Elf: Time Travel at the Same Time, This Xiaozhi Is Too Omnipotent

A Pokémon with such a violent temper, many of its characters have broken personalities... The interaction between Ash and Dr. Oak is like a conversation between two people in the world. The character of Ash is particularly broken, as he is a gangster character with a background as big as the sky. The system and luck arrangements don't matter, but the various character arrangements more or less fit the original work! ! Not to mention Sakaki, a character with charisma and power in the original work was written in such a way that he was not on the stage. The original Sakaki was not the Rockets who relied on Mewtwo to maintain his character. The soul of Team Rocket has always been the character Sakaki, and his strongest elf is not Mewtwo. I really don't know if the author got excited by writing it or if he watched too many online dramas. The taste is really getting stronger and stronger. It smells like a novel about Long Aotian who descended wisdom and cultivated immortals at the end of the last century. Xiaozhi's arrangement is really classic, and it really just has a crooked smile.

Please be careful with your calligraphy. The free chapter doesn't matter. There is no need to write so much nonsense in the paid chapter. At least 1,000 of the 4,000 words are redundant.

Does Shen Nong have it? Are the latest pictures still good?

No more. Not a drop left. Come on.

This should be more complete

More than a hundred chapters have been written in a competition, you are also a talent

It's normal for you to starve to death at your level. You're not an elf. Your writing is terrible. Stop comforting yourself.

The last few chapters have been written more by Xiaobai and Shui. No matter which version of Banmu it is, it has the power of Tokiwa. If the author changes the character to such a character, it is impossible to gain the recognition of Tokiwa Forest. He also said that Chaomeng couldn't detect Banmu's inner thoughts. The Mewtwo you set is extremely weak. Mewtwo at least has the ability to sense good and evil. (You set Banmu to be so evil) Then it's impossible for him not to do something to his subordinates. For example, Kojiro's family has a little money. With such an evil setting, there is no way he would let go of such a resource. (The IQ written by Banmu is like a retard, a bunch of retarded ideas, a bunch of retarded manifestations) The author writes in the direction of dark literature. What about so many organizations in each region? If the fine print is written like this in recent chapters, then organizations in each region will definitely be involved in the following chapters, and the length will definitely be indispensable. Do you want to advance the plot by relying on the dark text? (There are also a lot of poisonous points, so many that I don't even know where to start. Did the author change his writing? I just wanted to say that the quality has dropped so much. It has become white and watery, and he keeps saying that he has hemorrhoids, is not in good health, and so on. This book is relatively good among elf books. If you want to be watery, you can just write more about the daily life of elves. There are so many elves in the original book Xiaozhi.) Look at your arrangements for Gou Hao. If this arrangement is okay, let's take a look at its ending later.

Let's just say, you have to check the information before you write something, right? When did Shadow Ball become an evil attribute skill? Also, Wave Charge does not require the enhanced characteristics of Mega Blastoise. There are Wave Missiles that are more resistant to steel + rock or special attack, but Wave Charge requires physical attack but has no special characteristics and even has counter-damage. Author, have you never played Pokémon in recent generations?

In fact, super evolution does not require bonds, Xiaozhi is waiting for him to enter.

It's been a month, and I haven't finished writing a Quartz Conference yet. It's too watery. Fortunately, only a dozen chapters have been ordered.

The author is very ambitious, but his writing skills cannot be controlled, nor can he control the plot. Judging from the data, it should be entering an endless cycle. Anyone who uses Feng Ling Yueying will suffer the backlash of Feng Ling Yueying. I am looking forward to the day when the author becomes a eunuch. It is a good choice to write a fan novel for the first time. , But if you want to include original works in your fandom, it is a thankless job. You have not grasped the center of realizing your dream, and you have added various illegal processes at will, successfully destroying most of the audience base. You are here to cater to the market, not to let the market cater to you.

Dear brothers, if you like this book, please click and add it to your collection! If you are a book reader, please use your little finger to scroll directly to the last chapter. This can be regarded as a follow-up read. Following reading is very important for new books, thank you for your support and help! There will be a lot of updates when it is published, at least 40,000 words per day. Jpg

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates ten thousand words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who update less, delay updates, or are late to update have no time to feel sad about themselves, so they are drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors feel sad and do not learn from it, and future authors feel sad about it.

The two biggest poisonous points at present 1. Pikachu will lose levels just like the animated version. It is obviously designed to level up a little slower. This setting is quite disgusting. 2 The power of the waveguide that can cause damage to the protagonist at least at the level of a mythical beast has been spent several times and a lot of words. This invincible setting has been changed so that if the green caterpillar is used to fight others, the protagonist will directly be reduced to residual health. It is completely foreshadowing which organization or mythical beast will deal with the protagonist later. The protagonist is powerless and can only watch the elf being captured or his companions being captured. Use it for such a disgusting plot. (If there are any remaining poisonous points, it's because of slow updates and I forgot about them)

The protagonist himself can fight against champions or mythical beasts, and have a King of Kings match. What's the point if he doesn't have to do a fusion weakening? Want to lose once? What is the purpose of losing? Engage in reader mentality?

My combat power must have completely collapsed. It feels like Pokémon travel has completely turned into a house game. I want everything and have everything at my fingertips. However, the most important aspect of the Pokémon novel is not involved in Pokémon life, and there is no sense of emotion or yearning at all.

It's too early. Now that Xiaozhi is so awesome, how do you write the next few areas?

I feel that even if Xiaozhi loses, he will not accept others to fight for him.

From the perspective of a Cloud Pokémon, the Pokémon data does not need to be elaborately written, but Goldfinger's Pokémon is too big, and the plot pace is very slow, making it feel like there are four different characters. It is obvious that there is such a talent, but the description of the time period is too slow.

It's a waste of a good idea. It's a good idea, but I can't say the effect of the author's writing

It can not only perform popcorn performances, but also cultivate housekeeping elves. It feels much more cost-effective than water ballet.

Can the author repeat less that S-level qualifications are only one in a million? Emphasizing once or twice is enough. Any more would be a bit of a waste of word count.

I don't even want to complain about the level. What the hell is God's Domain? Can this thing appear on Pokémon's side? Does the painting style match? You said that I can understand the mythical beast level. What the hell is the divine realm? The character design is a complete mess. I read more than ten chapters before I couldn't bear it anymore 🙂

Are there any living people? Is the author still alive?

Author, I would like to give you a suggestion. When you meet N, don't be pushy. Kill this thing on the first meeting. It's totally disgusting to keep alive.

After being raised for so long, why do I feel like the book is about to be mailed 🙂, but the author didn't just cut off being a eunuch because no one would read it, which is still good

A newy

Just like the author's name, it seems that he is really starving to death 😭. Maybe the content is not good enough so not many people read it later, but it is really rare that the author does not have a eunuch 👏. Now I still look for it in the bookshelf when I occasionally think about it or when I have no books to read.