The Magic Machine Is Slow to Sell, Please Help Us

Haha, I suddenly thought of a funny point. You include Chang'e in this novel. Chang'e plays poker with Hou Yi in another novel. There are also Chang'e heroines in other novels. Detailed debate: Are you recruiting Chang'e? Or is Chang'e raising fish?

All the ideas are good, and so is the author's writing. The layout is just too small. The protagonist always thinks about doing monopoly business and wants to do everything by himself and his family. This is the fairy world, and there are countless worlds connected below. The number of people is absolutely huge. The protagonist's sect possesses the Chaos Mirror, which is the foundation of its foundation. Others cannot connect the heavens and all realms without such a treasure. Why can I only make my own mobile phone? You can also let other big forces do it. As long as you can not only win over the other party with benefits and make yourself more friends, you can also bundle benefits. You can search for a little patent fee for each mobile phone. If you have ten top-quality spiritual stones for one mobile phone, you can charge one as a patent fee for each mobile phone. This way mobile phones can be popularized faster. And as the upstream, you can collaborate with everyone to set the price, so that there will be no situation of mutual price reduction. The faster mobile phones are launched, the earlier content can be produced. Content is the big deal. If the content is done well, the money spent on selling mobile phones will not even be considered a fraction compared to making the content. If you want to make your business bigger, you cannot exclude any force. The most important thing is to use mobile phones to attract all major forces to create a monopoly. Once you form an alliance, everything in the later stages can be done together. As far as the concept of the protagonist in the book is concerned, his idea of ​​doing business is to kill his peers, and suppress anyone who may become a peer. I don't know how to express this concept. This is the world of cultivation or the world of immortality, not an annoying world where everyone is the same. In this world where strength is respected, if you don't have the strength to challenge the whole world alone, if others attack you in groups, you won't even have a place to complain. There are also some concepts in the book, as if enemies can only be enemies. In any world, interests are important, and it is the same in the fairy world. So why can't enemies become allies? The whole book gave me the feeling of being a petty person, not being generous enough in doing things, and not having long-term goals. You are the Holy Land, so you have enough strength to protect your own interests. Under this premise, we should unite all the top forces to make the cake bigger. Rather than denying others admission and treating others as objects of suppression. The world is so big that you can make any cake. If you don't do it well, the benefits will be endless. But the protagonist is a petty person.

The early stage was good, but Bai Xiaofei was really a failure. If he didn't have those memories, it would be pretty good, but the protagonist is already a time traveler, and here comes another one. It's really not necessary. Anyway, I saw that I couldn't stand it here anymore, so I withdrew.

I feel that the layout is a bit small and the world described is very big. What you write feels very small. I suggest the author to go outside and see more. The world is still very big.

It feels so inconsistent to see the earth bag storage bag. Can you imagine what it would look like when a fairy flies in the sky to carry a bag or cross it? Author, please think about whether this thing can be sold. Others have studied storage bags. Isn't the storage ring just beautiful and convenient? Your handle is a step backwards.

There is a loophole that is the most obvious and runs through the entire article. Because they are immortals, or even powerful people, they may be limited by their thinking and have not thought about exploring these aspects. But once the pig's feet come up with this concept, they can understand it more thoroughly than the pig's feet with a little deduction. Don't doubt the brain computing power of the immortals. We mortals can draw inferences about other cases because of the development of an idea. What about the immortals? He can straighten things out for you. So the biggest flaw is that everyone is reduced to the level of ordinary mortals.

A patent description can be written in 45,000 words, which is really amazing. The more I read it, the more I vomit.

Shen Nong Tested the Poison. I spent 8 days reading this book intermittently. Generally speaking, it is not too big or too toxic, but the quality is not very good either. It can be said that you can basically abandon the book before it is put on the shelf. (Also, it reminds me that the book is unfinished, and the quality has dropped significantly since Chapter 280. , Basically an expansion of the outline without details), this book has gone through several processes, including publishing a fairy tale, being plagiarized, slapped in the face, being beaten by Didi, novels, live broadcasts, Taobao, digital banking (Alipay), games..., It is almost a streamlined operation.

The first failure is that an ordinary person's soul penetrates the body of the Holy Lord of the Immortal Realm. Haha, if you don't say anything else, just say that someone with countless years of memory can praise your quantum entanglement state.

So this show has been taken off the shelves? I only had it for two days, but when I turned around I found it was gone.

Yuelao

The settings are too loopy. At first glance, it looks like a program, but upon closer inspection, it's a bug (it's outrageous that the predecessor was taken away, success is outrageous, and not being discovered is even more outrageous. Is it difficult for you to make a patch for the fusion of two people or the awakening of the true spirit?)

So petty! Have you ever thought that what you are doing is a monopoly! When there is no absolute strength! It is very easy to overturn! What's more, there are nine people who are as powerful as you. If one or two of them join together, they will overwhelm you! By then there will be nothing left! You should unite with several others and hand over the hardware to others! Join them together to make the cake bigger and stronger! You can also make more cakes! Anyway, the core competitiveness is in your own hands! Just like the Internet technology you have in your hands in modern society, it is still the technology from the 1st generation to the current 5G era. Even if other sects have completed all the hardware and software, you can't finish the network technology in your hand! Just the way you write it, the author, would be overturned by a car in a few days in the real world! Xianxia World is faster!

After only reading one or two chapters, I can only say that I am too ignorant, naive and take it for granted. It sounds like that, but in fact, even people in important military and political positions in modern society do not use Apple. The military even has Huawei's customized machines. Why? Safety and confidentiality. Behind your fairy magic is the sky-gazing mirror. Using the fairy magic means showing all the secrets to the sky-gazing mirror. Who else will use it? How much does it cost to be a casual cultivator?

Nothing else to say. A huge loophole. You, a Daluo who is about to attain enlightenment, close the timeline, and become immortal, will your body be taken over by a mortal? ? What kind of immortality do you practice? In what way? "Is it possible that you can reach immortality in one step or ten miles here?" ? . There is also the gold-swallowing beast you contracted with. Others are in a similar realm to you. As a contracted divine beast, that puts a mark on the avenue. Your master has changed. As his contracted beast, you didn't find anything? ? Or do you mean that today's time travelers are more powerful than Da Dao? Directly modify the law of the great road? ?

Never doubt the IQ of a sage. If you give him a book of law, he will beat all the lawyers' associations of ordinary mortals. The luxury goods in the book are on sale! As soon as the concept of waiting is brought up, the Immortal's immediate IQ can immediately deduce everything that a mortal can think of, and everything that is unexpected.

If the author has seen it, please read this comment carefully. I am not slanderous and I am not bragging. I am entirely from the perspective of a bystander. Question: Why can't readers tolerate a small time traveler? Answer: If we really traveled through time and our identity was supreme, then another time traveler would not pay attention to it, let alone target it specifically, and might even try to help. However, when we read novels, we are reading novels after all. We will be involved, but we will not know who we are after reading it. Therefore, as readers, we are third-person bystanders, and we also He is an ordinary person. As an ordinary person, when he discovers that there is another time traveler in this world, he will definitely try his best to hide it and prevent the other party from discovering it. If there is a chance, he will definitely eliminate all hidden dangers. It can be regarded as persecution paranoia. After all, if someone holds a knife, even if it does not hurt you, you will be very careful when passing by you. This has nothing to do with trust, but instinct. Writing novels is for readers, so there are a lot of things to consider, especially the senses of the reader. Here, you can describe the protagonist as a more cautious person, and then kill the time traveler, which will be perfectly achieved. It can also be said that after the other person time traveled, he brought some plug-ins with him, which caused him to temporarily lose his ability. If you can take action, then give the protagonist and the time traveler an extra scene, a friendship scene, and then reach a consensus, this will be much better. I am not criticizing you. I will tell you when I see it and hope the author can improve it. This is my habit when reading novels, unless I encounter the kind of author whose three views are completely at odds, such as praising Tang San and whitewashing Xiao Yan.

It doesn't matter if you come up with an entertainment app or a convenience app. You come up with an app that beats people. Isn't that awesome, kid?

What era is this? Qi Zixiao has been away from this era for a long time

Hey, what should I do if I suddenly become an immortal? The comic is over, what should I do if I am so disappointed?

Didi's beating of people is simply funny. Have you ever thought about how many people it will offend and what the employer can give you? The disparity between benefits and risks is huge.

I remember that the author was very tough, but it ended up being a mess 🙂

Daily poisoning!

It's pretty, but too short.

The senior sister of Zifu Holy Land actually sells fairy magic on the street. Is this a sign of moral decay or a distortion of human nature?

It's a pity that the ending is unfinished. What follows is a fast-forward ending of the outline, condensing hundreds of thousands or millions of contents into a dozen chapters and ending it hastily.

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Are you going to finish the book? The plot of these two chapters has been too blunt recently. The main character, the master, showed his face and was immediately killed by the plot. . .

Is this going to be unfinished or will a new map be opened?

😰So is the author referring to the Internet book? 😐, but this type of book does exist, and it doesn't mean who copied who, I can only say that the ideas are good.