an Uchiha genius. He became the god of death in the ninja world. Then he practiced the flying thunder god and had an accident and traveled to the world of pirates. Apart from the identity of the ninja, I feel that there are no other profound memories left. This aspect still needs to be strengthened. There is not much left. There are not many words and chapters at present, and there is no way to give more comments. It seems that the author's updates are not particularly powerful. Please give the author more encouragement.

According to the setting in this book, if you have chakra, you cannot have haki. Chakra and haki come from your own energy. According to this setting, the damage of the chakra attack to the natural system can definitely be compared with the armed color haki. It feels that it really weakens the main character's chakra damage, and it is still at the movie level.

It's a complete replay of Luffy's journey. Except that he didn't go to Dressrosa, the journey is basically the same, except for the details.

There is no comparison between the comic worlds with different power systems. Some of the Kagebukis belittle the pirates. I just want to ask the Hokage, who can stand up to the Thunder Gossip that Kaido dominates? Master the power of knowledge and color to predict the future. What ninjutsu did you use to defeat Kaido? The Great Swordsman, the great general of the Four Emperors, blew up a mountain with a single blow. Can you, the Third Raikage, break through Big Mom's defense with your single-handedness? There's nothing to brag about in your Otsutsuki manga. When it comes to exploding stars, which star did you explode? The real thing used to destroy the planet is that the sacred tree they planted has half a cent to do with their own abilities. The moon that Naruto exploded was artificial. The blind general of the pirates also saw and heard Haki through the atmosphere and used gravity. The meteorite hit you, Naruto. It is estimated that half of the planet is gone in the mini map. This is not the kind of meteorite summoned in mid-air by Madara. Besides, there are so many Devil Fruits in the One Piece rule system. For example, if Garp eats the Childlike Fruit, you should know how outrageous it would be. The ancient weapons of Imrocus have not appeared. How do you know that they are not as good as Otsutsuki? Will Pluto's one shot be inferior to the Ten-Tails' one? Naruto is finished but Pirates is not finished yet. Of course, I am not saying that pirates are definitely better than Naruto. The above are just some examples. Reading the chapter reviews of the novel, I was really disgusted by some of the comments about the shadow. Again, different power systems cannot be compared. Devil Fruit may not be effective in worlds other than Pirates. Naruto's chakra is due to the power generated by the Chakra Fruit planted by Otsutsuki. It does not exist in other worlds! As long as the novel can be written and read, it can be regarded as the system has modified the world rules, and there is really no need to compare the cross-combat power.

It's really not fun at all, bearing the name of Uchiha in vain

Naruto has a lower limit and a higher upper limit, while Pirates has a lower limit and a lower upper limit.

Don't you mean asking for leave? A eunuch?

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You can't learn Haki, and you can't use chakra to elementalize it. This is basically useless. There is no need to watch it at all.

The reason why Naruto can't defeat the pirates is that his regular combat power is almost the same. The reason is very simple. To put it bluntly, ninjas are assassin types with high attack, low defense, high dodge and low battery life. In the world of pirates, high attack, high defense, high dodge and generally high battery life are magic warrior types. As long as they don't run away, as long as they don't crush them, they can kill instantly. In the last hour, the Hokage had to kneel down and call daddy. Except for a few of the third generation Raikage people who remember it, the two heroes of the ninja world are hexagonal warriors who can beat the generals and the four emperors. Therefore, the gap between the two heroes of the Naruto world and others is one god and one person. Pirates do not have this kind of gap in combat power.

It's too toxic. All kinds of interpersonal relationships are still handled in the same way they were written ten years ago.

It's interesting, relaxing, enjoyable, and rational. It's much better than those mindless systematic articles! ! ! Quite the author!