The Realms: A Real-Person Game

Brother, your strong point is writing about the harem. If your Gu master hadn't lost the core of the harem later, you wouldn't have poor grades.

Depend on! The first time I wrote Zhutian, I was disappointed. It turned out that the game did not allow writing, so I had to change it one by one. I didn't know if the reviewer would pass it.

It's a pity that "Wild Boar" has a unique style, the plot is not unconventional, and the character descriptions are also very vivid. It's just that the plot is too loose, there is no main line, there is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. Such a good book is not popular.

It's not popular at all 😥. The key author is working hard. I hope there will be good results.

I would like to make a small suggestion, can the progress bar be written in the form of 5/10? This form of 10/5 looks very strange, and it is different from the structure of other games and novels 😖, That is, the numerator is the current amount, and the denominator is the total amount.

I feel like I shouldn't write about pure data flow. Not only is the data difficult to control, but I don't feel immersed in it when I look at it. I feel like the writing is pretty good, but when I see the health bar, how much blood do I lose with one shot? I feel that it is a drama, the data is too clear, and there is no room for other people's imagination I feel that there is no need to write so accurately to remove the health bar, so we have room for imagination, otherwise it will always feel like the health bar is bright, and the boss will be killed by grinding in the future Isn't it good to change the health bar to a state? Health, disability, disability, excitement. Isn't it good to stay on a sunny day 😌

Reward your own authors? (◦˙▽˙◦)

The author is a dark harem writer, and now she has become a holy mother. It's boring.

If you see it alive, you want it to die; if you hear it live, you want to take its life.

Can you please post a synopsis of Lord of Serenity? It's so uncomfortable to read half of it.