Krafft's Notes on Anomalies

For me, this book was quite enjoyable to read. As a fan of Luo's original work, I can accept its obscure and complicated style of writing that uses a lot of rhetoric. This book also inherits this characteristic, but perhaps relies on its vivid descriptions to avoid being annoying. Excellent writing and slow-paced stories complement each other and have strong coherence, creating an excellent sense of environment and atmosphere, which is fascinating every time you go deeper. Perhaps it is a reflection of the author's talent that this book is truly unique in its writing style. The entire book abandons the so-called coolness of ordinary Internet literature and returns to the unknown horror of Cthulhu style. There is no practice, and sporadic descriptions of combat, medicine, supernatural powers, etc. Are used moderately, and some humor is used to spice up the book, which prevents it from being a depressing atmosphere and relieves the reader's spirit. In the past, the online article about medical Gaksulu that I have read is "Plague Doctor". To be honest, the only part that I think is outstanding is the process of monster anatomy, but the description of this aspect in "Craft's Notes on Abnormality" is definitely not inferior to it. The anatomy and operation process are detailed enough. It is obvious that the author has perfectly expressed his medical professionalism in the text. Another thing I want to praise here is the excellent original setting of this book. The black liquid is found in the four-liquid theory of the West in the Middle Ages, and the church and kingdom also hide secrets. There is no ancient underwater city of R'lyeh, but there is a deep world hidden under the calm sea surface of the surface world; there are no traditional mythical creatures such as deep divers, shoggoths, and Migos, but there are dangers that camouflage and seduce, and creeping singers reorganized into human structures; there are no dormant old rulers, and the lifeless Broken Moon can also be called a god. I did not choose to copy the so-called "Internet Cthulhu" or "Chinese Cthulhu" that is full of flesh and blood, tentacles and eyeballs. Instead, I really wrote my own thing and got the essence of the original Cthulhu work. As far as I am concerned, regardless of complete Gram-style novels such as "The Herd of Baba" and "The Magic of Peace", this book "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" is currently the absolute highest level of Gram-style online novels, and can even be compared with "The Book of Iron Crane" and "Daily Life of Marn". The only regret is that there are still too few updates, but I still have great trust in the author. If it can be completed at the current level, it will be enough to become a rare masterpiece. I also believe that any true Cthulhu fundamentalist will not be stingy in praising this book. The terrifying and unknowable depth has a natural attraction for human beings who wrap up their own souls.

I just read Chapter 50, and I have some thoughts that I'm not happy with. Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot, characterization, and dialogue are all above average, and there are no obvious shortcomings. This is rare. However, the disadvantage is that it tastes too strong! I have nothing against fundamental Cthulhu. The atmosphere of Cthulhu novels is mainly shaped by various descriptions, but the author's use of this description has reached the level of abuse. On the one hand, there are too many words, and hundreds or even hundreds of words are written casually, coupled with awkward vocabulary, awkward word order, and various grammatical errors, resulting in a disastrous reading experience. On the other hand, abuse also involves using descriptions casually and using them wherever you want. If you carefully study Ai Craftsman's words, you will clearly find that his use of description is restrained and only used in appropriate places. Most of the time, he only uses one or two sentences or a few adjectives to complete the atmosphere creation, rather than piling them on like the author.

