I Found a Copy of Journey to the West

Honestly, what I can't stand most is that all those fantasy and cultivation novels use swords. The "one sword breaks all laws" thing is so unoriginal. Look at Journey to the West, which powerful character uses a sword? If you're going to write about Journey to the West, stick to Journey to the West and don't mix in other online novels.

To be honest, just from the basics of Journey to the West, you wouldn't really see much in it, and there's no special opportunity to steal from him. Journey to the West was written by humans, so it has quite a few plot holes. During the havoc in Heaven, the Monkey King was portrayed as too powerful, with too many supernatural abilities.

What is the main character's name? Why does it keep changing from Bai Yan to Lin Jiu?

Honestly, I agree with the guy who criticized the sword aura. If you were just creating an original character, that would be one thing, but having the Nine-Headed Insect practice sword aura is just jarring. It's like having Sun Wukong as the protagonist and instead of looking for the Golden Cudgel, you steal a sword from the Dragon Palace.

I don't know why the comments section is full of trolls. This book isn't particularly amazing, but it's still above average. It's fine that it's not trending much, but everyone here is a paid troll. I'll give you the pen and see what you can write. The book is definitely fine. If I weren't so poor, I would absolutely support it.

The framework is okay, but it's just too idiotic... The enemies are idiotic, and so are the teammates.

Swordsmanship has become a bug in the system; it's useless, illogical at all. Indecisive? Swordsmanship? Ridiculous.

This writing is pathetic; it's not even as dashing as the Nine-Headed Insect in the original work. What a useless piece of trash.

This suggestion is that in the future, even monkeys, Erlang Shen, and the Bull Demon King should use swords. What about Buddha and the Jade Emperor? They don't even know swordsmanship, yet they're still considered worthy of being called "class"?

It's a pity that the story of demon cultivation was written as humans in demon form; it would have been better to just write about human cultivation.