Rebirth of Mortals to Immortality: Giant Sword Sect

I am simply expressing my own opinions, not against the author. I have seen this book and there are already several pitfalls in it. And there are not much changes compared to the original text. The protagonist is sometimes very witty and sometimes very stupid. Anyway, I gave up.

The book started out mediocre, but then became more and more exciting, mainly because it made some changes to the original plot and added some things that were not in the original. The writing is quite good, there is no pretentiousness or a plot about me being the most handsome guy in the whole show. Overall, it's worth reading. Please keep writing more, author.

"Mortal Reborn as an Immortal" and "Mortal I Am Li Tianzun", I am chasing them all. Both yours and these two books are well written, but yours is a little better. The fighting in Rebirth of Immortality is a bit lacking, and the plot behind Li Tianzun's book is a bit weak. Yours looks pretty good so far.

Why can't mortals write well? They are all worried about the fairyland chapter. I don't even know if I can finish writing the human world chapter, but I still worry about this and that. It's funny! Directly killing Han Li to grab the little green bottle, robbed Han Li of all opportunities, and because of the time traveler, he opened the whole map, opened the eyes of the sky, and had omniscience. He did a better job than Han Li and made full use of the little green bottle. This is what a time traveler should do! Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to apply the world view of mortals and write an original one yourself? Those who say they don't want to watch a plot that overlaps with the original work don't even think about it. The biggest opportunities in every novel world are those. How can they be as good as the protagonist of the original work without grabbing them? If it's not as good as what do you want to watch? Just like among mortals; Little Green Bottle, Xuantian Spirit-Slaying Sword, Gold-eating Insect, Dayan Jue, Golden Thunder Bamboo, etc. How can these be replaced? I haven't seen those transformed gods in the human world ascend to the spiritual world. Aren't they the top of the human world and enjoying the resources of this world? You can't ascend to the spiritual world even if you don't seize the opportunity from Old Demon Han, can you achieve the ascension? Not only do you have to grab one and not miss one, but you also have to be more extreme and better than Old Demon Han, or else you will become an immortal? That's nonsense. As long as I don't have the resources as a mortal to kill Han Li and steal his opportunity, I can't see the possibility of ascending to the spirit world!

It is obvious that I can deduce the skills but does not show any advantages. I say that I am strong but it is not reflected in the plot. It is obvious that the starting point is different and I have to learn it from the original work. It is already a giant sword, but it is the same as Yellow Maple Valley. I still learn the Qingyuan Sword Technique. Why can't I do something different and just pirate Han Li? The timeline is more than ten years apart, so we have to retreat to the same timeline as Han Li, and we have to make friends with Han Li? There is the same cheat, what are the benefits of being friends with him? Is this because I'm stuck in the original work and can't get out?

Immortal cultivators make progress without retreating and go against the will of heaven! If I come to the mortal world, I must win Han Li's opportunity. There are two results according to the timeline: 1. Han Li is already the Time Daozu. The world I am in is being watched by Han Daozu, and I am stabbed to death. 2. Whether the Time Dao Ancestor is ancient or modern, then Han Li at this time is just an ordinary person. Relying on foresight, much can be done in this matter. As for why we must seize Han Li's opportunity! 1 is because the Sky Palm Vase not only has heaven-defying functions, but can also be used to practice the law of time in the fairy world in one step. There are few treasures in the spiritual world and even the fairy world that can be compared, let alone the small mortal world. Even if you exchange all the items in the mortal interface, including humans, monsters, plants, and minerals, people will just say you are wishful thinking and tell you to get lost. The monks in the mortal world fought for a few spiritual stones, and for foundation-building pills and many other resources. There is no reason why a person should not be tempted by such a treasure. 2. As long as Han Li is not stopped, the world will be at his feet when he defeats the ancient or the present and becomes the ancestor of time. This was like handing over his life to Han Li. Whether he lived or died, it all depended on his thoughts. In the world of immortal cultivators, strength is respected. Apart from showing kindness to some beauties, Han Li had no sympathy for male cultivators. He turned a blind eye to the fate of his childhood friend Li Feiyu. In the mortal interface, unless you are extremely stubborn and active, there is no guarantee that you will not be noticed by Han Li who goes back in time. If you are watched by a Taoist-level figure, you can imagine your fate. To sum up, with such a huge advantage as a time traveler, you can just come here and be a tortoise; if you want to become an immortal, you are destined to be Han Li's enemy. Or maybe you feel that you will be satisfied just by cultivating the Core Formation Yuanying, and you will always follow Han Li in a low-key manner, watching his back. I don't know when I died unexpectedly, or my lifespan was exhausted due to lack of resources.

In fact, when writing about mortals, it is best not to have any intersection with the protagonist. By using the mortal world model to create a complete story, the story will be more novel and not look the same.

Let me say a few words here. I see some people saying that I copied it all the time. Well, I admit that the first dozens of chapters of this book are indeed written in imitation. The author I am just an amateur, my level is limited, and I have never written anything. You may not believe it, but before I took the college entrance examination, I failed in all my essays. After these few months of writing, I feel that my writing level has improved slightly. This is my gain and progress! I don't know how to write in the early stage, so I can only imitate it. I realized this problem later, and I did not imitate the plot after it was released. I typed it out word by word. Moreover, after Chaos Star Sea, there are different plots. If there are any similarities, I am all trying to get that opportunity. I met a reader last month. He talks to me about plots and gives me ideas every day. Now some plots are written according to his ideas. I am very grateful to him, because with his support, I have the motivation to continue writing. Moreover, if I could keep writing, the protagonist here would not ascend to the spirit world. Finally, please be merciful to those who say they copy every day. I didn't ask for a penny from you, and I didn't expect you to continue reading. You don't even know each other, so why bother!

