Umbrella Interstellar Group

There is no need to compare my books with others. My writing is not good, so there is no point in comparing. Look at the number of words in the author's words in my opening chapter, I am a colored pen

It's already fifty chapters, and the protagonist controls the protective umbrella and cooperates with the Avengers. Why not strengthen himself? He's still an ordinary person and a weakling! I just want to benefit mankind and keep myself busy like a tool! It is very mature for the umbrella to make an appointment with T-patients to see and strengthen the squeeze! A little elite Wesker has been strengthened to the point where he can dodge bullets! Even though the protagonist is a big BOSS, he is still an ordinary person.

The author's imagination is still not bold enough. First of all, the brood system developed by Stark is almost a perfect development tool for developing resources in the solar system. The pattern must be large. The brood system is like a mechanical Zerg, which can quickly empty a planet and efficiently transport resources to the space station and transfer them to the earth. The resources of empty Mercury are enough for everyone on earth to be rich for hundreds of years. A scientist has said that the resources in the solar system are enough to support mankind to enter a level 3 civilization. Then the next goal of mankind is the entire galaxy, and then the Umbrella Interstellar Group will be worthy of its name 🙂

Aegis discovered another world, since there was no action. Although superheroes represent individuals, there is still a difference between SHIELD. The protagonist's intelligence is too easy to trust.

I would like to make a suggestion. In fact, you can speed up the pace. If you encounter a world that cannot be handled, just keep developing. If you encounter a world that can be handled, directly plunder it with force. The killer world I am writing about now is like this. You are flying a spaceship to fight aliens, and you are still building infrastructure here. Since it is not an extraordinary world, you can just do it, and it will be more enjoyable to watch.

Zong Wei returns quickly

I was scratched by a cat today, so I went to the hospital to get vaccinated and suffered, which cost 729.6 Yuan... Both arms started to ache, I ***! Very uncomfortable!

The biggest failure of this novel is that the protagonist has a righteous heart.

The author can take a look. Umbrella, the light of humanity. The same is the protective umbrella The same is the eternal glory of mankind You feel that this book is a little less interesting.

A two-hundred-meter-tall mecha makes you write like it weighs two hundred kilograms. In addition to its shocking height, the mecha also has a sense of strength, weight, and will produce huge vibrations and sounds when it lands and walks. It is recommended that the author first start with the hearing and feeling aspects when writing about people's discovery of mechas, and then write about people's shock and excitement when they see the huge mechas. To fight monsters, give two old fists first, and then take weapons. Can you describe the ax blade? Haven't you been to Transformers? According to Optimus Prime's ax blade, which will turn red and high temperature technology, it will be better to chop off the monster's head twice. Monsters are not made of mud.