The Realms: A Real-Person Game

Brother, your forte is writing harem stories. If your Gu Master hadn't lost the harem core later on, your grades wouldn't have been so poor.

Damn! I've already stepped on a landmine the first time I've written about the myriad realms. Apparently, the game doesn't allow it, so I have to revise it one by one. I don't know if the reviewers will approve it.

It's a pity that *The Wild Boar Chronicles* wasn't more popular. It has a unique style, an unconventional plot, and vivid character portrayals. However, the storyline is too loose, lacking a main plot, and jumps around haphazardly. Such a good book didn't become a hit.

There's absolutely no buzz 😥, but the author is quite hardworking, so hopefully it will turn out well.

Just a small suggestion: could the progress bar be formatted as "5/10"? The "10/5" format looks really strange; it's different from the structure of other games and novels 😖. The numerator is the current quantity, and the denominator is the total quantity.

I feel like I shouldn't have written a purely data-driven approach. Data is not only difficult to control, but it also lacks immersion. The code seemed well-written, but seeing that health bar—how much health is lost with each shot?—Just pulled me out of the story. The data was too explicit, leaving no room for the reader's imagination. I feel like we don't need to be so precise.

Tipping your own author? (◦˙▽˙◦)

The author is a dark harem writer, and now she's become a saint, it's pointless.

Seeing him alive, one desires his death; hearing of his life, one wishes to take his life.

Could you please provide an outline for Lord of Tranquility? It's so frustrating reading only half of it.