A Cultivating Family That Started as a Casual Cultivator

Although it's a bit white, I can read it, but the paragraph is too long. To establish a family, pig's feet are just one person, and there are more wives to have children. I have read a book about family. I don't marry a wife, but build a family with a few people, and then take in orphans. It's disgusting.

The protagonist is too licky. In the previous life, he worked hard for three hundred years before he got a popular golden elixir technique. In this life, after talking to the heroine, he immediately gave him a Nascent Soul-level technique. The protagonist asked to take responsibility. The heroine acted like it was all your fault. There was no need to deliberately poison.

Maybe this is my first time writing, the storyline is too straightforward

You are the one who supports the family. I don't understand the use of creating such a family.

Come on, author, it's best to break it down into paragraphs. It's a bit tiring to read, just my personal opinion.

Stories can. It's just too straightforward. There should be more descriptions, scenes, etc. This thing of yours is too fluid. No sense of ups and downs at all

I'm so lucky, I didn't see the golden finger, bad review

It's unreasonable for his daughter to go out and wander around. You have to know that it's unreasonable to go out and let people steal the house when she's almost golden elixir and needs someone to guard her.

You are planning to start a family, but you only have one wife? Let's learn from Zhu Yuanzhang!

These are notes, not novels

Have any of you turned on the listening mode? I found that the listening mode of this Qidian software will automatically switch the voice. In the emotional male mode, it will automatically switch to two voice modes, one is clear and clear, and the other has a fuzzy and hoarse voice.

If you want to build a family, you will not lack resources or skills! There is no shortage of wives and children! There are only four people in the family now! What are you doing to worship an elder now? If you need a magic talisman, just buy it directly! I'm talking about getting out a Foundation Establishment Pill! Could it be that I have run out of resources or foundation-building pills? Author, you are just making things up, so you should have some control over it! Totally out of ideas!

The novel is too dry (too many settings), too watery (too many opinions), and the storyline is too weak

The writing is okay, keep it up. I wish you better and better as you write!

I wrote the post-production to death! Why are you going to make up nonsense later?

The golden elixir will be obtained before Chapter 60. What do you write next?

The author must have run away, and it hasn't been updated yet. I said it took a few days, but it's already been seven days.

I wrote all the rest of the article to death! I can't make it up now!

It can be used as an outline to enrich the plot and write two or three hundred more chapters. It's very good. This idea