Glory of Kyoto Wings

This book is really well written. It is the best novel I have read after the fourth part of "Tang Family Continent". I recommend that you focus on reading the chapters after chapter 114. The classic level may be comparable to the final chapter of the giant. It is a must-read. I sincerely hope that the author will write better and better, and don't care about what the readers think, and write the world in his heart. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will finish it quickly!

Although this book is about love, it can be seen that the author has a pessimistic attitude towards love. If the protagonist does not have a system, none of the characters in it can fall in love with the male protagonist. This book seems to be anti-green tea, but the masters and masters she described in the early stage are not annoying. I like them anyway, and I often watch Japanese dramas. Most of the heroines in urban dramas have similar characters. The various choices people make in order to live a good life for themselves do not require the approval or criticism of others. Because one knows one's warmth and coldness, and because people are pessimistic and don't understand. Whether it's the taxi driver's contentment or the master's reflection on life on the bench, they are all answers to certain questions. Of course, I don't know why. The master figured it out, but the author couldn't figure it out at first?

Although it looks very good, my only wish is that Xiao Teng can have a good ending with the male protagonist.

One update a day, so much water injected? 6,000 words in one day? Before it was still 7000-8000 a day! Is it because you think your grades are too good that you mess around? Can you write a book seriously? You are not filling in water now, you are just typing two words into a tank of water. Perfunctory!

I saw someone saying that the novel seemed to have been written by a different person, and I felt the same way. But then maybe it was because I hadn't watched it for a while, and when I watched it again, I had forgotten the previous plot, and it felt okay. No sense of violation.

I feel like these female characters don't have enough green tea flavor. It cannot express the refreshing feeling of killing green tea. And why use money and power to make Green Tea bow? So I'm watching the system kill Green Tea?

It's very good. This book stayed with me for three days. I probably read it in one sitting, so the flaws mentioned by other book friends were selectively ignored by me because of my extremely fast reading. I saw interesting plot points, happy stories, favorite characters, and the most important moment that struck me. As I get older and more mature, people's ideas are gradually being finalized. This book has indeed changed my outlook on love a lot. Of course, I hope it is positive. Although the content of the novel is not large, there are some unavoidable problems when I think about it afterwards, but no matter what, I will remember this book. Thank you to the author for making me interested in the Japanese light novels of Qidian. All orders are given, see you in the new book.

Too short and weak, man! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! If this continues, I will raise a book

It's so beautiful, the first book I've read from Qidian. Com

The writing behind it is really sparse, and it's the book I most regret having ordered. The system starts to disappear in the mid-term, and the protagonist is not exposed to the new green tea, so you have to write the existing heroines well, but they did not have a deep relationship with the protagonist until the end. It has always been emphasized that they are impure emotions based on the protagonist's good conditions. The only possibility Xiaodeng, who is sincere to the protagonist, has no development at all, and there are almost no scenes in the later part. There is also a story about Tianhai's fake pregnancy that is full of bad taste. Chayin was also written for the first time three times by the author. The protagonist doesn't like them much. I thought that the protagonist could change later, but unfortunately it didn't. The girl who uses the knife obviously wanted to write about it, but in the end there was no plot and Aiko Kamiya didn't develop it. In the final analysis, as a harem novel with multiple female protagonists, I don't feel any sweetness at all, only trading and having money are great.

Chayin

Although this woman is not a good thing; although she is willing to degenerate, this woman is a pregnant woman. If nothing else, in our country, pregnant women are not sentenced to death no matter how severe the punishment is, which shows that our country has a certain tolerance for pregnant women. Although your writing is in line with Neon's national conditions, it is not in line with our country's national conditions, and it is not in line with our country's generally preferential treatment of pregnant women (it is very sensitive, and many people can't accept it, but I think it is well written). So someone will definitely report you, but I think you should be more cautious.

I want to upload this picture of the female protagonist Sakichu. I don't know how to upload it. Please give it to me.

How about it?

Chapter 159 has exposed the best way to use Goldfinger. Pay Yumi Yoshikawa to write a short essay about the male protagonist being a scumbag, and then buy trending searches to discredit herself, so that all women on the Internet hate the male protagonist. At about the same time, let the school classmates speak to whitewash the male protagonist. Wall Street will be acquired in this wave.

It's painful. It started when Mizusawa appeared. I even got on the bus. I don't know when I will become a green turtle. Fortunately, I didn't buy it all. I gave up after seeing more than 240. This is the first time I abandoned a book because of a supporting role. . . .

I don't know what people in the book circle are talking about. When I saw the name of this book and the male protagonist's decision to target Green Tea, I knew there were bound to be a lot of bad women in it, and the male protagonist couldn't decisively drive away the bad women. After all, it was a small treasury. Besides, as mentioned in the comments, when Kamiya Aiko was having sex in her hometown, the male protagonist slapped her in the face and explained clearly on the spot, then I ask, why not just write a pure love novel? Why write this system? Then I would like to ask the people who commented on this, why didn't you withdraw when you saw the system? I don't think that this system has been released, but what I wrote later is still about pure love, laugh.

The plot of Kamiya really put a lot of food into my mouth 💩, author, you are so good that you can do this kind of operation after it is released. If you want to refine the fans, you won't do it like this, right?

Can the author change the plot of the male supporting character? 🙂 I know it seems that you want to create a character like a male mother, but the author, your writing has a bit of a Nantong feel. I hope you write it well and don't collapse like the previous one.

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The scariest thing is not that the whole dish tastes bad, because basically no one will eat it, but the scariest thing is that after eating half of it, half of the dish suddenly contained half of the Xiaoqiang.

This is the first time I read the author's book, and I have subscribed to more than 140 chapters. I don't know what to say about the future development, but there are some things that I always feel unhappy about. Before it was released, it was very interesting and interesting to watch, especially the showdown between masters and grandmasters, which made me laugh to death. However, since it was released, to put it bluntly, the more I watch it, the more uncomfortable and disgusting it becomes... It feels like the male protagonist and Green Tea have no inner motivation at all in the battle. The previous one is a one-of-a-kind confrontation with a campus comedy. It is very comic and good-looking, and the male protagonist also gets money and status from it. However, after taking the master, I feel that the male protagonist's entire image has taken a turn for the worse, as if he has suddenly transformed from a campus harem male protagonist to a cold-blooded person who leads to evil. He talks about deals with the master, and also talks about cold deals with the grandmaster. The previous comedy plot is suddenly labeled as a cold adult world. Dozens of plots are full of coercion and coercion. It's uncomfortable (especially the part when Kamiya comes to his hometown to look for him), and the characters have become flat due to repeated transactions. This can be seen from the previous Yoshikage. Yoshikage suddenly became the male protagonist's possession in a sense because of the transaction. Now the master feels faster. After becoming the possession, these characters have nothing to look forward to. Is it possible that the author still wants to prolong this process of consumption by constantly introducing new characters? This is not a random comment, but I hope the author will think carefully about how to deal with these problems. The simplest thing is that the positive and negative reviews from readers have gradually become polarized before and after it is put on the shelves. Didn't the author notice? One final mention (what really disgusted me was not just Kamiya Aiko's weird behavior, but when the male protagonist was confronting Kamiya Aiko's strong attitude, he actually said that these two first-class people don't look like good people, should I... When I saw this, I thought I was watching hypnosis XXX, guided by X...)

It feels like domestic green tea novels are covered in Japanese skin. I can't see any difference. On the contrary, the protagonist and the girls around him are incompatible with Japan. Wouldn't it be more reasonable to write directly about China? It should be fine if you put it aside for a while.

I really like reading light novels. Although I have only read the beginning, I think it is very well written.

Your book has been plagiarized. It is also the one on this site called "I Stand Above Millions of Evil Women". The system, male protagonist, plot development, and first heroine design are almost exactly the same. Some parts have been reskinned. You can go and take a look.

Ahhh, it feels so good I gave all my monthly tickets

The first 200 chapters are very awesome and fascinating, but the later chapters are really a little less interesting, but the beginning is really well written.

The starting point of the story is amazing, but it's boring to keep teasing and teasing. It's all transactions without emotion.

Author, your book has been exempted from Qidian. Com

Why did the book "Evil Girl's Qualifications" suddenly disappear 😐