Editing Entries, Starting as a Sect Disciple

Wow, they got to base in the fourth chapter! So real and unpretentious. I hope the author doesn't abandon the story.

You come in claiming it's your cheat code, without even questioning if it's a bug? What an abstract concept!

Because of the unique nature of the game's storyline, which is mostly flashbacks, a chronological account might be readable. However, reality unfolds in real-time, and a chronological account would put readers to sleep. Many authors with weak writing skills face this problem when writing about two worlds.

Every time I write about reality, I'm reminded of a joke: a person sees a pile of shit, knows it's shit, but keeps smelling, licking, and tasting it, then finds another pile to smell, lick, and taste, finally confirming it's shit. Writing about reality is just like writing about a pile of shit.

The chaste and virtuous woman seduced the male protagonist after knowing him for only three chapters (less than ten days according to the book). Where is chastity?

The author's handling of the plot has major problems; could they please stop writing about reality?

Is being a "lone star" or possessing golden qualities a curse that will bring you bad luck, author? Are people from the Hehuan Sect really that naive? The Hehuan Sect members aren't as adept at playing games as you, nor are they any smarter than you. To remain a virgin in the Hehuan Sect is truly remarkable.

Li Huanhuan: Although the official career prospects are good, the Hehuan Sect is the main stage. After all, the exclusive missions are also for the Hehuan Sect. I only occasionally come back to cultivate with the protagonist for high-level map missions, changing cultivation techniques and skills, etc. Su Xiao: Finding the Great Sword Sect is her essential need.

It's alright. Why is no one here? Is the word count too low?

Please write less about reality; I really have no interest in reading it, mainly because it's poorly written.