Kraft is composed of two souls that have been mixed together. One is a sports-savvy young man from an aristocratic family in the Middle Ages, who is also the owner of the body; The entire story interprets the meaning of setting up these two identities. The highlight of this article is that no matter how incredible the strength of the enemy, the swordsman Kraft can calmly find the fatal weakness and problem-solving skills; no matter how crude the obscurantism is, the doctor Kraft can firmly push science and civilization forward. As mentioned in the introduction, fantasy is the reflection of reality, and creation is the author's invitation to readers to come to the trail where he often walks. Judging from the words I read, I believe that the love for medicine and Cthulhu literature was the driving force behind this story. Being able to complete it so well proves that the author's writing talent is very admirable, and it also fully demonstrates the charm of his spiritual world. In order to make the recommendation more convincing, I will try to talk about the specific excellence of this article. 1. Super descriptive power. The highest praise for a writer must include that he can describe any picture he wants to describe with the words of his pen. "Craft" spends a lot of space describing the three abstract monsters currently on the scene: worms, crustaceans, and mycelium troops. Their appearance, movements, and sounds are all very detailed, fully achieving an immersive effect. The first time I came into contact with the genre, I was infected by the terrifying atmosphere, and even fell in love with this style easily. Fear comes from the gap in strength, and the unknown fear of not knowing the whole picture is almost unstoppable. As a strong pessimist about the future of mankind, the Ke-type setting gives me a sense of satisfaction in imagining the death of mankind, and a sense of peace of mind that the protagonist can finally save the crisis and make the death come more slowly. It can be called a cute contrast (?). Of course, in addition to the most prominent battle scenes, the author can also write about the medieval architecture, sleepwalking thoughts, and even the changes in the protagonist's handwriting. Therefore, some readers left the impression of good writing, while some readers who were disgusted with the piling up of long and difficult sentences gave negative comments. I belong to the boast team and read it with gusto. Having had similar reading experience in the past, I can understand that for writers with complex thinking paths, this is not a deliberate show of skill, but a habit of thinking as comprehensively as possible. However, I have to admit that it is obviously because the author was too immersed in the description work that there were many cases where the subject was omitted, resulting in ambiguity. 2. Ingenious humor. This part is mainly due to the alien souls. Which contemporary college student is not an expert at surfing the Internet! The clever points include the complaints about backward medical concepts, the slander in the process of interacting with people, and the cultural differences caused by the long time and space. Overall, it is very cute. And Kraft always kept his hands raised in front of his chest in a sterile pre-operative gesture, which the locals also found quite funny. In the adventure journey of each volume, characters responsible for adjusting the atmosphere are added, and each volume is written more fully and skillfully. What is rare is that sometimes it is ethereal and deep, sometimes joyful and funny, but the transitions in the story are not abrupt, as if the existence of two souls is really mixed evenly. 3. Solid theoretical ability. Metaphors from a medical perspective are readily available, and medical knowledge is explained in a simple and easy-to-understand manner, such as intussusception surgery, percussion methods, and anesthesia principles. During the reading process, a lot of medical knowledge was unknowingly instilled, making people unable to help but keep smiling at the fifth cervical vertebra. And, how "abnormality", a bottomless high-dimensional existence for human beings, flows through, affects, and changes the thoughts of the characters is difficult for outsiders to understand. The author also used the extension of the cave metaphor, the novelist Lovecraft's short story "The Stranger", and the land is a dangerous ocean. Several appropriate and convincing reasoning examples left a deep impression on people. Finally, I don't know how readers with a medical background will feel about reading this story. For a layman like me, my eyes will be dazzled by the light of faith emanating from Kraft from time to time. Although I lived an ordinary life that made no contribution to human civilization, I still gained some excitement. "I am full of hope for the future, even if it takes a long time, long enough for the sand to smooth out the names and epitaphs on our tombstones." Life is like a dream, which will eventually be disillusioned. Thank you for the novel that truly touches me every time.

