Pirate's Gas Fruit

I'm too lazy to say it. You'll know how long it is when you look at it.

The fruit is very interesting to write. Good luck to the author.

Then he went to lick Ace and Luffy and act as a nanny for them. Don't forget that you are the protagonist.

If I go to One Piece, I must get the [Pure Gold] that can make people immortal. All the hegemony and One Piece are rubbish. Immortality is the real secret treasure, one piece. After becoming immortal, I will slowly explore the higher levels of human evolution and the mystery of the power of the Devil Fruit Law.

When he didn't kill Creek Pirate King's miscellaneous soldiers in the early stage, he knew that the author was not thinking clearly. Abandoned.

What a licking dog article. As a native of One Piece, the most important thing is to do whatever you want.

After reading twenty chapters, it is extremely poisonous. It's a bit sinister to put it among pirates. In order to connect with Nami and the others, you insist on creating a plot where things are stolen. Others, Mengka, have called your attention to the two thieves, one with blond hair and the other with blue hair. Even if you only know a little bit about pirates, you will know that it is Nami. After being stolen, he kept licking the woman. I really don't understand it. In order to gain a bond in front of the protagonist group, md insists on disgusting the readers and portrays the protagonist's character in a nonsense way. I understand that the author wants to make the protagonist a heartless and happy type like Luffy, but the writing is too zz.

Why not change the name to "My days as a pirate dog licker"

. . Will anyone still lick the protagonist of One Piece in 2022? . .

I really don't understand what kind of protagonist the author wants to write. This kind of three-dimensional view is completely abnormal. You are a person under the red flag, and you have seen Pirates. Don't you understand that 99% of Pirates are basically garbage? Murder and arson are the most normal. If you let go once, it means hundreds of ordinary people will die next time. You have to say that you are not a Holy Mother, and you are so kind to let go when someone points a gun at you? This becomes the Virgin Mary? So, you will become a Virgin bitch to the pirates? Just because you are a soldier? If you don't have the strength, they will kill you. If you are interested, It's normal for people to execute you, Ling Chi, and cut you off for fun. What a pirate is, it's garbage, even if the world view of One Piece is garbage, let alone Luffy and those few idiots, they are just better people. Haha, it's really disgusting to treat those low-level pirate soldiers like the Virgin Mary.

Nowadays, there are pirate fans who lick Luffy. I'm really convinced. It's not a babysitter or a dog licker. It's not hard, right? It's about the main story. Have you read your novel? It's better to watch anime directly, okay?

Don't read it, everyone, this is a nanny novel and a dog-licking novel.

The protagonist Luffy is there, his father, his grandfather, and Uncle Sengoku are watching. Do you, the protagonist, need to be a licking dog?

I have read more than seventy chapters, but I have not seen the role of the protagonist's gas fruit. I only saw that the author wrote that the protagonist controls the air. But the protagonist ate gas fruits, not air fruits! The protagonist of the gas fruit uses it to grill meat and as fuel, and the enemy uses it to control the air. I don't even know what the connection between gas and air is? Is it possible to control everything just because they are gases?

Author, this could be a harem story, Robin, Nami and her sister, Yamato, Charlie + Shirahoshi from Fish-Man Island, the ghost fruit user, the thump fruit user and her sister... Think about it.

Caesar is not dead yet, where did you get the gas fruit?

The gas fruit you blew at the beginning was so powerful that you ended up practicing your sword with your backhand? The gas fruit is only used to enhance physical strength, so why don't you eat an animal fruit? What kind of gas poisonous gas is useless to the Yonko level? You can't hit the strong one with the green flame sword and other fruit moves. How many of them can dodge Kizaru's Amancong Cloud Sword? Can you hit the second card with your own sword practice, or can you break through Kaido's defense? You are really a genius while bragging about the awesomeness of the fruit while looking down on the ability of the fruit.

The author has been saying in the first few chapters that gas is a powerful fruit, but there is no description of how powerful it is. However, this is a fruit that is overcome by flames, just like Torrebol.

No, why were you practicing swordsmanship earlier? You were saying that the fruit was strong and you were practicing swordsmanship at the same time?

The author's combat system is terrible. You have watched more than 800 episodes of One Piece. You don't even know how to practice Haki? Have you never seen Rayleigh teaching Luffy? Haven't you watched Luffy of Wano learn to stay with Sakura, or have you watched Mr. Kai's lesson of overlord's erotic entanglement?

Can gas fruits control mines? What are you writing about? If cloud gas can produce thunder and lightning, what is the relationship between the protagonist's gas fruit and cloud gas?

The protagonist of One Piece, who won't even eat the Shashao Fruit, ate the Gas Fruit that was defeated by the Flame Ten. Zz

Garbage is toxic! No wonder no one is watching

I only want to say that the Gate Fruit is the strongest fruit. As long as you pull the enemy into the door, the battle will end immediately. In One Piece, it is impossible not to eat even if the Haki and fruits are strong, and there is no Bigu. Even if he follows you in the other world and waits for you to open the door, he does not have to go in there. People who only need a year to become stronger will starve to death.

When I saw you talking about licking Luffy, I didn't even add it to the book.

The protagonist has traveled to the past. Didn't you know that if you invited Nico Robin on the boat in the early stage, Aokiji will come to you? Did the protagonist defeat Aokiji in the early stage? Is it asking for abuse if I still go after you can't beat me? Like an idiot

This introduction is like playing war3 with all the cheats, simple and violent enough

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

Many of the sentences are not fluent, and the logic of the language is not smooth. It was okay if I didn't see it at first, but once I saw it, I felt very awkward.

The settings are fine, so I won't go into details. You're still picking up worn-out shoes. You've already written a novel, but you're still playing with other people's leftovers. I'm speechless.