Editing Entries, Starting as a Sect Disciple

Excellent review. Chapter 4 hits the mark. Real and unpretentious. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.

You said it was your golden finger. Do you think it's a bug? ? ? What an abstract spirit

Because of the particularity of the plot in the game, most of it is retrospective, so you can still read it when you write a running account, but the reality is happening in real time. People who read the running account you write will want to sleep. Many authors who are not good at writing have this problem when writing about two worlds. The best way to deal with it is to make trade-offs and greatly reduce the world that you are not good at. Moreover, the pits dug in the real world are not novel at present, and it is difficult to attract people

Every time I write about reality, I think of a joke. A person sees a piece of shit, and even though he knows it is shit, he keeps smelling, licking, and tasting it. Then he looks for another person to continue smelling, licking, and tasting, and finally confirms that it is shit. Writing about reality is like a piece of shit.

The chaste and fierce girl knows the protagonist for three chapters (less than ten days according to the book) and then overthrows the hero Where is the chastity?

The author has a big problem with the plot, can he not write about reality?

Can the Lonely Star of Heavenly Evil or the Golden Quality Kill You? Author, are there any people from the Hehuan Sect so simple? The Hehuan Sect is no better at playing than you, and the mind is no smarter than yours. He is an even more powerful person who can still remain a virgin in the Hehuan Sect.

Li Huanhuan: Although the official career prospects are good, the Hehuan Sect is the home field. After all, the exclusive mission is also the Hehuan Sect, such as advanced map tasks, changing skills and skills, etc. I occasionally come back to double practice with the protagonist Su Xiao: She just needs to find the Great Sword Sect, and the protagonist cannot provide her with the swordsmanship skills and skills she needs. Ability, skill, flying sword, need psychological counseling, don't be sold and useless and give people money Yang Liuyi: The escort agency is naturally suitable for her, and the exclusive task is to join the escort agency to exercise her knowledge, courage, control skills, combat experience, etc. By the way, the branch line "Father's Abnormality" is developed, and Just Even the protagonist cannot provide a large number of skills and skills required for her fusion skills. Master and develop the escort agency → have funds → win-win Shitai: Half-human and half-demon has a high upper limit. Whether developing a nunnery or going to the demon mountain or demon sect, everything goes smoothly. He is well-mannered, worldly, wise, resourceful, calm and calm. There are degrees of advance and retreat, etc. From the beginning, everyone's attitude changed after killing the Tiger Walker, which has proved that the master should be given the opportunity to improve his qualifications. After all, purple is not enough, it depends on the author's willingness to let it go. If the latter is the case, it is recommended to contract another character with a special dungeon Another: It is recommended to contract another character to take the official route to replace Li Huanhuan. Official intelligence information is indispensable. I recommend "Fugitive Prince or Princess". There are monsters in Xianyang City. It is inevitable to stage a "Qing Jun Side" in the middle and late stages. The luck cultivation system has advantages and disadvantages. It mainly depends on the author.

It's okay, why is there no one and the number of words is too few?

Please write less about reality, I really have no interest in reading it, mainly because the writing is quite rubbish.