Heavy plug-ins are useless! He can obviously deduce the exercises! What kind of Qingyuan Sword Art are you doing! Speechless

Don't forget to mention the Liu family twins, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, and Song Ning. Author, it's as good as the Immortal Way. Don't listen to some people's nonsense about stallions. The author's writing is not bad and can hold up. Full booking guaranteed later.

What follows is a harem, similar to the original story, except that there are a few more opportunities, which are tasteless to eat and a pity to abandon.

During the foundation building period, I have to practice the Qingyuan Sword Jue and also go to the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars. The mortal map is so big, so I won't change the map? Golden Finger is also a plant that promotes growth and has its own space, but it is planted outside like Han Li. These points are the biggest reasons for me to quit.

This author really made me laugh. Being able to search for souls during the foundation building stage is really a talent.

The author is writing a book. Just don't do it all day long after the Nascent Soul. Your book is about having sex with a girl after the Nascent Soul. It's a bit ugly.

It is recommended that the author modify the number of failures of the talisman. The low, middle and high talismans of the primary talisman must fail 500, 1000 and 1500 times respectively before succeeding. Are you kidding? How many times will you fail to set up advanced settings like this? You know you have unlimited resources, but you don't want to fool readers with such head-shaking data, right? How many times do you plan to fail the Six-Ding Heavenly Armor Talisman and the Soul Subduing Talisman, which are top-notch in the human world? Success once in 100,000 times? There is also a silver tadpole and golden pole talisman on it. How many times are you going to fail? Is 100 million times enough? The talisman paper of Tianfu Sect is not made from herbs. It requires the skin of a monster animal above level 9. With your weird failure rate, you may not be able to succeed even if you kill all the transformed monsters in the human world.

Withdrawn, saw Chapter 103 being poisoned! Even if the writing is watery, it is also extremely poisonous!

Qi training, blood ban trial, crossing the imperial palace, teleportation array, Xin Ruyin, chaos in the sea of ​​stars. Mortal fan books are all the same.

Change the name of the pig's trotter, change the sect, and walk through it again. It's exactly the same story as the original Han Li. It's the same as pasting the original content. I'm convinced.

Author, what did you write? The plots that are not on the shelves are much better than those after they are on the shelves. As soon as they were released on the shelves, I started to lick Han Li, speechless. Even though you have obtained the Dayan Jue, don't you think it's not good to practice alone? After you get it, you have to give it to Han Li specially. The key is that you don't know that it is the protagonist who gave it to Han Li like this. Also, is it necessary to introduce Xin Ruyin in exchange for Han Li's thousand-year elixir? Does the protagonist lack the thousand-year elixir? It is enough for a formation master like Xin Ruyin to know it by himself, and he also recommends it to Han Li. It shows that Han Li licked it to the extreme And why did Han Li get the Great Movement Order again during the war between the Six Demonic Sects and the Seven Yue Sects? Is the Great Movement Order so good? Is it specifically to ask Han Li to go to Chaotic Star Sea? The protagonist of Chaos Star Sea is enough, and the author has the nerve to say not to lick Han Li. Why do I feel like the author and the protagonist want to kneel down and be Han Li's dog? Let's talk about the plot, it's a complete copy. It's exactly the same in the Great Sword Sect. Han Li's experience in Yellow Maple Valley is just a change of vest from the Great Sword Sect. The plot of Chaos Star Sea is also the same. I don't say it's a copy, it can only be said that there is no difference at all.

Come on, author. The writing is much more exciting than the original work. I'll raise two thousand chapters first and then come over to support you.

Why does Han Li always call the protagonist Xiao Daoyou but the protagonist calls him Brother Han? It's unreasonable. It doesn't make sense regardless of age or cultivation level. Is the protagonist going to act like a little brother? I want to give up, can anyone give me an answer?

It is better to get a space magic weapon, look at the Immortal Palace, Immortal Palace, Purple Palace Immortal Fate, Han Family Immortal Road, the top of Qinglian, on the Taiqiu, inquire about the immortal way, and copy a few more books are also good books, don't read too hard from one book. It should be okay to write a biography of a mortal family cultivating immortality. Build some ten thousand year old tea trees, ten thousand year old mulberry jujube trees, and more ten thousand year old economic trees. Go to the Chaotic Star Sea to establish a family and sell puppets.

Why did the protagonist go to the Yue Palace to purposely kill people?

In the past, the protagonist obtained a body-training technique from the poisonous dragon, right?

There is a Han Li who licks the dog, and the licking dog will die badly!

Why is it gone after ascending? It's not satisfying.

Read more, read more newspapers, eat less snacks, sleep more💤

When will I be in a good state to update? 😍

If the protagonist ascends and stows away, according to the logic of a mortal cultivating immortality, he can only sneak into the spirit world. Silver Moon does not have the spatial coordinates to go to the demon world. Only in the later stages of practicing magic skills and incarnation can he ascend to the demon world, or find someone from the demon world to guide him to the demon world. However, I still hope that the protagonist goes to the spirit world. After all, the spirit world is easier to write. Jingzhe's twelve transformations, Han Laomo, are still used in the fairy world, and it is easier to write about his development in the spirit world.

One picture a day is too slow, author