Seeking the Dao Through a Corpse

Strange. . . . .

Let me tell you some of my thoughts on this book. I was attracted by the unconventional beginning of this book. For a protagonist with a zombie-like body, how many novel stories can be told! But when I saw this, I was disappointed, or the subsequent plot did not meet my expectations. I had a feeling that I was constantly changing the map, but it was not like in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and the Legend of the Master, where I changed the map and moved forward to a higher level. Instead, I felt that I could not continue writing, so I started to change the map frequently. It seems as if the protagonist has been wandering, with nothing he wants to do, no goals to work hard for, and no goals to achieve; this makes me see everything full of confusion, and I am annoyed that I have to start another line before halfway through one line. A rake in the east and a hammer in the west, from Tianqingmen to Xuanyue's house to the Demon Flame Sect, it was too scattered. Halfway through the plot, I ran to open the fog, and then ran back to open the fog again. To be honest, it was really torture. Finally, the protagonist is awesome and has a lot of trump cards for dual-line immortal cultivation. However, he has to pretend to be low-key and go back to Xuanyang Sect to open another map. A lot of foreshadowing was completely ignored. I am really speechless and choked. The new chapter continues the previous routine and continues to keep a low profile. It has reached 1.41 Million words and is still writing about the conspiracy and calculations during the Qi training period. Readers don't need time. Is the depression too much? Hello? ! Wake up, author, you will force us to give up! What are you writing about? Cultivation is not like cultivating an immortal. There are no clear footprints. The protagonist's strength fluctuates and the progress is extremely slow. It is not fantasy. Isn't the purpose of the protagonist to become a living person? Isn't it even mentioned now? Since you want to find a way out of the corpse, shouldn't you contact them more and let the protagonist realize his wish as his cultivation level increases? So I would rather you stop updating for a few days to sort out the outline, fill in the flesh, and strengthen the backbone, than be unable to swallow it and let this book continue to sink.

Dear book friends, because the performance of this book is so bad that I can't even get perfect attendance this month, I made a careful decision: Change the title of the book! The original name of this book: The Path of the Dead. Being audited to death. Take a look at the review: Yo! You want to drive, you think I can't see it, Yin Shi said, what is the word you removed in the middle? Damn it! Then I had no choice but to change it to "The Taoist Exorcist", and later changed it to "The Taoist Exorcist". Frequently changing the name is actually a taboo. Fortunately, the exposure of this book is very poor. Taking advantage of the fact that it is very young with only 770,000 words, I will change the title one last time before taking off. This book has been renamed "Searching for the Corpse". This book friend helped me get it. This name is very good. The corpse is looking for a way, the corpse is looking for a way. How can he find the way without his body? This name is very good, and it is very appropriate to the content of the novel. Chapter 1 is about dead people, Chapter 2 is about corpses, each chapter is exciting. I plan to write 10 million words for this book. Only when two conditions are met at the same time will a eunuch become a eunuch. First, I have a breakdown in writing. I can't write, I can't feel, I can't feel, and I don't want to write anymore. Secondly, I no longer wanted to write, so I relied on the backend and had no money. I don't want to write, and I have no money. If these novels don't torture me anymore, I will have a ghost if I don't write them. New book, new name, new voyage. I hope I can get perfect attendance next month.

After reading it, I feel that the setting is good, but I always feel that the novel has some shortcomings and is not satisfactory, so I would like to express my simple suggestions: I suggest that the author write down the expressions and demeanor of the supporting characters and protagonists. Without their expressions and demeanor reactions during the dialogue, it will be difficult to reflect the psychology of the characters' communication and interaction, and it will also make the readers unable to feel happy. For example, when the protagonist appeared in front of people carrying a corpse, their expressions were not written, which could not highlight the horror of the protagonist. When several five-spirited wastes screamed against the sky, the author only wrote their words, and could also add their actions and expressions, such as madness flashing in their eyes. Also, I feel that the author's storyline is a bit too hasty. He could add some descriptions of the environment in the middle to heighten the atmosphere and give readers space to relax. Also, the psychological description of the supporting characters feels a bit lacking. For example, what was Zhao Yan's psychology like when he betrayed the protagonist at the beginning, or the author could write a prelude to his upcoming betrayal. In short, it feels like the author's description of the characters has nothing but dialogue, which seems a bit stiff. Finally, I suggest the author take a look at what the writers at the top of Qidian's monthly voting list have written. That's all I said, it only represents my personal opinion. After reading the author's book, I felt that the subject matter was novel and more to my liking. However, because I have been reading for many years, it is easy for me to get into trouble, so I felt a little regretful if I didn't read it, so I wrote this for the author.

Is it a harem? I don't really like harems. Can anyone give me an answer?

A rational evaluation shows that the subject matter is very novel, but it also has many shortcomings. The pinnacle of this book should be when the wife is killed and the truth is revealed. At this time, the main plot is clear and the protagonist's goal is clear. There are two main shortcomings. On the one hand, it is science + fantasy-style cultivation of immortality. It introduces elements such as zombies, cells, and tissue fluid, and mixes it with fantasy settings. It can be called a hodgepodge. This requires exquisite and reasonable narrative connection. In particular, these systems have problems with different logics. The explanation is far-fetched and seems awkward. The design of the protagonist's resurrection from death is very good. , It's a pity that the writing and description cannot keep up with the idea, and of course very few can write it well; on the other hand, there are plot and character settings. For example, Wang Dahu is a big poisonous point. As an experimental subject, he is alive and kicking, mixed with some spoof elements, affecting the reader's perception. There are also recent Teacher Ma memes, just quote them, and use them over and over again just for fun.

This chapter is really extremely poisonous. How can something like the method of seizing a body, which is condemned by the whole world, be taught so easily to others? It was outrageous enough for the old man to pass it on to him, and it was even more outrageous for the protagonist to pass it on to this woman so hastily. He simply didn't know how to write the word "death". If the protagonist of this plot is a Nascent Soul cultivator, it would just be a little inappropriate. But the protagonist is a qi practitioner, so he is really not afraid of his soul being destroyed? Don't you have any idea whether that woman is trustworthy or not? If this kind of plot happens again, I will have to abandon the book.

This woman is pure and disgusting She has indeed created a selfish image. She is successful and makes people feel angry at the same time.

How is this book? Does the main character have an IQ?

I didn't want to come here to complain, but I saw the author still quibbling. At what settings should we start? It is set that the protagonist was betrayed and became a fierce ghost. Why is he so tolerant of Zheng Bing's betrayal? The completion is inconsistent and inconsistent. I won't let you kill everyone. Let's keep grudges clear.