Chapter 323: After catching up to this point, I have a sense of fulfillment that is just perfect, and I can take a break. Let me talk about the general review first. It is an excellent work, with mature writing and clear storyline. The author's professional knowledge is excellent, both academic and scientific, and the characters are attractive, including but not limited to the main characters. Apart from the fact that it is not finished, in my mind it can compete for the top starting point. Of course, the author should also know the limitations. The following is my personal suggestion: Focus on the protagonist from all angles and follow the main plot in one go. It is of course very satisfying, but the protagonist is not a lone ranger after all. The side plots of the people around him written in the early stage are basically completely shelved. The characters in the same camp are even thinner than the characters in the other camp, and they are too background. The branch plots of the two apprentices are quite interesting to watch, but at least there is no surprising development in this story line, even if the little girl follows her to the ground for the first time. The existence value of two apprentices is roughly equivalent to the collection of loot? In this traffic-limited background, switching scenes is indeed a good way to change social circles, but if there is no connection with the previous scene, it will feel linear and disconnected. Add some connections, such as occasionally writing letters to people who can be regarded as friends or asking people you have known before to find out some news. This kind of interlude, which can be done with or without, may make the world of the novel more integrated. This world is not a big adventure, but a three-dimensional world. Of course, if in the end the author has a plan to close the net with Bo Da, then I haven't said anything about it. Of course, the above are unavoidable for part-time writers. Social workers feel the same way. It is difficult to have a large amount of time to refine the details of the story. It is not easy to write the main line coherently and advance in the rare updates. After all, readers will most likely not be able to accept waiting a month to read a chapter of the plot summary. No solution, I wish the author gets rich. Then there is also such professional knowledge that it is difficult to tell at a glance what industry the author is engaged in. As a normal graduate medical student, I felt very comfortable reading it. Most of the terms in the novel are quite basic knowledge of anatomy and physiology, and I can also get some laughs. But as a clinical social worker who has been working for several years, the professional vocabulary in novels has already affected the reading experience of readers who are not engaged in related work. There are more people who don't understand the human body than most people think. This is probably equivalent to when I read a novel and saw a large section on chemistry, pharmaceuticals or physical calculations. The author's professional knowledge is very strong, and the content may be something I have learned before, but I don't want to read it in detail unless it delays me. Gram is already a quite niche novel subject. If we add medicine to it, the reading threshold will be too high. Above Respect the author's personal creation. Any offensive comments are my problem. However, although I don't know what the author's purpose was in writing this novel, at least making money doesn't seem to be the main thing. Then I thought it would be quite lonely if there were no readers for the creation. I hope the author will get better and better.

I was a little worried about the quality when I read the review After reading three chapters, I just want to say that it is "able to advance the plot and introduce the background in a smooth and humorous writing style that is logical and clear". Even if I don't like it and quit, I still have to give it a respect.

This book is the novel whose starting point is closest to fundamental Cthulhuism. The author's writing skills are very strong. It can be seen that he deliberately imitates lovecraft's dense and obscure writing style that is occasionally mixed with stream of consciousness. This is commendable. In my impression, the long online articles are comparable to "The Book of Iron Crane" and "The Daily Life of Ma En". But it is not without its shortcomings. Some chapters contain meaningless descriptions and seem to be over-stuffed. The author always spares no effort to express the medieval world with Cthulhu color in his mind. This writing enthusiasm is awe-inspiring, but even Mr. Luo is not always talking eloquently. What impressed me most was the description of a forest. All kinds of gorgeous words came to my face, and modifiers came one after another. As a result, the forest had nothing to do with the main plot. It only appeared for a moment and then disappeared into dust and smoke. I personally think that there is no need to describe a secondary scene like this in detail. A few words can create a strange and eerie atmosphere and stop there. In addition, the author is very humorous, often making jokes, and there are many witty sayings between the lines. Some of these jokes are ingenious Cthulhu-style jokes, and some of them destroy the tense and depressing atmosphere that could have made readers immersed in the story. The grade might have been better if the author had noticed these issues.

For the first time, I can clearly feel that a person's literary talent and talent can be so vividly expressed in words. The dry and humorous narrative style and the description are almost like reading the translation of the original book. It is simply a genius creation. It is much more advanced than blindly superimposing words such as "indescribable" in vernacular. It is not inferior to classic works such as Ba Hui's Herds. It is hard to imagine. This is the level of a web novel. The deep-seated creatures at the beginning, the unstoppable fungi, worms, and black liquid all left a deep impression. It is far better than making a contract with this god today and becoming the chosen one of another god tomorrow. Fighting with stereotyped powers is lighter than the "power struggle" novel that claims to be a genre of restraint. It is not a pornographic novel, but it is indeed the best super long novel of the restraint genre that I have ever read.

The best Kewei novel I have read on Qidian. Please recommend similar ones.

