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Can you please stop letting this childhood sweetheart show up? Once you get over it, let it go. Why do you keep coming out to disgust people?

Chapter about childhood sweethearts. First of all, I'm sorry. I thought it was a pretty good story, but I didn't expect it to fall apart. I thought about it for a long time and found that there was indeed a big problem with the plot, and the focus was wrong. The reason why it stayed on that day was entirely due to the male protagonist's repentance and passive inaction due to the rumors at the time. The key point is Yukino Yukito's hope of being forgiven when he grows up. And what she did did not grow at all, which conflicted with the outline. (Actually, my outline is very rough and there is no detailed outline at all.) The outline states that Yukito learned a lot from the confession incident in junior high school. However, I still described it like a little girl. This is different from the character in my outline. It is my problem and my lack of experience. The childhood sweethearts chapter has been re-edited in order to fit the character design of Yukito Tsukino in the outline. Readers who have read the later chapters can re-read it, and the overall plot will have little impact. I'm sorry for making readers feel disgusted. In fact, I have been listening to readers' opinions. This childhood sweetheart plot is my own problem. Because of the obvious discrepancy between the description and the outline, it was abrupt and even made readers hate Yukino Yukito. I punished myself by not drinking iced Coke for three days. I will never make such stupid mistakes in the future.

This novel is like a chocolate with a 💩 appearance. The childhood sweetheart is really a failure. The last one that made me very uncomfortable was the heroine who wrote more than 300 chapters. She suddenly became the female partner, and then let Huang Mao fall in love with her. This novel is different. Although the childhood sweetheart only dated the senior for one day, whether it was her feelings for the male protagonist or In terms of time, I probably didn't do those things, but it just made me feel uncomfortable. Maybe my life is not perfect. I wanted to read the novel to make myself happy, not to make myself uncomfortable. In short, I read it with a very disgusting mentality. Don't write like this next time. Most people will be persuaded to quit, and Shen Nong will be poisoned to death.

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Before reading the book, I habitually browsed through the comment section, and found that Qingmei was a hot topic. I didn't pay much attention to this at first, but later I saw that the plot was really entertaining me. With a glance, I identified Qingmei as a pure fun person. Her behavior of "because I was afraid that you wouldn't like me, so I agreed to the senior's confession" was just looking for fun in my opinion. It's a pity that this sister can't afford to have fun. She wants to have fun but doesn't dare to bear the consequences. She watches the male protagonist survive alone, and finally disgusts the male protagonist. Are you a piece of cake? If you really like him, why don't you stand up for him in his most difficult time? You really like him, why don't you agree to his confession? If you really like him, why do you accept other people's confessions? You are a pure injustice! If you really get married to the male protagonist, after two or three years of marriage, will you one day feel that the male protagonist may not love you anymore and then have sex with another man to test the male protagonist? The male protagonist is being forced by you to get divorced. Now, why don't you say that wearing it doesn't count as giving? Happy

The plot of the author's childhood sweethearts was a bit disgusting, but it was my senior sister who made me keep reading. In serious novels, reading this kind of "For your own good, I have to do it!" And then agreeing to be threatened, this self-righteous female partner feels like a minotaur. If this book started with the senior sister content and it was just the senior sister, I think it would be almost full marks. I feel that the author likes to write about this kind of polyamorous relationship, such as gay friends, and the heroine Yoshida occasionally being attracted to men. Is this the author's bad taste? The subject matter you write about is not very popular, and with this content, it feels like you are deliberately screening out readers... I can't say.

I really couldn't help it, and I'm not targeting the author, but I feel like the book would have been better without a certain character.

I have to say that the author's writing style is very good, and other treatments are also very good. However, although the childhood sweetheart story has been changed, the feeling of being threatened ntr is really off-putting and completely ruins the sense of reading.

I recommended this book to a female friend who doesn't read Hitsugari. She said she would make fun of the author's part about Ome if he had a psychological problem (no malice).

You should all be aware that this book focuses on daily life and stories. Many readers like to save it and wait until the number of words is high before finishing it. They read one person's story in one breath. However, this is very difficult for a new book. I hope everyone can read the latest chapters. The author does not dare to ask the old man to do things, but just hopes to support him. This is very important to get recommendations in the new book period.