The Outer God’s Child Walks the Earth

The author's writing style and control of details are excellent. In my mind, it has surpassed the most popular online novels. It is very comfortable to read, and the character creation often touches people's hearts in details... It is completely obvious that the writing is carefully crafted. The writing is like a published novel, but the plot structure is still suitable for online reading. In terms of the plot, the mature fundamentalism is consistent with the world view. I really like the mature behavioral logic of all characters that conforms to their own identity. There will be no abrupt behavior, and it is easy to immerse yourself in the world view. The three views of the article are very positive and it is comfortable to read. The author's description of the worldview is also very suitable for newcomers to the Grammar genre. I have only seen one derivative work of the Grammar genre, but I can easily understand and enter the worldview. In terms of character design, the male protagonist has a three-dimensional and realistic image. He is a lovely and charming young man. Instead of being labeled as a "Holy Father", I think he is more like a senior with a "sincere heart". He is very charming both in the novel and in reality. The images of supporting characters also become vivid in the detailed description. Regarding the "abuse of the protagonist" in some comments, it has nothing to do with it. I think whether it is abusive does not depend on how much the protagonist has been hurt, but whether the protagonist gets an achievement or a blow after paying the price and going through hardships. From this point of view, this book is not abusive at all. In addition, I like the description of the love between men and women in this book, which starts from trust and appreciation. It is not the "love at first sight after saving a life" that is often seen in many novels. The emotional line is not overwhelming and natural and touching I am not very good at writing reviews, but I really like the temperament of this book. I think this good book can be seen and liked by more people🥰 Come on, author

The plot is really heavy, and I felt sad for each character for all the hardships they encountered in the book. When Nancy first appeared on the scene, she was a lively and somewhat over-the-top girl. I didn't hate her. When she was kidnapped by Robert Miller Jr., I thought she would come back safely, but it turned out to be the seedbed for the birth of Wibert II. Her body was not buried in the ground, and her own will was twisted into a Yog follower. She is just an ordinary person who gets involved in mysterious events, and she gets involved because of her kindness to strangers. She has parents who love her, good friends, and a bright future. She didn't deserve this. And what about Laura? With her own hard work, she was admitted to a top university. Although she has a cowardly personality, she is still working hard to make a living. She still has hope. Her life has just begun. I have heard a saying that a person's personality is shaped by her past. Deep Diver Laura and student Laura have the same memory, but completely different personalities, just because of her bloodline? This can be said to be murder, a murder of Laura's past life experience. Is her experience in the past ten years so insignificant? Isn't it worth the author to spend even a little bit of pen and ink to describe it? In addition, the protagonist is also sad and angry for the suffering of others, which is good. He has not lost the most basic human ability to empathize. In some novels, the protagonist does not show any emotions that a human being should have, and is purely a word reader of the author. Back to the topic, the protagonist will be sad and angry for the suffering of others, which is a good thing, but is he too holy? When the protagonist is giving to others, has he ever thought that there are people who care about the protagonist? When they see the protagonist getting hurt while helping others, they can understand that the protagonist will gain happiness from helping others, but even so, they will still worry about the protagonist. I'm not advocating egoism, but I want to say that if he can't even hear the cries nearby, how can he hear the cries further away? I know that the essence of Ke novels is the fear of personal powerlessness in the face of a huge and unpredictable fate, but powerlessness does not mean inaction. Doing something even though you know you can't do it is also an indispensable part of K-style novels. The fearless courage shown by mortals in front of gods is what drives me to read K-style novels. Finally, I don't know if the author has ever played Dying Light 1. Before he died, Dr. Zere asked me to save those people. He told me that the citizens of Harlan City should not suffer such suffering, and they were innocent. Ordinary people like Nancy and Laura should not have to suffer like this, and they are innocent.

A kind-hearted protagonist with a strong sense of responsibility, but he feels a bit sadistic about the protagonist, which makes me sad Slow-burning, full of details, a little boring, overall okay

Finding this book in Qidian is like digging for diamonds in a garbage dump. The writing is not like most online articles that are in popular colloquial language, or are too packed with fluff and dignified to pretend to be high-minded. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are interesting and three-dimensional, and the amount of new information in each episode will not be too much or too little, making it difficult for readers to digest or feel bored. A small drawback is that sometimes I don't understand how it developed into the current situation. I have to go back and read the previous episodes to understand. Flaws do not cover up strengths. I can't wait to catch up with updates every day, come on, author!

