Elf: Start as a Gym Apprentice

I'm still watching, I haven't read the book, I'm just reading the book review section. If you write about how the ice system is weak, you basically have to make up the operations based on reality and play them normally. . . I prefer Ivory Pig, Ice Ghost Protector, Blizzard King, Manula, Spiny Shell, and Ice Rock Monster.

The plot in Nibi City is a bit unacceptable. Even though he knew that Nibi Gym upgraded the rewards because he wanted to get married, and he didn't force you to get married after winning the first place, the protagonist still took the rewards, wiped his ass and left, offending a gym for an egg. The protagonist's teacher doesn't know why, but he actually supports it. He's so unruly in a circle and wants to be promoted to the official gym? I won't take you to play at all.

The author doesn't want the protagonist to be too bitchy. Women will only affect the protagonist's speed in training elves.

I stopped reading after reading a few chapters. The main thing at the beginning was that it didn't make sense. A shabby orphanage has such strong combat power and does good deeds for free. People are selfish and will cultivate anyone they pick up at random. If you say that the protagonist is particularly good and the treatment is okay, and there are a bunch of people to select the elf, then there is no need to write about how much money the Yusan family has to pay. In most elf literature, elf cultivation has to be obtained by completing tasks, selling elf, black market treasure hunting, etc. This identity is not as reasonable as the identity of a family child. After all, Orphan has seen too much in the beginning. When you look at it this way, you're more confused.

Character building! After successfully signing the contract, I will definitely have to write carefully in the follow-up. Hundreds of elves, I estimate that writing them will become an assembly line project later, so I ask all readers to help me. You can set your favorite characters and add elves. If it makes sense, then I will definitely adopt it. Of course, you can also make some villains if you want. The template is as follows: Name of person (family background may or may not be written) General personality Elf, you can write more. You can also write down any tactical combinations, and there is a high probability that they will be adopted. If possible, try to choose elves from the four regions of Kanto, Johto, Fengyuan, and Sinnoh. There won't be too many people in other regions.

I can't stand it. I don't feel much about the plot. I can only say that it's okay. Except for the author's thoughtfulness in posting pictures, there are no other advantages. Moreover, the writing is too white and the dialogue is not smooth. It's awkward to have three rooms and one living room. Hey, the guy who eats still needs to upgrade.

The ice specialization is really difficult to play. The only mega hands are Blizzard King and Ice Ghost Guard z moves are not very useful z The weather hand is Blizzard King, Kyuubi, Ice and Snow Dragon, Duo Duo Bing. The more useful ones are Kyuubi and Blizzard King There are not many auxiliary hands. , The most suitable one is the ice-falling doll But the advantage is that there are many second-level gods, and in the later stage, the second-level gods will be equipped with faces, frozen birds, ice pillars, and snow blasting horses Also, there should be less repeated explanations and more paragraphs. Too much text in one paragraph looks really uncomfortable, so one sentence is best.

I really haven't read the ice type. Some novels are about the insect type (the writing is really good, I forgot which novel), some are about the poison type, some are about the water type, and some are about the ground type, rock type, flying type, and dragon type. First time watching ice series

A place like an orphanage can give you a dragon ride? ? ? ? ?

There are 6,000 words per day. If you like reading books, please spend a little time. Turn the pages to the end, just to let me know that someone will read it. If it can be recommended, as long as there is nothing at home, I will try my best to write 10,000 words a day.

Author, aren't you the tomato next door? Why did you come here and rebel?

Mahuola

I feel that the world view and framework of this book are very complete, and the elves' step-by-step iconic improvement in strength is well described. But when it comes to elf novels, the description of the protagonist elf usually accounts for most of it. When the author describes it, I don't even remember the personality of the protagonist elf. I only know that he has good talent and high strength. Without it, the flesh and blood will not be enough. It just lacks some flavor, (´ー`)y━~~

Lots of typos, affecting reading

The elf novels are written as fantasy novels, and the various world views and routines are also fantasy ones. I suggest you, the author, take a look at how other people write elf novels.

This is the second one, and it can be considered a fast human shield

Why don't you keep updating? It's very good. I've watched it three times 😍