Get the Talent Panel at the Start

Why not get a welfare shot? Because you want to put the protagonist on the weak side, but the way you write it is simply disgusting. If everyone in the world is physically and mentally above ten, and the protagonist is at one, how dare you write such a plot?

There is no difference between the protagonist awakening his memory and not awakening it, it is not helpful at all! There is also this talent system, where God rewards those who work hard... I don't see the role of it... It's almost transparent!

I've only been working for a month and yet I'm helping others with things. What a great conscience! Wow⊙∀⊙!

I haven't even finished my one-month internship, and I want to deal with gangsters for others. And with artificial intelligence involved, I didn't even have enough to eat.

I really can't understand the fact that the protagonist in the future high-tech world doesn't have enough to eat.

The writing style needs to be improved, the protagonist's IQ is not good enough, the author.

This start is so poisonous to me, I want to ask everyone, the boss of your workplace was beaten because his son did something he shouldn't have done, will you stand up for him? Unless there is that kind of very great kindness, I can understand this kind of thing

Bro, are you kidding me? With the panel here, you will definitely become a top person. The novel is for us to read and the author is writing it. However, if this happens in real life, an artificial intelligence will not have any countermeasures. How dare you stay by your side? A thing that may accelerate your growth, you don't know how much trouble it will cause later on. Even if it is close to you, you don't know if it will cause trouble! Artificial intelligence has no growth limit yet, consider Skynet! Author, can you write better? Or do you think it will be conquered, so all logic and risks are unimportant!

If you can't write, you go to the factory to make screws. What the hell is the plot?

It's a big poisonous point at the beginning, so you don't need to look at it later.

It can be seen from the introduction that it is a hodgepodge, right? After reading too many novels, it loses its own core. Cthulhu is not understood, Xianxia is not understood, Western Fantasy is not understood, and they are forced to write them all together, and the result is that nothing can be written well.

Questioning the Heart is a really great story. I don't think it's suitable for me to write it before it's released and I don't have much strength. If I write it, I feel it's more suitable to go through two or three chapters. Also, after writing about Questioning the Heart, I went into a fantasy world. If I just trust others to help others, it will be completely unreadable.

The idea is good, but I don't have enough writing skills and I'm a bit nosy.

The previous writing was not good, so many people quit. Questioning the Heart Pass sounds funny. During the training, some people didn't behave like those who passed the Asking Heart Pass, and there were two others who were eager to break through. This setting is very redundant. The appearance of the Dingo Gang is superfluous, you will find that these two gangs do not play any role in the article, but the characters are portrayed with great character and intelligence, but it does not work. The school is also very redundant, and the description of the school is not detailed enough. There are very few descriptions of the exchanges and emotions between the characters. Even if they are childhood sweethearts, the most impressive thing is that they changed clothes twice. They are fresh and cute, like small animals, and can eat. There is a little psychological description, and only two blushes deepen the impression. The plot was not set up well at the beginning, but the different world was expanded later, which suddenly highlighted that the protagonist has no obvious goal. The key is that the content seems to be very empty, especially the author's concept of happiness is not clear enough, so the writing is too plain. For example, when the protagonist kills a bird in school, adding a paragraph about the students' reaction to the protagonist's amazement would have raised the level to a higher level. However, it was not included, making the protagonist's heroic prowess seem superfluous. But he is a very famous person in school, so the author will only show the protagonist in terms of results, not the process. The same goes for the breakthrough section of Lianhua Mountain. The live broadcast machine was clearly set up, and it was deliberately written that it was still live broadcast, but there was no mention of the shocked reaction of the live broadcast audience when they saw the protagonist killing monsters easily. It was obvious that there was only one more section. There is no mention of the main character being known by the audience at the end. Instead, the young generation is told by their masters that this young man is very powerful. Looking at it this way, this novel is really ordinary. There are also some foreshadowings that are buried inexplicably. For example, the story at the beginning of Zhuang Zhou Mengdie is too long, and the foreshadowing is only given later. Why did Mengdie not tell it earlier? There are too many talents added together. The protagonist does not make full use of his talents. Instead, the author adds new plots by adding talents. None of the descriptions of the homeschool restaurant scene were realistic enough. But the content and plot behind it are still okay, for example, the test section is quite unique. I'm still looking forward to the future development. The summary is that it lacks emotions, lacks details, the plot is too fast, the outline is not compact enough, there are too many talents, and some settings are not pleasing to the eye.

Regarding the author's IQ and the protagonist's IQ being equal, the writing is pretty good for someone who hasn't graduated from elementary school.

,,, Feel it! If you meddle in other people's business, aren't you seeking death? Shouldn't you be invincible?

Whether it is falling into a whirlpool of disputes or developing peacefully, the main thing is to highlight the protagonist's ability to turn the tide or develop happily. But the latest chapter makes me unhappy, this

My practice still needs to be supervised. It poisoned me again. Goodbye.

I read this book. I was able to read it so-so at first, but in the end, I got addicted to Chapter 54. What did you think of this plot? It's so poisonous, it's just disgusting.

Why does the protagonist feel a bit like Hong Kong in the 1960s?

Does it look good? Personally I don't think it looks good

The book shortage has moved on, Tower Defense: Public Enemy

The author repeatedly emphasizes that what is improved is talent, not skills. But are you sure you understand the difference between talent and skill? There is an upper limit to improving skills, but there is no upper limit to improving talents. If the talent is improved, it means stronger physical adaptability and a higher upper limit. If your talent for doing something improves, that means your physical condition has improved. Reflected in practice, every practice progresses faster than the previous one. (Of course, referring to the same realm) If it is just talent reflected in specialized skills, what is the difference from other skill panels? Once you become proficient in the exercises, the results will be better. Moreover, the speed at which talents are realized is even slower, and only quantitative changes can lead to qualitative changes.