Boy Mom in the Pokémon World

I read the Pokémon fanfic next door. I have discovered a shortcoming of this book. That is, there is no core. The whole book is just stitched together, without a clear ideological core. The whole text looks novel, but once the novelty wears off, only empty words remain. Even if the brain stitching is good, without a clear core subject, the follow-up of the book will be boring, and only hydrology will be left in the end.

It's an outrageous book, it's a bit indifferent, it doesn't have the warmth of training Pokémon, and its 4th skill is also a failure.

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and it came with chicken ham sausage, spicy cabbage instant noodles, French bread and Wangzi milk. People gathered around to read the great book and give the author a big CALL, ^_^

Say! Love me!!

I read it in one sitting and thought about changing the title.

On the contrary, I think the four-skill limit is an excellent setting in official games, and recent animations basically do not use more than four skills in the same game. Note that it is a game. As for the next game, when you change skills, you can still only use four skills. This is the rule. I don't hate this setting. For now As for the pre-animation, I feel that the animation is leaning towards the direction of the game, but I still hope that the four-skill restriction will be removed when there are no rules in wild fighting (although the animation does not explicitly state it after ag, it basically still has the four-skill restriction) 🙂 In my personal opinion, I don't think the four-skill skill is a poisonous point in the competition.

The setting is obviously very attractive, but the writing of these world views is too messy, and the existence of Pokémon has been compressed. I couldn't stick to it after watching it twice 😢

There are too many Conan elements and too few Pokémon elements. Those who read Conan will not read your book, and those who read Pokémon will be persuaded to quit. This is a disservice to both ends. If I really want to be determined to write Conan, I suggest changing my name to Ke Xue, a male mother from the Pokémon world.

I was persuaded to give up. Mystery➕Pokémon is a very attractive theme, but I really can't stand Conan's scenes. I came to see Pokémon!

The cuteness of Bulbasaur, a heart-warming short story

This title is still too stupid

To be honest, Dimensional Forum is definitely the pinnacle of the author.

This book is not so much a Pokémon fan as it is a Conan fan with some Pokémon stitched together.

Every time you go to a new place, you will encounter a case, and then you will solve the case. After solving the case, you will get achievements in the dojo, and then change the map and do it again. The protagonist is like a migrant worker traveling around, and I feel tired for the protagonist. There is basically no content about communicating with the elves to cultivate relationships. I feel that the elves are just tools to assist in solving crimes and fighting.

It's really disgusting to write a comic in the name of Pokémon. The Pokémon theme has always been very attractive, but if you blindly change the settings, the Pokémon elements will become less and less and Conan elements will pile up.

Are your introduction + title and your content actually trying to sell you something? 😥 Just say it's a fan of Pokémon and Conan. I originally came here to read this novel for Pokémon + Mystery, but it turns out it's full of Conan. I jumped around to read Conan and Conan, and I felt like I'd been cheated. 😥

I still prefer the career system of the secondary forum, that is, the plot is too... Bloody. You can go back to it and sort out your own problems. It does not necessarily mean that it is a mystery.

The rest of the story looks pretty good, and the different worldviews don't look out of place when put together. It's just that the author really doesn't know how to write about battles. The whole story is about numerical values ​​or skill awakenings, but what about the special effects of skills? You didn't describe it at all, you just wrote the name of the skill, and then the opponent fell down inexplicably, or you described how the skill value was so powerful, but this is a novel! It's not a report! If you want to write about how powerful a skill is, in addition to its numerical value, you also have to describe its special effects! Otherwise, I don't know what your skills are like. After reading more than 300 chapters, I only know what your skills are. I can't imagine the fighting scenes based on your description. Do I have to look at the special effects of your skills on Baidu to read your novel?

The pace is too slow and Conan's atmosphere is too heavy. What I want to see is Pokémon, not the modified version of Conan.

You've made yourself miserable. The most you write about Pokémon is to integrate the special chapters of comics and animations. What kind of mystery do you have in the whole comic? Who wants to read comprehensive comics these days?

As the author, you write about the Pokémon world, and the plots of other anime you write should also be based on the settings of the Pokémon world. There are so many Conan plots where people die at every turn. It's like watching a Conan fan with Pokémon added. You should grasp the key point. This is the Pokémon world, and even Conan can't kill people casually. Now it gives me the feeling that the people in the Pokémon world are not as good as the Dark Organization, Rocket The team didn't just kill people and silence them. You always change the circumstances of various cases because of some property disputes. The book is set in the Pokémon world. We need to write more about Pokémon. The plots of other anime must also be based on the culture of the Pokémon world. What is the culture of the Pokémon world? The symbiosis of humans and Pokémon. Now as soon as I see Conan Heiji Sonoko, I know what the plot behind you is, and I have no desire to read it. I hope you can think about it seriously later.

After sewing so much of the world view, I suddenly wanted to suggest that the author sew Kamen Rider into it, just like the various belt accessories in Kamen Rider. The Poke Ball is stuffed into the belt, such as the form of a fire-breathing dragon or a water arrow turtle.

After becoming a big player in the world, I thought that this author would become a great god very quickly, but everything turned out not to be so good afterwards.

There are over 300 chapters of Harvest Ceremony, almost 800 chapters, and the harvest ceremony has not been held yet, and the case is still being solved.

It's boring around chapter 500. The heroine of the garden is really unimpressed. The expert pharmacists who laid the groundwork in front of her have no effect at all (that is, they are used in one or two field battles, but it is not any fun to watch). The usual training does not pay attention to the use of medicines, so is it reasonable to start the game as a pharmacist? The pharmacy company that I opened obviously has a good future, and the special incense is a good point, but after waiting for 100 chapters, there is no more content. None of the Pokémon collected are popular characters, only Gengar and Pippi are interesting. Originally, the Chengdu chapter was only interesting because of the game, but the animation was not good and I had to write it, so I ran out of patience. I saw the author's post-cut remarks at the end. It's okay if the author wants to write a long story. For example, the beginning of the story about mortals cultivating immortals is relatively boring, but the fun part is to write one story after another. This book is a bit cool, but not many, and it is considered a comprehensive comic. I personally like Conan, Sakura, and Slam Dunk. It can be seen that the author did not put much thought into combining the cases, which resulted in too few Pokémon in the end. The combination of Sakura and Chengdu was disastrous, and it was too routine and the pace was slow. The author has many explosive points in his hands, but he just won't let them go. Then can the audience get used to them? There is also a problem with the choice of heroine. Xiaoxia, Nazi, and even Sakura are all fine, but Sonoko is a no-brainer, she is off-putting. The above are just my personal thoughts. I couldn't stand it after reading half of it. I can see that it was very difficult for the author to write after 500 chapters, so I guess it was expected that I cut it in the end.

The super interesting secrets + Pokémon ended up like this Conan's kind of detective style is completely unsuitable. It's so messy with so many things mixed in. It's better to just sew the secrets in.

In the early stage, Pokémon + Mystery were quite promising, but when Conan appeared later, something seemed wrong. The main reason was that there was a sense of fragmentation. It was like passing a traffic accident, and you were a passerby to judge it, and you also found out that there was another hidden story to dig into. It felt like a hard-hitting, not as good as the Clow card. After all, it is a treasure and it is not inconsistent. I wish you a bright future.

Scroll all the way down the table of contents, you are going to compete in the rookie competition and prepare to reach the finale...

It's all about Conan, and there aren't even many Pokémon, let alone secrets.

The content of Ke is too high. Elves and Conan are opposites. If you have time to write about Conan, why not write about other characters?