A Reaper in Tokyo

How come the time traveled two years ago turned out to be something that happened 12 years ago? Is this a matter of my predecessor? Or maybe the protagonist got the time-based ability in the later period and went back to the past to collect the harem. Otherwise, if he traveled two years and got the harem from 12 years ago, it would be awesome.

I feel like this father's image is a little bad, and it wouldn't be interesting if he was reversed. Could it be that he is just a tool to provide for his younger sister?

Why do most Japanese light novels have the same feeling, that is, the male protagonist gives people a very dragging feeling, and his personality is completely different. My daily routine is just a wry smile, a dumbfounding look, helplessness, a smile, and a shyness... I finally got serious about it, and it was for the kind of excuse that I was too lazy to complain about.

I have been reading the book for at least 10 years, and I don't understand why every time this kind of routine is either an orphan or a younger sister, this kind of cliche is so cliche that I feel very tired of it.

Has the author seen Death? Shijie's name is Zhanyue, and Swastika's name is Tiansuo Zhanyue.

Big Mac, simple, just need to play with knives

Have you ever heard of the Japanese yen exchange rate? You entrusted me with 50,000 yen (2,500), and a rich man asked for 1 million yen (50,000). Are you kidding me?

I've just read Chapter 73. To be honest, writing about Neptune feels like a loss of character.

Author, please write the unscrupulous old father to death first, and then you can start the happy daily life of the stepmother and stepdaughter who love to hear and see! Come on!

I couldn't sleep late at night. I looked through the previous comments and saw some poisonous points. I tried to correct them, but found that many of the projects were huge. If I really wanted to change them, it would be comparable to writing a book. I decided to summarize them first and use them as experience to avoid them in the next book. 1. Everyone dislikes the handsome protagonist of "Chapter 2", but everything is too much and too handsome. He is so handsome that he is divorced from reality, which is a poisonous point for some readers, but some readers like this because he has a sense of immersion. 2. "Chapter 4" Money Issues. In the early stage of Invincible Flow, the writing was too casual, so I didn't pay attention to the money issue. I only had a general understanding of Japan's consumption and wages to determine the protagonist's income. For readers who came to watch Invincible Flow, the money was too little. (Corrected later) 3. The problem of shaping the protagonist's father in "Chapter 5". This is a typical Japanese cartoon-style father who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. But when I first thought about the character design, I referred to the relationship between father and son in a single-parent family. Finally, I took the perspective of the father and found that if I want to have a smooth relationship with my son, it is best to get along with him as a "best friend". However, it turns out that my writing skills are not yet able to create such a character. I did not grasp the degree of father and son getting along well, which made the father a little unpleasant in the early stage. 4. "Chapter Six to Twelve". The design of the first event was too hasty and taken for granted. There were contradictions in the protagonist's character before and after, and the overall story direction was inconsistent with the main tone of the book, causing a gap in readers' expectations. (All subsequent events have been corrected) 5. Zanpakutō: The background of this book is Tokyo in another world, and the Zanpakutō is the protagonist Goldfinger. However, I ignored some readers who watched the Death Point come in. Kidō, Shunpo, etc. Were discarded for the sake of integrity. They were poisonous points for these readers and also caused a gap in expectations. 6. To be added I will continue to summarize later when I have time. Book friends can also send their own ideas and I will read them.