The Brass Lord

Well written Only the protagonist has problems Emotional instability, all kinds of exaggerated expressions of surprise, and the adaptability is worse than that of the villagers Looking at it now, it does not look like adults under modern education And it is a bit anxious to start the next encounter without following the Wanxiang Gate. A tiger has just left the village, but Master Yin actually chose to stay when he was still around Even if you want to deal with the evil spirit It is the best solution to understand the basic information first Now that the protagonist has no idea about everything and is blind to everything A large organization at least has complete basic training. At least the protagonist can understand the world's human geography and spiritual practice system It's very frustrating to always encounter situations where you don't know anything, and you have to rely on your life to survive.

Saw 20. . . I feel that this should not be in fantasy, but in suspense, and I feel that Pigfoot did not make good use of this golden finger. It is not reckless enough in nightmares, but a bit too reckless in reality. . In addition, as a reader, I feel that the author gives too little information and all of it is based on pig's feet. Without God's perspective, I am a bit confused.

You have to say yes, the writing and foreshadowing of the world view of this book are good, but you have to say no, it relies entirely on the protagonist's self-talk and inner thoughts to give readers information, rather than relying on the interaction between the protagonist, the characters, and the plot. Reading from the third person in this way will be tiring and confusing. And one chapter is stunned three times, and 80% of the protagonists are mentally active, what? It's better to change it to first person. It's only a few hundred thousand words and I already have the urge to jump to chapters. I like this idea better. I originally wanted to subscribe to it all, but I'm afraid that I won't be able to read it later, so I'll forget it.

The author made the protagonist's situation extremely dangerous, but he also wrote a lot of psychological descriptions in a leisurely manner. It feels like the protagonist is thinking and time stops. Forget it, you wrote a bunch of guesses and reasoning and rejected them if they were wrong, and then you made a lot of mental guesses... The final conclusion is to judge based on the actual situation😂 This reminds me of a certain famous saying: When mortals think, God laughs.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, but I still don't know what I'm writing about~😒

People nowadays still like to read cool articles about pretending to be cool and slap in the face. With such an interesting setting and excellent writing, I won't even read it.

I think it's quite interesting, but it's a pity that the last book was gone.

The writing is very good, but the author seems to have ignored the upgrading of the protagonist. When he saw the Brass Gate and became a waiter, he should have written out how to upgrade to the second level, instead of hiding everything. It is very tiring to read it now.

Personally, I think this novel is pretty good. I have the same idea as one of the reviewers. The main character is shocked and shocked, and the description of emotions is not very good. I heard this novel from the first chapter to the latest chapter, and this one problem is quite big. Of course, there are many other problems that are not easy to hear when listening to the book.

Well written, I think it is a masterpiece