Heavens: My Sect Is Not Upright and Has Become Evil.

The focus of martial arts and martial arts is still on the word "xiaxia", which can be funny or crazy, but it must have a certain degree of control. The plot rhythm and character design are particularly important. The author's writing is not pleasing at all, and it is extremely embarrassing to watch. . . . Well

It's so touching. They went to Fuzhou with great fanfare to "act chivalrously and righteously". Author, I quite like your old books. As a bookworm of ten years, I suggest you write about urban worlds. The martial arts track may not be suitable for you. Do you know the author who doesn't have enough martial virtue, who is chivalrous and nondescript, who doesn't feel happy and feels embarrassed?

The writing is good, but there are too many typos. Also, it's better to use Yue Buqun as the main character's name. Yue Feng looks so awkward.

It's better to cut it. The writing is still okay, but there's nothing exciting about it. The author is also a talented person, how could he avoid all the exciting aspects? It's like getting a 0 on the college entrance examination English test. If this book wasn't free, I wouldn't even open it. Even if it was free, I wouldn't finish it. I really can't stand it anymore.

This protagonist is even more rubbish than Lao Yue. If it weren't for his hook, he would be complete rubbish.

I hate Feng Qingyang the most. You, a time traveler, are so scared of him. Why do you still need his approval? Nerve

Delete it and re-open it. This book is hopeless.

Selling dog meat with sheep's heads... I was attracted by the title of the book "... The Righteous Becomes Evil". However... I don't know whether pig's feet are righteous or not, but they definitely have nothing to do with the word "evil".

If you have a good outlook on life, don't read it, otherwise you will feel disgusted.

How much does the author lack women? How dare you write a story about a woman like Yao Yue with multiple heroines? I'm really not afraid that the protagonist will be chopped off by Yao Yue while sleeping at night.

Jin Yong looked tired and there was no thinking in his mind, just emotions. I've seen too many magical skills similar to Qiong Yao's, so I'll refresh my mind.

The protagonist does not have to learn the Nine Swords, fists, palms, claws and fingers, and the Five Mountains Sword until he has mastered it. Once he reaches a higher level, he will have no moves at all, and he can use them as he wishes. You must have a strong character! Not to mention that internal strength is even more of a strength.

Good guy, this protagonist is more upright than Yue Buqun, but he lacks supporting points, and the description is still not detailed enough. He does not explain the benefits of this chivalrous act and the supporting beliefs in detail. As a result, it is a bit unclear when watching it. Is he the same person as Yue Buqun, or is he following the plot in a hazy way?

It was okay for the protagonist to go to Fuzhou to fight against the enemy, but later there was a reckoning, and it was a bit embarrassing to avenge the Lin family. As the saying goes, there is life in the world and death in the world! Sooner or later, there will come a day when no one will complain even if he dies. The protagonist shouldn't take the personal enmity between the two sides into his own hands. It's a bit inexplicable. How about positive energy? The author should revise the article quickly

I feel that the author has not read the original work, and Yu Canghai is not that stupid The reason why people attacked Fuwei Escort Agency is to avenge their own son How about the author first understand the original work when writing a fanfic, and then start writing when he only knows a little bit about it, it is really embarrassing

The author has been emphasizing that even the best masters are no match for a regular army with tens of thousands of troops, but which master would be stupid enough to fight with a regular army of tens of thousands of people? The top masters are assassins, who are used to carry out beheading operations! ! ! If we look at the various magical stunts with their own "special effects" shown in the martial arts world in the movies, the thousands of regular armies in ancient times really can't do anything to the feelings of these martial arts people who come and go. Unless they have hot weapons, they are just about the same. They must all carry out beheading operations and go out of their way to assassinate the nobles in the deep palaces and courtyards. No matter how talented and strategic the emperor you are, even if it is the reincarnation of Emperor Qin, Emperor Wu of Tang Dynasty, no emperor can withstand the threat of beheading and assassination by the top martial arts masters! Of course, I have also said that the main premise is that these so-called top masters are really just like those in the martial arts movies and Xianxia TV series. They can produce earth-shattering special effects with just one shot of their palms, and can change the environment and terrain with their attack moves. They must be peerless masters of this level to threaten the rule of the dynasty!

The introduction is speechless. Yue Buqun and Ren Yingying are a generation apart, while Ren Lao Yue and Ren Woxing are the same generation. Is it because I can't write anything else except women? Is this called righteousness going evil?

The writing is okay, but the choice of the protagonist is difficult to accept, especially Sheng Hong in the second world.

Another moral guardian, it's disgusting to watch.

Every story has an inexplicable beginning... And a eunuch-like ending.

It's such an old way of writing that there is no sense of substitution.

Among the many fast food articles, this book is too fast food... There is basically no story to tell, and it is easy to get bored with the same operations.

I just finished watching Swordsman, the wife, daughter and apprentice are so dead... I wanted to come to the comment section to see the follow-up, only to find out that the author has entered the palace.