There is a feeling of rising and falling waves, and the strings are tense. I originally thought that killing him would lead to a transition into daily life, so I could only let it sit for a while before reading it. The plot is different from traditional cool articles, and more like the feeling of traditional paper media

I couldn't stop reading once I started reading. The world view unfolded slowly but very attractively.

1. After the old man was hit, he helped him up and received the gratitude of the old man and his relatives. This should not be a poisonous point. 2. After the old man was hit, he helped the old man up. If he was blackmailed by the old man or his relatives, he should kill the blackmailer. This should not be a poisonous point. 3. After the old man was hit, he helped him up and was blackmailed by the old man or his relatives. He was unable to kill the blackmailer and lost a lot of money. This should be the poisonous point.

I really hate the word "Madonna". Once the protagonist does something good, it seems to hurt some people. Every bit of "Madonna" means that you have to watch the protagonist who is selfish, murderous, cunning, and self-interested at the expense of others. Can't you bring in a little bit of decent elements? Is the outlook on life so bad? I still put on airs, as if everyone in the world is drunk and I am sober, and I made two comments about the protagonist not being sane and too holy. Doing good deeds without thinking to save others and ignoring the limitations of personal abilities will, of course, make people feel stupid and unreal. But until now, I don't think the protagonist behaves like this. The charm of a character does not lie in how many people he kills or how many times he wins, but in the thinking and emotional entanglements behind his actions.

The children of the evil god are all mythical creatures in the beginning. You can't say that a monster gave birth to a human being, and if they are all gods, they shouldn't be called evil gods. Let alone a few people, they can eat as much as they want. As for being threatened by a gun, returning the son of a god must be crazy. In this way, I can understand that you threatened Amon with a gun, and Amon was scared to death 😌 Adam will laugh at you forever.

This book is simply in my strike zone. Whether it is a kind protagonist or an abusive protagonist as others say, it is not a problem for me. Instead, it feels very exciting because it is well written. The author's writing has a quiet sense of order, which is very comfortable to read, and the subtleties are handled very elegantly. I like it very much. Everyone likes to read different types of books. If you read too many refreshing articles, you will get bored. Rather than saying that this book is an "incorrect answer", it is better to say that there are many small highlights in this book that are different from conventional solutions. Just like Wilbur stuffing leaves into the protagonist's mouth, Wilbur only giving him peas after being killed by the protagonist, and the girl reading the novel in the library did not dare to attack Wilbur out of fear. These plots give people a look and feel that is almost impossible to see in other novels. Ordinary people like me can't even imagine that it can be written like this - I think these possible poisonous points in the eyes of others are actually shining points in my case. These complex and subtle relationships are presented in a handy way, and each person's complex personality can be summed up in a few words. They are not just simple affection or hatred, bravery or cowardice, but more like real people with weaknesses. Delicate but not obscure, vivid but not presumptuous, calm but not dull. It's delicious. This refined grain is so delicious. I'll give it to you with your monthly pass.

This book should be called Our Lady Walks on the Earth

The protagonist's younger brother is quite smart and stable. In the original novel, he was almost an ugly humanoid beast.

I've caught up very late, and here's a reminder for newcomers who want to watch, if you can accept the abuser, I don't know if this is considered an abuser at the starting point, that is, whether the protagonist saves the town, or even pays the price of his life, he is still very friendly, but others have always used him as a tool, and even tried their best to control the protagonist to ensure that the protagonist, as a family member of a cult (with bad elements), deliberately did so many disguises to join the team of justice, but the protagonist has no objection to this, but it may not necessarily be judged by others. Anyway, that's it.

Can the protagonist, Hope, surpass the Outer God Nyarra and then advance to Azathoth?

