While Others Train in Martial Arts, I Create Worlds

I laughed when I saw that drinking the Origin of the World increased my strength by a hundred kilograms. I'm afraid you didn't buy this Origin of the World from Pin Xixi😆

The legendary three golden chapters: soul penetration, death of both parents, school goddess goddess (group family), love rival classmates, and college entrance examination candidates

I hope I won't be a eunuch anymore. I'll raise 200 chapters first, vote on time, subscribe on time, or eunuchs won't read your books in the future 😅

The latest chapter, where the heroine stabbed the hero, persuaded me to quit. The training resources consumed by the girl are completely provided by the male protagonist. She only provides spiritual comfort to the male protagonist without any substantial help. She depends on the male protagonist to live together and is stabbed to death when she is kissed! And you think you can't date the male protagonist if he's angry? Anyway, I couldn't describe how disgusting I felt watching this plot, and I couldn't continue reading it.

After reading Chapter 32, the plot is cliche, embarrassing, and bloody. I really can't stand it, I even think the author wrote it like this on purpose, just to screen readers 😂

The author wrote a lot of old routines from the past, and the origin of that world was so broken that he only gained a few hundred kilograms of strength with one drop.

The plot of Chapter 36 is a bit old-fashioned and poisonous. With several layers of debuffs, you are truly experiencing a Renaissance. If you don't come out early and don't come out late, you come out at this time. It is probably because Ling Tian is self-righteous and feels that the protagonist's potential has been exhausted and he is trying to manipulate him. Then the protagonist suddenly puts down his cruel words and flies away to another school. Finally, after a few months, he improves a wave. Ling Tian jumps out and says it is a coincidence. Then Ling Tian keeps getting slapped in the face, and the protagonist sings all the way.

Some suggestions for the author: 1. In the post-apocalyptic base city era where technology has not come to an end and is even progressing, the protagonist has perfect scores in cultural classes. Not only is he not recommended for admission to a top university focusing on technology, he is even ridiculed by many classmates. Even Wu Lingong's father felt sorry for him. He was the boss of a big company, and he was a talented person. This was very inconsistent! 2. In this era, scientists should come up with some things: such as "Feasibility Analysis of National Physique 1.0", "About the development and application of bionic devices for the mutant parts of mutant beasts and mutant people", "About the development and application of biological materials for the mutant parts of mutant beasts and mutant people, and artificial synthesis methods." 3. It is best for the author to add one or two sentences of description of the appearance of some main characters when they appear, and later add some descriptions of greed, lust, justice, evil, hard work, laziness and other characters. For example, Wu Lingkong was an important character in the early stage. The author did not even describe his appearance when he appeared, and his personality was also very popular. It can be said that he is the most commonly used protagonist friend template in novels that start with the college entrance examination. 4. A question arising from the third point. When I was short of books, the first thing I looked at when I was looking for a book at Qidian was the character cards. If there were many character cards and the character cards at the top had more entries, I would be interested in reading the content, because the content would never be boring, and might even be interesting. On the contrary, novels with few character cards, no character cards including the protagonist, or only one or two entries will be absolutely boring.

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The writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch.