Nonhuman Player

Let me just say a few words. I've already read the latest chapter, and the more I read, the more disappointed I feel. First, regarding the female zookeeper, this was the only point I found particularly problematic early on. Can you imagine a female graduate student zookeeper sneaking out of the zoo in the middle of the night with a tiger undergoing wild rearing?

I couldn't take it anymore, so I gritted my teeth and tried to write something more, but my knowledge was completely lacking. The result was truly beyond my expectations… Ancient people often said black cats ward off evil spirits, but only those superstitious foreigners think black cats are unlucky…

In most novels featuring non-human characters, the ones who fail are women. Why don't we learn from our peers' mistakes?

Individual power is attributed to one's environment. If an unconventional protagonist lacks a sense of belonging to their own race and sides with other races, it's a flaw. "Those who are not of our kind will surely have different hearts"—any adult knows that one's perspective is determined by their own circumstances.

Well, after reading Chapter Six, I was a bit discouraged. It wasn't the interaction with the woman, but rather, why did the protagonist assume that just because he thought tigers were smart, they could understand human speech? The protagonist thought the other person might just think he was a smarter tiger, yet he was making revealing gestures.

Chapter 6, "The Retreat," was acceptable despite some minor flaws earlier in the story. However, Chapter 6 was nauseating to read.

One chapter a day, only seven chapters so far. If you release a book with 100 chapters, it will take three months. If you release a book with 50 chapters, it will take two months. How many readers will stay if you release it chapter by chapter? This kind of book will just end up on the bookshelf collecting dust, and you won't know when it will be available again or when it will be discontinued.

Does every man think women should be coquettish and playful? Even when facing a male tiger, is that right? Using coquettishness to threaten a male tiger? I really don't want to create gender antagonism. Having female characters described by this male author makes the term "ordinary man" seem absolutely wonderful.

What's with this woman? Don't mess around with her!

It was abruptly abandoned, which really upset me! Although some details and the rating system suggest the author isn't the type of writer who likes to scrutinize every detail, it doesn't stop me from thinking the work is alright.