They Only Want Me to Confess

Open a like forum, crowdfund to find the author, and update 10 chapters every day. Those who can't write and won't be fed can leave me a message.

The author has been in a state where good books are not popular for a long time at the starting point. I hope everyone can give me some help.

Carefully selected character designs for the second copy, the desolate princess and the loyal knight. Jpg

Ah, the author created a really sweet Haruka

Stop torturing Yaoyao😭, everyone else has recognized it, it feels like adding Yaoyao into it will create a grand Shura field😏

I think the copy is indeed not written well enough, which is not the most important thing Another point is that the style of this book is wavering. If you want to focus on the world of the copy, you should quickly let the protagonist grow in strength and mentality. If you focus on daily life, you should reduce the extraordinary description and strengthen the description and interaction of the heroines... Now, even those who want to read a cool novel are not satisfied, and those who want to read a romance novel have not seen the lovable and desirable side of the girl.

The writing is OK, but the copy is too slow. I think the most attractive part of this book is daily life, but the author made the copy too long, and I can't see the growth of the protagonist. Now I don't even know the name of the first heroine. . . .

Let me remind the author that in the first dungeon, because of the sacrifice, the end of the dungeon had a clear time point, and the protagonist was always looking for clues, finding out the truth, and saving the heroine. Therefore, the plot is very suitable and does not seem watery. From the beginning, I know that it will end soon, so I read each chapter with a feeling of knowing that the end is approaching, and I am not anxious. As for the second dungeon, I don't know what the ending will be from the beginning, I don't know how long it will take for the ending to happen, and I don't know where it will end. I can only see the protagonist accommodating the princess and gaining experience. Especially when accommodating the princess has a greater proportion and the protagonist is not obviously stronger, it will make people feel that it will take a long time to end, and it will be easy to be impatient, so they will think you are stupid. But because your setting is obviously that the protagonist and the devil are too far apart, and it is difficult to upgrade in the past, if you write the ending now, it will be very abrupt, and the plot will be completely ruined, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic; if you continue at the current pace, then it is obvious that some people will find it boring and wasteful, and will keep the book or even abandon it. Therefore, the rest of the story in this second dungeon needs to be controlled by yourself. Either it should be short and reasonable, or it should be long and exciting, or it should be a compromise. By the way, the span between the first dungeon and the second dungeon is too short. The reader has not completely come out of the first dungeon, and is dragged out on a blind date with the first heroine when she is still in the honeymoon period. Therefore, the second heroine will definitely be disliked when she is not attractive enough. This is also one of the reasons why she dislikes you. I want you to end it quickly and go back to continue your honeymoon. The above are purely personal opinions. If you have different opinions, you can post them yourself and let the author make his own evaluation.

It's a good but not popular series. It starts with a copy of the underworld. I thought it was a suspense novel. Come on, author, if you get through it, it will become popular.

I will give you a few hundred rewards as a proof of the few chapters that are released╰(‵□′)╯