Start with Awakening the Spirit

When I saw Colorful Pink Butterfly, I read more than 40 chapters, and I felt very weird. After thinking about it for a long time, I found that there is only one word to describe "old-fashioned". Really, the protagonist is a high school student, and his classmates are also very old-fashioned. I have written down all the kindnesses, and what the protagonist's brother has done. How about accompanying you once? They all have an old-fashioned air, boots and boots, and a sense of ancient martial arts. You said it was written by a teenage high school student. It has the kind of human and worldly feeling that a middle-aged uncle talks about business. It's really weird and weird. It's probably like this. It's so weird that I can't describe it. Maybe the description is different or wrong I also feel like this when I see someone say it's embarrassing.

Now that I have read Chapter 9, let me tell you what I think 1. I think it is a good idea to awaken your own elf. Few people write about this. In addition, it can be seen that personal attributes represent the attributes of the trainer in the future. I personally think this is very good 2. Regarding the unawakened characteristics, this is understandable. There are such descriptions even in the animation world. However, regarding the level restrictions and qualifications, I hope the author can downplay it. If it doesn't work, it can be changed to be related to the cultivation status of the elves 3. As a cliché, there are always people who like to jump out and ridicule the protagonist. To be honest, most people really don't do this, especially the friends around the protagonist are destined to be strong in the future. Even if they part ways with the protagonist in the future, they are still good friends and no one will be stupid enough to offend him 4. The old talk is still there, the villain provokes, the protagonist fights back, the beautiful teacher is optimistic about it, and it gives me a headache No matter what, I support every author who works hard, I believe you can become a new great author

The novelty of the plot is quite good, but it provokes conflicts at the beginning. The beautiful teacher is optimistic about it. The plot is cliche and boring, and the students are all enemies of life and death. The contradictions are not so intense. I can only say that the subject matter is good, but the plot is not suitable for me.

You will always be a weak chicken at the beginning. With this Awakening Beast style, can't you have a stronger and more handsome pet at the beginning?

I don't quite understand why so many novels are so brainless. Is it interesting? Who is disgusting?

I got cancer after reading a few embarrassing chapters. Can any brother tell me that it will be normal after a few chapters?

How could there be so many brainless people, it would be easier to have multiple enemies. It's really painful to watch.

Upgrades are too slow. Super slow flow. It's the kind of slow flow novels from the old era. It's still a waste flow. I'm speechless. It's also the limited elf flow novel. To be honest, not many people read it. After all, they all like the protagonist to train elves with different attributes. And it's too much for you to use a butterfly at the beginning. It's better to have a big needle bee at the beginning. At least the special edition has a perverted needle like Itaki. He is a pervert who can do things like bees, demigods, and beasts. Butterflies can only watch Badi Zhiye. To be honest, the more I look at this waste stream, the more boring I feel. It feels too contrived. A semi-disabled piece of goods that has no resources for an ordinary family of the protagonist, and then forcefully introduces a useless elf at the beginning. If it is not powerful and has no plug-ins, it is basically useless. And since you restrict the protagonist so much, what about the plug-ins for ordinary elves in ordinary families with low potential? Why don't you add some dark blue to it? It's just a shit check effect? ​​At worst, it can pick up garbage (the popular function of time travel is the most common check effect). I'm speechless. Since this is the world today, how can there be special training methods, resource upgrades, etc. Such a simple and ordinary plug-in is too contrived at the beginning. The more you read, the more boring it becomes. The most ordinary family, the most ordinary elf, and the low-potential plug-in are not necessarily strong. This is a novel. It feels too contrived.

I feel like since the protagonist doesn't plan to specialize in the insect type, I have no desire to watch it. This makes me think why you set the color pink butterfly as the natal elf in the first place. Don't you want to prove that the insect type is not weak! ! !

The author's idea is rationalization. After all, the people in the original Pokemon are physically weak. First of all, the idea is good. Awakening has one more pet than others, but the qualification setting of the awakened pet is a bit superfluous. The difference between an awakened trainer and a non-awakened trainer is not that there is one more pet, but that the awakened pet has special characteristics and will be very strong. Otherwise, the number of huge groups of non-awakened trainers born would only be the majority. Secondly, the price system is a bit broken, and the battle writing is very stiff and awkward to watch. The main training elements of Pokemon are too few.

Once this setting is changed to ABCD, I can no longer stand it.

It's pretty, but a little awkward

Coming from "The Beginning of the Unicorn Bug", the author keeps up the good work!

Not bad! However, can the author withstand double-opening?

Actually, I don't understand what the use of this awakening talent is? Just so you don't have to catch the initial elves? The insect talent is strengthened without any bonus, so you can get an elf to become a trainer with just one awakening talent? Then the strength of this talent is of no use. Anyway, as long as it can be awakened, it will be enough to replace the elf with a better one when the time comes.

It's better to awaken the speaker Cricket Man 🐷

It's boring. Colorful Pink Butterfly persuades you to quit. It's a race that deserves every distinction. What can it cultivate?

Change the settings as soon as you ask... It looks quite uncomfortable.

The insect type is really weak. If I were asked to form a team, I should have Knight Snail as the core, and then choose one of Armored Warrior or Drop Spider Tyrant (the water bubble characteristic is very strong). I must have one for Qiunong Cannonworm and Vulcan Moth. Then the mount and special attacker Ancient Giant Fly. In this team, Ax Mantis is better than Giant Pincher Mantis. As an auxiliary hand, recovery hand, Bowtie Moe Busy or Nanny Bug are all suitable, and then there is Queen Bee, a high-quality tool to make money.

The character dialogue is really awkward. . .

Change it back to level, the letters are too confusing.

41 And 59 are both C, meaningless

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Come on, come on, come on, the book is very interesting

No, do you think it's reasonable for Jirachi to appear in a miniature secret realm? Is it so easy for Jirachi to appear? This is still the early stage, the bonus is too strong, right?