Mortals Start from the Spiritual Roots of Heaven

Brothers, we are just saying, hungry, we are just saying. Is it possible, is it possible that we can put forward some of our own opinions that we think are acceptable. Our route is to take advantage of the Tianlinggen and practice like crazy. If the practice stops, we will go out to find elixirs. Also, we have the memory of God Lord Dayan, so it shouldn't be a problem to use our secret skills and extensive knowledge on some special occasions to solve the immediate crisis. We still have some common sense from the mortal Han Laomo, so it's no problem to get an advantage when going to the next realm or map. It shouldn't be a problem if we just bring a girl with us to practice immortality in a double queue.

It's a good read. It's the first time I've seen a novel in which the female protagonist supports the male protagonist throughout the whole process. I hope Wang Xiujun won't betray the protagonist in the future! I prefer novels where the female protagonist supports the male protagonist throughout the whole process but prefer a single female protagonist. I don't like novels where the female protagonist always wants the male protagonist to help the poor!

Dear brothers, I would like to make a solemn statement here. First of all, everyone here is looking for novels that you think are well-written to read. Everyone has different standards, so the novels they read are also different. My standards need to be discussed with all the good brothers here. Since I wrote a fanfic about Mortal, I think everyone is a reader who likes Mortal. I'm very happy, and I do too. The fun point of mortals is the same as the advice given to me by a book friend. The protagonist must have a plan of his own, and this plan is feasible and profitable. Secondly, the protagonist must prepare in advance to complete the plan and leave foreshadowing. Having said this, I would like to apologize first, because I did not complete such an idea before Chapter 40. The previous writing lacked something, the protagonist lacked a description of the preparation process, so I am deeply sorry! I plan to supplement the previous chapters. The above is my humble opinion. Next, I will improve the sense of substitution in the writing, the rationality of the plot, and the authenticity of the background. Finally, I hope that all the brothers who have read this post, good brothers, will all stand up! We are of one mind! The lights are chaotic, the cold light suddenly appears, the surroundings are lonely, the wild wind and weeds are wary of each other, and the moon has also ended hastily. We imitate the knights in the desert, full of loneliness and bravery, just to dissolve the long night. The world blows a messy fire, the wind and snow are falling dust, we are all dust, turned into jasmine flakes. But until we die, we will crown the dawn and bloom a field of charming roses. There are thousands of eternal vows hidden in this world. Don't ask for useless miracles, because we will always go to Chang'an alone with our swords. We are of one mind! Salute to the Chinese boy BGM!

Some people say that this novel has nothing to do with mortals The Biography of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, using 10% of the copyright All the settings in it can be related to mortals. The original intention is to write different mortals. Tianlinggen can also use his own advantages to compose his own story of cultivating immortals. The chapter of becoming an immortal You can still find opportunities without the little green bottle You can practice on your own without Old Demon Han Do you have to interact with those characters? Being the master, senior brother, uncle, and relative of Old Demon Han, can you write about mortals? Isn't it enough to cultivate immortality in a mortal context? Those skills, supernatural powers, power, and history are the foundation of mortals.

Isn't it enough to just write about the mortal flow and use the settings? It feels weird if the fanfic doesn't have a protagonist.

You should do double cultivation as soon as you come here, right? Run quickly

When I saw the title of the chapter - I am invincible under the Nascent Soul, I was instantly embarrassed. In my mind, Long Aotian was similar to the little villain in the novel. Before the fight started, he called me something about being invincible, and then was defeated by the pig's feet - ah, you can't be so strong, I can't be defeated! A passerby nearby was surprised: What kind of physique has this pig's foot cultivated? It is invincible at the same level! Then another villain stood up: Although you have cultivated some kind of physique, you are not my opponent. The physique I cultivated is invincible at the same level... Is your invincibility just a slogan?

You have completely changed the setting of the original work. Dayan Jue was created by Dayan Shenjun. There is no complete inheritance of puppetry in the human world. Dayan Shenluo sorted it out by himself. Dayan Shenluo did not muddle around in Dongfutian but did research there. Also, many of the techniques you mentioned were created by Dayan Shenluo himself. In this way, you have completely changed the original setting.

Some people say that the foreshadowing is poor. You can point out the specific areas where the foreshadowing is poor. If the foreshadowing is indeed poor, I can make changes. Now in the new book period, my goal is to improve it. After all, it is the first contracted novel Some people say that the timeline is wrong You can also point out what is wrong and I can polish it No novel is completely free of contradictions, even if it is a book by a great master This novel has been revised twice, and I don't mind revising it ten thousand more times!

Writing about Tianlinggen is good, and Dayan Shenjun is also good, but not writing about Han Li's period directly avoids most of the mortal fan readership, and also increases the difficulty of original creation in vain, and has to give the original author a commission... It is better to write original writing.

The protagonist is too stupid, too naive, and has no sense of caution at all.

The problem is that you wrote the plot too early, right? It's like writing a novel from scratch, at least one thousand to two thousand years earlier than Han Li. As a late Nascent Soul, he has at least a thousand years of life. I don't know how long he will be a puppet.

Fully booked, come on. More!

There is a doubt that the exercises Han Paopao practiced were all created during the Nascent Soul stage. The protagonist has the memory of the god, so he can't create Qigong exercises? Why do you practice other people's techniques when you first start practicing? No matter how outstanding it is, it's not as good as what you created yourself. After all, it is integrated with the memory of the God King.

The author is awesome and writes my heartvoice

In fact, the most important thing in cultivating immortality is to stay alive. All other grievances and grudges are nonsense. After a thousand years of Nascent Soul, all your enemies will be dead.

What kind of stuff is written here? I had an inexplicable fight with the Five Knot Pills (chapters 28-30) and let the Nascent Soul Demon Cultivator chase after me in chapters 30-32. It was over without any explanation.

The protagonist is a light spiritual root, not a heavenly spiritual root😅

To outsiders, you should call your wife: bitch, concubine, clumsy wife. What is the name of a housewife?

Did the protagonist first go to the Kingdom of Light and then travel through it? I would like to ask, can the protagonist be Gaia?

Mutated spiritual roots: metal and fire are light, water and earth are darkness, metal and stone (earth) are thunder, fire and wood are wind, metal and water are ice

The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and it's so stupid that it will be finished in less than 300 chapters.

Let me tell you. The positive and negative Tai Chi is: positive: metal, wood, water, fire and earth; negative: light, darkness, thunder, ice and wind! The positive five elements and the reverse five elements are just the first methods of chaos. You are all stupid. Alas, in theory, there are endless methods.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can only say that it is readable, but not outstanding. Those who are short on books can read it.

Recommending a family book "Gathering the Crowd to Become an Immortal"

The connection between chapter jumps and plot events is just like reading an outline, and the entire plot is promoted just like a white novel. Even if the writing skills are poor, if the plot events are well connected, the book is still worth reading. . . .

What the author pinned above is very good, but I just came to see Han Li

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.

A novel for mentally retarded children, every chapter is deceptive

The protagonist died young and the author has passed away. If you want to catch up, you have to burn paper.