Umbrella Interstellar Group

A 20-year-old bookworm has judged that the creative content of this book, including the author's writing skills, is really good. Especially for creativity, it's a pity that maybe there wasn't a specific outline when I started the book, and it kind of collapsed in the later stages of writing. What a pity! Big boost, author, you can do it! ! !

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There is no need to compare my books with others. My writing is not good, so there is no point in comparing. Look at the number of words in the author's words in my opening chapter, I am a colored pen

It's already fifty chapters, and the protagonist controls the protective umbrella and cooperates with the Avengers. Why not strengthen himself? He's still an ordinary person and a weakling! I just want to benefit mankind and keep myself busy like a tool! It is very mature for the umbrella to make an appointment with T-patients to see and strengthen the squeeze! A little elite Wesker has been strengthened to the point where he can dodge bullets! Even though the protagonist is a big BOSS, he is still an ordinary person.

The author's imagination is still not bold enough. First of all, the brood system developed by Stark is almost a perfect development tool for developing resources in the solar system. The pattern must be large. The brood system is like a mechanical Zerg, which can quickly empty a planet and efficiently transport resources to the space station and transfer them to the earth. The resources of empty Mercury are enough for everyone on earth to be rich for hundreds of years. A scientist has said that the resources in the solar system are enough to support mankind to enter a level 3 civilization. Then the next goal of mankind is the entire galaxy, and then the Umbrella Interstellar Group will be worthy of its name 🙂

Aegis discovered another world, since there was no action. Although superheroes represent individuals, there is still a difference between SHIELD. The protagonist's intelligence is too easy to trust.

I would like to make a suggestion. In fact, you can speed up the pace. If you encounter a world that cannot be handled, just keep developing. If you encounter a world that can be handled, directly plunder it with force. The killer world I am writing about now is like this. You are flying a spaceship to fight aliens, and you are still building infrastructure here. Since it is not an extraordinary world, you can just do it, and it will be more enjoyable to watch.

Zong Wei returns quickly

I was scratched by a cat today, so I went to the hospital to get vaccinated and suffered, which cost 729.6 Yuan... Both arms started to ache, I ***! Very uncomfortable!

The biggest failure of this novel is that the protagonist has a righteous heart.

The author can take a look. Umbrella, the light of humanity. The same is the protective umbrella The same is the eternal glory of mankind You feel that this book is a little less interesting.

A two-hundred-meter-tall mecha makes you write like it weighs two hundred kilograms. In addition to its shocking height, the mecha also has a sense of strength, weight, and will produce huge vibrations and sounds when it lands and walks. It is recommended that the author first start with the hearing and feeling aspects when writing about people's discovery of mechas, and then write about people's shock and excitement when they see the huge mechas. To fight monsters, give two old fists first, and then take weapons. Can you describe the ax blade? Haven't you been to Transformers? According to Optimus Prime's ax blade, which will turn red and high temperature technology, it will be better to chop off the monster's head twice. Monsters are not made of mud.

Dear author, here, I sincerely advise you, if you really can't write, you can continue writing in another identity. Although I am not sure that I am jumping to read it, but I can see that it is really difficult for you to write this subject. It is difficult to write some red lines in the business category, but if you can't touch the red lines, you will not be able to write, including the author of my super USB flash drive. He has also written a business book before, but his writing is very stretched, let alone you? I have also read your last book, and I feel that your last book is much more exciting than this one, because many of the characters in the original book have been transformed in this book, which seems very awkward to me. For example, Stark, he should not be like that, and I feel very awkward. There are many plots, and you are unreasonable and forcefully impose them. , And I don't mean to criticize you. If we really can't continue writing, eunuchs can be used. At least that's what I think. I'll clean up my mind and start a new book. I think the clone streaming is pretty good, and the multi-world development group portrait streaming is also pretty good. If I hadn't been studying now, I'd actually like to write a novel as a hobby.

It would be nice to write less about the high combat power of Marvel and write about the humanistic care of Planet of the Apes 😌

Zombies originated from the zombies in Africa, and zombies have thoughts, just like normal people. There is a story about a zombie who was resurrected by a wizard and worked as a coolie for more than ten years before escaping home. So is it possible that the destruction of the world is made up by Americans? Free labor is the real purpose of zombies

Has the author ever thought that the protagonist has no core technology of his own except the T virus? Most of the other technologies were traded or stolen, and the G virus came out. In the future, we should consider better virus experience, such as the synthetic black light virus. This is the core. The upper limit of the T virus is the same as that of the tyrant. The black light can truly withstand nuclear explosions and has unlimited evolutionary potential. For example, it can eat Thanos, Gao Tianzun, Adam, Dormammu, and Black Bolt 🙂

Elysium, Neverending, My Ex-Girlfriend, Me, Robot, Total Recall, Independence Day, The Wandering Earth, The Three-Body Problem, Star Wars, Galactic Empire, The Dead, The New Alien, Violet, G. I. Joe, Pacific Rim, Upgrade, Moonfall. The black technology in these is pretty good, I'll add it when I see something good-looking.

I always feel that it's not good to tie too many plots into one world. In the killer world, there are rapid pursuits, python disasters, and aliens lurking. I feel that there are too many elements that are uncomfortable and even contradictory. It is better to be more pure and fit the original world view.

Updates are too slow, updates are too few

Isn't Chapter 135 about that white man who went to the supermarket and shot a black man some time ago😅

You can go to places that are extremely dangerous but highly civilized, such as Academy Apocalypse, The Walking Dead, and Blood Cross. There are ready-made factories, weapons and equipment, and it will be a good world to eliminate the zombies. There are not many indigenous people, and you can also write water characters.

In this wave of predictions, the author will become a eunuch next month The real eunuch kicked me

I read about 20 chapters in one go. This book starts off really well. The logic of the protagonist's actions is pretty good. Especially in the opening meeting, I personally scored full marks. The protagonist's behavior paved the way for the next actions and left a lot of trouble. Next is the use of plug-ins. This is one of the few cases I have seen that uses cheats to gather the team and handle it smoothly. Although some things are not written in detail, the author handles the logical details very well. For example, the team understands that it is priority to ask family members, only dare to tell the truth if there are relatives and concerns, basic anti-virus protection is done before traveling to the new world, and the basic preparations for the unknown are basically in place.

First

Deleted the chapter? How do I remember that I saw a chapter about traveling to Pirates of the Caribbean? Why is it gone now?

Open the slaughter, open the slaughter (◦˙▽˙◦)

I read it in one sitting and am looking forward to the author's new book٩(*´◒`*)۶

I have been reading this book for almost three months and only have over 50 chapters. The author only has one chapter in a few days. When will I be able to fill up the book? (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

Be precise

Why is your new book gone?