
A One-Horned Worm at the Beginning, Defeating the Champion
开局独角虫,吊打冠军
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Since you decided to make the protagonist abide by the law, you shouldn't write about Ah Shan breaking the protagonist's legs. What's the point of arranging this kind of plot besides feeding shit to the readers?
I am a lover of giant beasts, and I prefer the special Kanto scrolls, which include the ten-meter-long dragon, the ten-meter-long Hackosaurus, and the four- to five-meter fire-breathing dragon. It's a pity that the later volumes have returned to normal size. The author can write that the protagonist cultivates a four-meter-tall fire-breathing dragon, a five-meter-tall Bangira, a four-and-a-half-meter-tall biting land shark, an eight-meter-tall Boscodora, and a two-axe battle dragon.
I think it's okay, but it depends on whether the author has the perseverance to write it down. Most of the elf novels in the starting point are basically eunuchs or unfinished, and few can be written down, unless the quality is particularly good and they can stand out.
Daily poison +1 When writing fantasy, just be honest and write fantasy. What kind of life are you picking up under the trash can? The classic pore spray after eating💩?
Pay attention to the image creation of the protagonist! ! ! Since I have traveled to the elf world and the memories of my previous life are there, why don't I know that I have a higher IQ? The protagonist's behavior is not mature at all. He yells and yells all the time when he is busy with a child, and even shouts "Long live the Elf Alliance?" I really can't stand it, I can't stand it.
Earlier it was said that the protagonist used Poké Balls to capture Pokémon and sell them (then this was legal), and then it was said that thieves captured Pokémon and sold them (then this was illegal). It was a mess. Outrageous
I feel that this novel makes the elf writing fantasy, and it seems to push elf novels into a new writing direction. The novel is purely about fighting monsters and upgrading, with no interaction with people, just fighting all the way. This is probably the reason why it is not popular.
Typical brainless data flow. Follow the system throughout the process. It's a smooth journey. Those who can watch it can keep reading. Those who can't stand it will leave after reading 20 chapters.
Don't want to read it
I don't want to watch it, I was attracted by the system. It is an elf treasure hunting adventure novel that combines identification and tips. How interesting it is! ! I read more than 400 chapters in one breath, and the system is marginalized, or in other words, gone! The protagonist has also become weaker, forcibly weakened. Although he has many opportunities, he is rejected like a dog by his peers. Of course there are also good and interesting elf training levels Now I have started to jump around and read it, but it is no longer attractive, so I can only sink to the bottom. .
The name given by the author looks uncomfortable. It is too Chinese and feels like an urban elf novel.
When reading Pokémon fan fiction, I have never understood what poaching refers to. After all, the protagonist himself catches wild Pokémon and sells them. Does this count?
Chapter 177 What the hell is poison ineffectiveness? It's okay if you switch to the elven world and gain more resistance to poison because of this, but you think it's ineffective? The hit rate of your skill depends entirely on the game. Once you learn the skill, you don't need to practice it. The hit rate in the game is there anyway. Not to mention the power of skills and the daily training of elves.
It feels like the male protagonist is like a puppet on strings, being manipulated by prompts to follow an arranged destiny path. He doesn't have any simple thoughts of his own. He is really like a child.
Is the title of this book now Studio Invasion? Or I really can't think of a name.
Wherever you go now, something will happen? Wouldn't you like to take a break? It makes everyone a little tired of watching it.
The protagonist doesn't look like a time traveler at all! ! ! !
Why do you believe a woman who suddenly appears and says she is your girlfriend?
Confused... There is a strong style of cultivating immortals. It feels like I am reading a novel about cultivating immortals in the style of Yuju.
He looks like a time traveler who doesn't know anything. Even Xiaogang's father doesn't know him. At the beginning, he says that he traveled through time after playing the Pokemon game.
Anyway, if this one sucks, I won't read another one by the author.
Make complaints
Let's talk about it. The author left a message in the article saying that he digs holes and fills holes, talks about his own ideas, and complains about it. The reading experience is really poor, and the drama suddenly escapes from the novel. The plot is not coherent. It feels like it is interrupted immediately, and there are spoilers. This is very bad. I want to give up the book and stop reading.,,,
This system feels more in line with the realistic levels Trainer level: Novice-Ordinary-Elite-Professional-Professional-Expert-Provincial Champion-National Champion-Spirit King Understand basic knowledge and how to fight and train elves reasonably (most ordinary people belong to this level) High School Grade 1 - Grade 3 Elite; have more reasonable training methods and rare knowledge, skilled battle skills, and have experienced a lot Excellent combat awareness, elite among civilians (university graduates or graduates, no more than 10 people in a school, except for monsters, even if they are elves created with resources, but if I can't command them, I will be a pseudo-elite all my life, with no strength and no training background) Youth Occupation: Work as a trainer, and can participate in professional leagues, carry out standardized and militarized training, (elf alliance employees and small leaders) young - middle-aged (a small number) Profession: elf professionals are proficient in all aspects, the elf alliance's mid-range strength (the entry requirements for starting a company) middle-aged (certain) -? Expert: Compared with ordinary elf doctors, they are impeccable in all aspects. The high-end combat power of the elf alliance can participate in the alliance parliament (automatically advanced members) can be upgraded) middle-aged/old-? :(),,,,(1)(),(), At this state, one can achieve semi-immortality (natural lifespan) and die with the elves, but because it is not a naturally born divine beast, any trace of the power of heaven and earth in the body will gradually dissipate and eventually be absorbed by heaven and earth, unless one breaks through and becomes a champion. Otherwise, they only have 500 years to live National Champion: Compared with the champion, all the energy of the elf is converted into the power of heaven and earth. The elf completely returns to its original form and can be a first-level god (1 animal). Eternal life (natural life span) Spirit King: Compared with the alpaca, open up its own world and develop it into the universe (those who open up the world but do not develop into the universe can be regarded as quasi-spiritual kings) Elf levels: childhood - youth (novice) - adult (ordinary -?) - Elite (elite in a clan) - leader (occupation - professional) - overlord (expert) - second-level god (provincial crown) - first-level god (national crown) - creation god (spiritual king) Supplement: The quasi-spiritual king is only the quasi-spiritual king. He can never defeat the creation god but is stronger than the first-level god. During the National Championship period, there was only divine power and no authority. After all, authority is special, and responsibilities are not something you get as soon as you break through, otherwise authority will be ruined. 😭
The protagonist's little fire dragon has a conflict between dragon and fire. Shouldn't it increase the fire attribute or suppress the dragon attribute? Fire is the main thing, the foundation of the existence of elves like Charmander. No matter how many dragon attributes there are, they can only be secondary, otherwise Charmander will not exist at all. The treatment should be to enhance the fire or suppress the dragon. Why suppress the fire?
After practicing the second lineup from Quartz Champion, it fell apart. It looked good before this, what a pity!
What the hell? I'll just update a chapter today after stopping for one day.
Boss, it's really hard to figure out the protagonist's name countless times in the early stage.
Why is it not updated?😭😭😭
The first 200 chapters are okay, 200 to 400 are barely enough, and the rest are pure rubbish, especially the part about landing my girlfriend in the air, it's really bullshit