Evaluation, currently, for a specific group of readers, grass jelly. It is specifically for those who have a certain understanding of fundamentalist doctrines, or those who are willing to think and read slowly. For the general reader, non-toxic grains. For those who prefer cool writing or mainstream online writing, I don't want to use the word "poison" as a comment, because I like it very much, but it's not suitable. The writing style is excellent, with minor flaws in that some of the layout and wording are not suitable for online reading, and a few parts of the punctuation and pronouns are slightly confusing. The plot is probably still at the beginning, but the pace is very good. It cannot be considered a slow read. It can only be said that it needs to be read carefully. Please see my opening review for the suitability in this aspect. The sense of suspense and the slightly gothic feel of the genre are very good. The characters are basically reasonable and have enough arc. I don't think the protagonist's character is a flaw, but it is certainly not suitable for people who are aggressive or utilitarian. Overall review, for me personally, it is a rare excellent work, but it is difficult to say that the public prefers the micro-transformation of modern online literature that aims to overcome the original teachings, rather than the traditional online writing structure that only draws on the elements of the mysterious style.

Belated congratulations (×) Congratulations on finally being together!

I originally wanted to replace everything with more popular words, but I was warned by Sakusuke because of frequent revisions. I can only explain it here for book friends who still don't understand. Self: It is the ability to control the body, which mainly reflects balance, flexibility, muscle control and some things that are impossible to do (such as controlling the heart to stop beating). Spiritual body: It refers to the changes caused by spirituality to the body. Spirituality will make the body tend to be 'perfect', which mainly reflects the enhancement of strength, tougher skin and other organs, the ability to recover and the growth of some organs that were not originally possible. Self-perception: one's own perception ability, which mainly reflects the ability to perceive the outside world such as vision, hearing, smell, touch, etc. Inspiration: spiritual perception, simply understood as 'intuition' or 'precognition'

For some reason I always thought my brother's hair must be messy. .

The introduction is very interesting. After reading 10 chapters, I felt that the foreshadowing was too long and the plot was too bland to arouse my desire to continue reading. It is suitable for people who are patient. It is a bit boring for impatient people like me.

Should there be a beard? But the drawing looks like the old man from KFC () Also, please join the book club group!

I want to write a fanfic about Hope and Wilbur😌 Wait until I write it and I will shock you to death😏😏😏

Congratulations to this gentleman for becoming my impasto practice partner The chapters were chosen randomly

The photos are good. They are not like online articles. The author is very good at creating a restrained atmosphere through words. Moreover, the protagonist is a man with brains who can be alone when he is poor, but can help the world by being prosperous. It is very good. I really don't like to read that kind of selfish and pretentious person.

Don't be influenced by the comment section, the main character is not too virginal. The friend's parents left on horseback, only to be overtaken and eaten by the protagonist's domestic monsters. The protagonist just regretted not using the teleportation and felt sorry for the friend, especially since the friend was killed once by the protagonist. Can this also be called the Holy Mother?

Isn't this right? Boss, isn't it the Crazy Mountains? Aren't you going to challenge Xiuji 1vn Ancient One? Why did you send Mr. Hope and Love to meet the Qingyan of Excellence?

The author's writing is super good, and it reminds me of the days when I read the novel in the translated version of Science Fiction World. But this kind of writing style will definitely not be popular at the beginning, come on

He did not hesitate to summon Yug as a pregnant woman and as a lolita (it is not that the related chapters were chosen randomly and a second generation was chosen to appear)

Wait a minute, am I reading an online article? How does it look like a translated physical book?

I suggest changing the introduction. I feel that the introduction is not suitable for the audience. I have read this book several times before, but because the introduction did not suit my appetite, I did not read the book. Later, I saw someone recommending this book in the review of the book Anomalies Notes. I have read more than a hundred chapters now, and I feel that it is a good book. I think the problem is that the introduction does not clearly indicate whether you want to write a more pure Cthulhu or a cool story with a cloak of skin. In addition, the title "Son of the Outer God" is too lofty, causing many readers who want to read invincible cool stories to come in, while some readers who want to see the world view of Cthulhu miss this book instead. This may be the reason for the polarization in the comment area. My suggestion is to change the introduction to be more interesting and to indicate the main character's situation in the book. The above are just my personal opinions. I hope the author can consider it.

Wilbur; there is no relevant role for the child (Dabei Then let's play with his brother (What are you doing?