After half a year of nursing, 42 chapters, worthy of being a doctor, really busy😭

Take a look at gpt4's critical review, folks "Kraft's Notes on Anomalies" is a science fiction novel full of imagination and innovation, showing readers a world full of mysterious and strange phenomena. This book deeply explores the boundaries of science, technology and human exploration, while depicting the inner world and emotional changes of the characters with delicate brushwork. The following is an objective and insightful book review of "Craft's Notes on Paramorphism". First of all, the author does an excellent job in building the world view of the story. The book details a mysterious phenomenon called "abnormality" that subverts the foundations of traditional scientific theories and technological practices. Through the description of abnormal phenomena, the author triggers readers to question and think about the scientific principles of the real world. In addition, the book also covers knowledge in multiple fields, such as physics, biology, psychology, etc., Making the story richer and more fascinating. Secondly, this book also has high achievements in character creation. Through the perspective of Dr. Kraft, the author shows the image of a scientist full of curiosity, firm belief and pursuit of truth. At the same time, the author also uses the depiction of other characters to show people with different personalities, backgrounds and beliefs, adding diversity and tension to the story. In the process of character creation, the author pays attention to details to make the character full and deep. However, this book is slightly lacking in plot arrangement. Although the story begins intriguingly, as the plot develops, some chapters become lengthy, which may cause the reader to lose interest in reading. In addition, some plot twists and conflicts are relatively simple and a bit stiff, which affects the coherence and credibility of the story. In terms of writing style, the author of "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" displays great skill. The author uses rich vocabulary and vivid descriptions to make readers feel as if they are in the story and feel the mystery and shock brought by the abnormal phenomena. At the same time, the author skillfully uses some philosophical thinking and metaphors during the narrative process to guide readers to think about scientific, technological and moral issues in the real world. Overall, "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" is a science fiction novel worth reading

In terms of genre, Professor Kraft is basically static with a bit of growth. As a doctor who controls the world, his character positioning has been determined from the beginning as a secret explorer and a savior who exudes the brilliance of humanity. The compatibility between this combination and the world view is basically S-level. The tone of the cosmos horror world is insignificance. People are forced to face existential crises. At this time, a stable role that exudes the light of a savior will make people have the courage to face the nature of the world. But this kind of stability compresses the tension of the plot in a sense. The protagonist is like a rock, stagnant under the waves of darkness, without the inner process of facing the absurd collapse and rebirth of the world. In contrast, the protagonist of the mysterious sea of ​​​​earth thought he had gone to the sky but found that it was a cave. The tension of this plot is obviously more attractive. Then analyze the character motivation. At the beginning, the protagonist, like the protagonists of all time-travel novels, wants to use technology from the future to transform this era to benefit more people. It went smoothly for him at first, and in the process he achieved success in a secular sense, which can be regarded as a gift package for newbies in the world of grams. Then we encountered a deep world that was beyond our comprehension. At this time, the meaning of the protagonist's behavior can no longer be fully understood and recognized by the outside world. The lifting of the sleeping crisis is praised by everyone, but the medical statistics developed and the protagonist's struggle with the deep world are not many who can understand its significance. At this time, the protagonist needs someone who can keep up with him and understand his behavior (the Kua Kua group is also a tool to help readers understand the meaning of the protagonist's behavior). Every grammatical work will face such a change in the paradigm of extraordinary meaning. Most of them have extraordinary organizations that provide a value judgment framework to help readers understand, such as the Church in Mystery and the Society of Fools. The challenges faced by the protagonist in this book are more severe. Extraordinary organizations can help readers understand the progress of the protagonist's deep world strategy, but in terms of medical progress, only academic organizations can barely understand the progress of secular medicine. So the existence of the protagonist group complements the rest very well. As mentioned earlier, the image of the protagonist is very stable, but it will change as the stage and plot change. Overall, he is tired of the world. 1. In order to promote the medical career in other worlds, he has launched many side projects. I think this part is a bit too much. The author's slow update may also be affected by this factor. Dr. Liming's method of handling this part is to directly introduce the localization of alien technology, but our Professor Kraft obviously does not trust things in the deep world. I think it is better to combine the Yankee worldview with the spirit of a medical student. Even if you don't trust it, as long as all the debuffs are taken by dedicated doctors 🤓, get a mutated CT eye and connect external nerve fibers to the doctor's CNS central nervous system. The patient will at least be safe. The mental trauma suffered by the doctor is a serious threat 2. He began to build his own organization, and wanted to use the power of the organization to fight the decisive battle with the deep power. This is something I don't think is appropriate. There is no doubt about the power of the organization, but this is a Ke world. Most of the protagonists in Ke worlds are lone wolves or protagonist groups, such as the Fool and his disciples, and the captain of the Lost Home and his ship. There is a reason for this. The power that maintains the organization is the protagonist's personal charm and the belief that this method can save the world. The proof of this belief is actually shaped by the success of the protagonist. Of course, theoretically it can also be shaped by the victory of the organization, but that is a group portrait article. Finally, let me talk about what I want to say: This novel is the only Chinese online novel I am still reading. The author is a newcomer and has many wonderful ideas that transcend restraint. This made the novel outstanding in the early stages, but now in the middle stage, the story structure has become more and more oppressive to the plot, and the character arcs have also been somewhat deformed. The protagonist in the Christian world is not a leader in the secular sense, but a hero with a distinctive personality. His gift to the world is not a new medical church, but a beam of light that breaks through the darkness.

