I Burned the Heavens to Ash in Kyoto

In fact, the stories in each dungeon are quite good, and there are no major problems. However, they always end in tragedy. When I see a Yamata-no-Orochi dungeon, the protagonist must be given a dilemma at the end, whether to save his friends or save most people. You write that little girl so tragically and tragically, and then arrange for her to be resurrected so that most people will die. If she is not resurrected, will we readers feel comfortable? That's it for now. I don't like watching tragedies. This author likes some kind of Japanese mourning. If you like it, just read it. If you don't like tragedies, forget it.

It is recommended that the protagonist be renamed Li Mei

Let's learn about Japan's ancient background here. Many brothers may not know much about Japanese history, which may cause obstacles. I will briefly introduce it here. The following is the general history of Japan on earth: 1. The Izumo Kingdom Period (In the mythical era, it is said that Susanoo founded the Izumo Kingdom. The specific time is unknown. It is speculated that it is the period from the time when Xu Fu fled to the Three Kingdoms) 2. The Yamatai Kingdom Period (This is the era of Queen Himiko as we know it, which is roughly the Three Kingdoms period in our country) 3. The Tumulus Period (the information is incomplete, not much is known) 4. The Asuka Period (the time corresponds to the Sui Dynasty of our country, when the Fujiwara family only covered the days, and the entire Japanese institutional culture learned from the Sui Dynasty) 5. Nara Period (the time corresponds to the Tang Dynasty) 6. The Heian-kyo Period (the monster we are familiar with, Abe Seimei, is this era, and the time corresponds to the middle and late Tang Dynasty) 7. The Taira Era (the Taira family became the shogun, representing the decline of the entire Japanese public family, the rise of the samurai family, and the samurai class officially entered the stage of history) 8. The Kamakura Era (the Genji shogunate and the Hojo shogunate, the main world where the protagonist lives) The prototype of the world is this era. The time corresponds to the Southern Song Dynasty) 9. Muromachi Period 10. Warring States Period 11. Tokugawa Shogunate (the swordsmanship, schools and various swordsmen we are familiar with are basically the Tokugawa Period and Ming Dynasty) People who lived during the Qing Dynasty, the time corresponds to the late Ming Dynasty to the Qing Dynasty) 12. Meiji Restoration As for the fictional alternate world in my book, many eras have been deleted and modified, as follows: 1. The Izumo Kingdom Era (the second subtitle) The era when the protagonist killed Yamata no Orochi, I put all the ancient tombs, Asuka, and Nara into this era) 2. The post-Heiankyo era (the fall of Izumo country and the establishment of Sakura country) 3. The Taira shogunate (the Fujiwara family declined, in my setting The Taira family moved their capital to the capital of God) 4. The Genji Shogunate (the era where the protagonist's main world is located, the overall system of this era inherits the system of the Asuka period, with the addition of the feudal lord system) The timeline will be very clear in this way. The second copy is written about the Izumo Kingdom era. The Japanese swordsmanship school did not flourish until after the Warring States Period and was fully formed. Most people's stereotypes of ancient Japan are from the Warring States Period and even the Tokugawa Period. The Izumo Kingdom era (it is doubtful whether it exists or not) is more than a thousand years away from the Tokugawa era. Even the Genji shogunate where the main world of the protagonist is located was 500 years before the prosperity of the Japanese swordsman school. Japan in this era as a whole imitated the Sui and Tang Dynasties, which was completely different from the stereotyped ancient Japan. Japanese culture in this era was more like a beggar monkey version of the Sui Dynasty, and local changes were made on this basis.

It feels okay when I write it, Liangcao, but why is it that every copy is always a bit pessimistic, and someone related to it always has to die?

After seeing the latest fifty chapters, the main plot of this book is more Crusoe-style, mixed with most books about extraordinary demons. Traces of the copies can be found in anime or novels, but they are so tampered with that they are no different from the originals. Because most of it is original, some plots are a bit depressing. The protagonist's abilities are somewhat contradictory, and the combination of extraordinary abilities (substitutes) and regular abilities (weirdness) is not very good. The character of the protagonist is okay, and there are currently no Madonna or wisdom plots. But this book sets up various pitfalls, mainly because some of the copies are from the past timeline, plus weirdness and demons. The whole thing will be a bit chaotic and the pace will be very slow. Summary: This book has a lot of pitfalls, slow pace, confusing plot, and a little depressing. There are flaws in the ability integration (which may become more and more serious later on). The protagonist has a decent personality, no intelligence loss, and not weak abilities. The overall feeling is that you can take a look at it, or keep watching it. Worrying about the later stage. It is not considered a fairy grass at present, but it is also edible.

After reading the first dungeon, I feel pretty good. Isn't that girl an NPC? If you die, you will die

Yidong

Forehead. . I feel like the writing is average? Is it that good?

The title of the book sounds like a good read, but the comments section says it's a sad read.

Yiji