I Was Raised by Monsters for Eighteen Years

Kill monsters and build a new world! ! ! I feel like the main plot is so boring. There are so many demons and the protagonist is alone. How can he kill them all? Even if he escapes from the refuge later and establishes his own power, is it difficult to write that the protagonist leads the girl and others to kill the demons or be killed by the demons? The main plot is too clear. If there were no branch plots, this novel would become a hegemony novel. In the early stage, the protagonist leads a small group of people to escape from the shelter by using personal force. In the middle stage, the protagonist becomes a human leader and fights wits and courage with the monsters. In the later stage, the protagonist and the monsters have a decisive battle. It would be boring if it were not written in a hegemony style. The protagonist fights wits and courage with the demon alone, slashing and slashing all the way until he ascends. I feel that no matter how it is written, this book is actually not very necessary about the heroine. Or maybe it's really not possible to sacrifice the heroine?

Let's write a good story in this book. I abandoned the previous book because there were too many key events in the mid-term. I like the author's writing style and setting

The previous book was much better without the red color, and the results in this book will be better.

I haven't read it yet. I came from the previous book. If you have a monthly pass, I'll give it to you. I hope the heroine is a good person and learn the lessons from the previous book. Come on

If just understanding the way of the sword, practicing the sword technique, and cultivating the sword intention are the sword cultivation that leads to killing first, then what about the sword cultivation that comprehends the way of the sword, practices the sword technique, and cultivates the sword intention?

My first reaction when I saw the title and introduction was, isn't this The Promised Neverland 😏? Let me take a look at the content.

I would like to make a suggestion, write a book in the style of Tantric Buddhism. The real author is the one who was tricked by your first book. I feel that you are suitable for writing this type of book, and I also want to read it.

It feels like there are still no events to attract the plot. The protagonist's main plot now is to escape from the shelter, right, but the current plot is that the protagonist has nothing to do at night to kill two monsters and then level up, which is very boring. How should I put it? It's like playing a game but without a progress bar. Although it is said that you need to build a foundation to escape, in the process of upgrading, in addition to killing monsters at night, various branches are drawn, such as: how many people in the shelter know that monsters are keeping humans in captivity, how many people know but may be attracted by the protagonist, Lao Li's situation, the sister who was taken away in the orphanage, the protagonist's childhood sweetheart, the purpose of the monsters in trapping humans, etc. Although it seems that a lot of characters have appeared, these characters basically do not play a role in advancing the plot, and they feel like dispensable passers-by. Although everyone has something to write about, it is too fragmented to be coherent. As a result, the protagonist seems to have a lot of things but has not solved anything yet. What he does every day is to kill monsters, kill monsters, and continue to kill monsters.

You must be steady and brew slowly like this. While suppressing your emotions, you can also have a small release Author, hold still and follow your own rhythm. I like your current 150,000 words very much. I think you are more powerful now than the previous one. Your writing attracts me more. Don't be disturbed by some readers who shout, kill, kill, kill.

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