Delicate and grand, vivid and psychedelic, persistent and indifferent

A work that can be rewarded by free prostitutes like me

At first glance, you can tell that they are people of the old Tongliao Khanate. Let me tell you, how many weird small countries and hard-core ruthless people the author has read 🤭 It is not that easy to write a story about tragedies while laughing and cursing, and it is an obscure subject like Cthulhu. And this is also the greatest pleasure of this book.

I haven't read much yet so I can't help but comment first, I really like the writing style! The choice of words and sentences are very interesting. There is no dry description that is just for the sake of following the process. You can feel the author's flexible thinking and inspiration. It is very enjoyable to read.

It's a very interesting work, much more flavorful than the few Cthulhu stories I found on the home page, and the writing is not awkward, but sometimes the witticisms feel a bit too much. It's one of the few novels that can make me read from four to five o'clock in the morning at night The names are a bit hard to remember, but it's okay

It's well written. It's more relaxed than the general restraint system. It's not so depressing. It's also good at making jokes. It doesn't look tired. Ah, it doesn't look tired, but it doesn't lose its sense of restraint It's very good, very good, don't be a eunuch ()

I saw the best description of monsters in my reading range, so detailed that it was carved on the eyelids, and one word stood out, so thin. But it was too detailed. I read less than 200 chapters in one afternoon, and I got tired of it. When I get to the fungus, I don't feel as oppressive as before. Let's just keep it up for now. Just focus on this writing. You won't lose money by subscribing.

It took me more than half a year to get to 22 chapters, man!

I read the book recommended by others and saw 600,000 words in 13 months? 💀

But after reading 20 chapters, there was nothing interesting. Most of them were about hydrology.

Madam, you write so well and yet so slowly, shouldn't you introduce some good books? How else would a hungry and thirsty reader survive?

Mystery is the culmination of the K-style novels Daogui uses madness and blood to create the Chinese K-style flavor Plague Doctor quotes a lot of traditional K-series elements But only this book is really close to the hazy feeling of pointing at the moon, looking at the moon and suddenly pointing at it Mysterious, full of excitement, if there is nothing If the two supremes Zhuzi and Jiuyu don't take action, this should be the ceiling of K-style web writing

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The senior Cheluolian said repeatedly One thing to say is that the plot should actually be pretty good But the author uses a long, elegant and extremely empty vocabulary to describe the plot The high school composition teacher will give you 100 points "The cold weather increases the adrenaline" and you stretched the 10 words into a 119-word paragraph! Friend what are you doing! What are you doing! I feel stupid when I read it This is not just a plot, it is an eight-legged essay! It's really another model.

The fragment of "Snake", Kraft's first contact with abnormality. The six-sided black column is more than two meters high, and the base pattern at the bottom is winding away, like a living snake flowing. I have always liked this book, so I want to create a set of illustrations for this book, mainly about the strange scenes in the book. If you like it, you can also give your comments. (If you are not good at learning, such as poor expression in painting, spray lightly, the character design is based on the a7 boss)

It's too long to post the full text, so I used the Bailingsheng growth chart. The reading progress is selected as the associated chapter. Some other things I want to say: For one reason or another, I have the habit of deleting articles and running away from time to time. If you like this story, please feel free to leave a like and comment! You can say anything here before we become two disconnected islands in a network again.

I'm really anxious, I can't see any more and I feel like mycelium is crawling

Anyway, do a drawing while practicing...!

Second brushing, I found that the professor was still a bit like a college student at the beginning🤔 After a few days of work, he turned into a cow-horse person