Sword Cultivator's Journey to the Heavens

**The novel is at the beginning of traveling through Swordsman, Shooting Condor, Tianlong, Yitian, these worlds, these worlds make me vomit.

It's a pity to see it😔There is no sense of immersion→_→

I think people like the protagonist are also drunk. Isn't it a good idea to just look for opportunities? He doesn't make good use of the huge advantage of being able to travel through the heavens, but he always acts like a virgin and cares about some things that have nothing to do with him. To be honest, his brain is definitely wrong. Such a big opportunity is wasted. There is so much wealth in the beautiful world and he doesn't know how to make good use of it. It's really blind to give opportunities to such brainless people!

When will the protagonist's martial arts and origins be introduced?

The strong ancient dragon wind is hard to see clearly

I only saw the licking dog's journey to the heavens, and he was pretending to be struck by lightning.

Chapter 6 Why Mao wants to kill Lin Pingzhi? What does it mean that he will die in the hands of others anyway, so why not die in your hands? Linghu Chong's ** stuff can be forgiven just because he is the protagonist?

The protagonist in the first chapter at the beginning is a college student who traveled through time. Because he had no money, he went to kill bandits on the first day. . . Are college students so cruel nowadays? There is no transition at all, so little attention is paid to details, so I'll say goodbye to the negative review.

The two or three worlds that the protagonist experienced did not indicate what level of cultivation he was in, nor did he mention the level of cultivation of the opponent when fighting with someone, nor did he mention the level of cultivation of some celebrities in the current world. It really felt as disgusting as if he just walked out to the supermarket and left.

Why does the protagonist teach the Dharma everywhere? It's too casual. Don't you know that the Dharma is difficult to spread? Just like in reality, if you want to get the real Dharma, you will have great opportunities and great cost! The protagonist had a narrow escape from death when he first got the Dharma, but why did he change after he got here?

Nowadays, there is a strange comment, which probably means that I work so hard and seriously in my writing, why is it rejected by the public? It must be that readers do not know how to appreciate it, and they always say that this novel is not good or that is not good, just like a certain great director said that the audience was not good after the book failed at the box office.

The author doesn't even explain clearly the protagonist's major skills and realm, which is really confusing. He only knows that the realms are divided into acquired, innate, master, and grandmaster. It doesn't say how to break through Xiantian and Grandmaster, and there is no iconic distinction. The protagonist appears as an innate master. For example, Yue Buqun in Swordsman has practiced the Star Absorbing Technique for several months. After continuously absorbing so much internal energy, he can be even more powerful than Dongfang Invincible. Is it possible that as long as the skill is deep enough, he can break through? Then why don't you send the protagonist to the world of Tianlongbabu to learn the Beiming Divine Art, and then go all the way to the heavens to absorb internal energy? It would be great to make breakthroughs all the way. Even now in the world of the divine eagle, you still say that the protagonist has not returned to nature, which is really disgusting. The realm of the protagonist has been messed up by you, it's really a special code.

I basically saw Jin Gu run away immediately after the start.

It's embarrassing to watch. It should be renamed the Justice Police of All Heavens! ! ! !

The writing was incomprehensible. I read Chapter 2 and gave up!

First of all, this book: I don't know what it's about at the beginning (one sentence about origin, one sentence about kung fu, where to draw a running account? Can't you write the three golden chapters at the beginning and learn from it? Are so many time-travel novels just for show?). All of a sudden, I'm going to brave the world with a sword to kill bandits. I want to write about Jianghu, but it gave me the feeling of starting a 50-cent online game with a sword and a set of skills.

There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. The writing is too tough and there are many typos. It's very awkward to read. It's like a yo-yo.

Sword cultivator actually didn't go to Lu Xiaofeng's Legend! That's very unsatisfactory. Flying immortals from the sky, the top of the Forbidden City. As soon as I see Swordsman, I will be persuaded to give up!

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit, Reasons for quitting, killing people without blinking an eye, being ruthless and ruthless. As a time traveler, killing someone for the first time is so natural? You don't even vomit, but you still kill others when they beg for mercy? Are all time travelers so skilled? He kills people like he drinks water, his face does not change, his heart does not beat, or he is a prophet who only listens to other people's words and concludes that others are evil? My first impression of ghosts is that of evil. They take thousands of gold and silver in the name of righteousness and use swords as blades, just to be poor!

I only know that the main leg has traveled through time, and then there is nothing. The feeling of martial arts and other things is that I am invincible as soon as I was born, and I retreated.

It was the first time I saw the protagonist being so wasteful, pretending to be a dick and being fucked, I was speechless.

Originally, I was witnessing the love, hatred and resentment of various protagonists and supporting characters in the heavens, and I tried to help them as much as I could. I helped someone I liked and was treated like a bitch?

If the sword cultivator doesn't see the flying immortals outside the sky and doesn't see the dead thirteen, then what else is there to see!

I only saw two. I feel like the protagonist is very pretentious. I can't stand it anymore. A newbie who has just entered the world. He is more powerful than the veterans in the original arena. That's still modern people. How did you develop your temperament?

Painting a tiger is not like a dog! If you don't have that writing power, don't imitate Gu Long's style. The storytelling is too poor!

After reading the first two chapters, it was a waste of good writing. Originally I wanted to watch more, just in case it was slow to warm up. As a result, I immediately quit after reading the table of contents. Gods, hurry up. You have finished twenty or thirty chapters of a plot of hundreds of thousands or millions of words. No matter how good the writing is, it is of no use.

As confusing as your name

I lost interest after seeing your profile.

I lost interest after seeing your profile.

He really made me laugh after reading this comment. I don't care what the author wants to write, as long as it's not a control. It's best to live among random flowers, leaving no leaves behind. It's useless to have a kind heart. If you do something, isn't it possible to have more kindness?