Konoha Civilian Ninja

The plot was too silly. I forced myself to forget the plot, and then I immediately asked Naruto to come directly to him with the seal branch book. Not to mention anything else, Naruto was being watched by the Hokage the whole time today. Who are you and are you qualified to watch? I'm investigating your activities. My dear guy, both of his parents are dead and have a secretive mind. He likes to read books about the Second Hokage. Don't ask, I'll cut off the roots and slice them for you tonight. You can be killed if you learn ninjutsu secretly. What if you, a commoner, want to take advantage of it?

Is the principle of substitute technique interchangeable? Then why do you need a substitute? It's very sad to see that this kind of substitute is interchangeable. Master of space per person,

You, a commoner, are more stupid than cheaters. You are still not familiar with the plot and have no talent in writing.

It's good to see that Chapter 12 is not a conspiracy theory about Naruto, but it also has a lot of flaws! The first sealed book was too far-fetched. The second substitute directly becomes the Flying Thunder God. The most poisonous setting changes made by the fans, and they have already read the book of seals, so there is no need to do this. The Third Immortal Technique can absorb natural abilities without any foreshadowing. If you add someone with a gift of perception, strong mental power or past life meditation, it will be easy to accept. The fourth is to forcefully join the Wave Kingdom mission, even if reinforcements are needed, the protagonist will not be able to get it.

Konoha is not dark, what is the difference between that and Boruto?

The protagonist's name is very good, and it makes you laugh at the first sight. Is it difficult to come up with a name that matches the style of your painting? No, it is easy to come up with a Japanese name. Even if you are really stupid, there are many Japanese surnames with one character, and the most famous surname is Lin, which can't be used in dramas. But the author refuses. Because of the so-called brain twitch, he abandoned the book. After all, he doesn't even pay attention to the small writing style, and he still expects people to write stories seriously?

Running account. The author doesn't want to write about school life, that's fine, there's no problem. But the subsequent fight scenes are also not described. I also learned about Ninjutsu training several times. Just a few strokes of Gaara and it was done. Is Gaara that weak? The Four Purple Flame Formation was easily solved. Too exaggerated. The protagonist will be invincible in Chapter 100.

If Sarutobi Hiruzen is immortal, Konoha Village will always be shrouded in darkness. Naruto will never be simple, and will always be a replica of Japan and South Korea under the control of politicians.

I don't even understand! A group of people who say bad things about Konoha's "our country"! Have you eaten enough to hold yourself up? Do you know what this means? Is Konoha "domestic" bad? You go to other villages and "countries" and have a look! ? You should really go to the Land of Rain to experience what "Crying Village" is like versus the reality of "Iraq and Afghanistan"

The original 12 Xiaoqiang can still look like a kid when he is 12-13 years old. When it comes to Uchiha Itachi, Obito, and Kakashi are like high school students in their teens, they are so mature and well developed.

What kind of civilian ninja can endure a single kill of an elite Jonin a year after graduating from school, a single kill of the top team in the root within two years, and almost killed Danzo and Orochimaru, even the Sage of Six Paths is not that awesome, and he is still a civilian ninja.

After all, if the Substitute Jutsu is a space ninjutsu, then there shouldn't be only two people who can fly the Thunder God.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is it? She is of the same age as the protagonist and others, so don't tell me that the heroine is an original character... Unless the author is strong enough, he is looking for death.

Shiranui Masaru is great as the heroine, I'll give you a monthly pass, please keep improving.

Finally, there is another third-generation time traveler. The best thing is that he has recognized the reality. He can't even survive to fall in love. Women and children will only affect the speed of drawing his sword. Due to the reason of time travel, the protagonist can create ninjutsu and practice ninjutsu in only one month before it can be used in actual combat. It is very logical and slower than those players who have obtained the system. Some, but I have been able to transform into a half-tailed beast with Gaara a few times. Based on my experience over the years, I can already guess the following content. For people who have not watched Naruto, or do not know Naruto very well, this book can be regarded as a source of food. For old bookworms like me and people who have watched every episode carefully, this book is not suitable for me to read.

How can a commoner without blood hide from Infinite Tsukuyomi. . .

I haven't read this book yet, but the name of the main character is enough to turn me off. Let's change it. After all, there aren't many chapters.

Can he kill Danzo but not kill him and keep it for the New Year?

I wanted to write about civilians, but I kept cheating manually. First Naruto gave you the scroll out of nowhere, and later even the three generations came to teach you. Why don't you give me a damn? This is the treatment of civilians.

The author is too anxious and has to rush into the plot in just a few chapters. Bad review. In terms of the protagonist's cultivation, it is too simple, and the protagonist's thinking is too self-righteous.

I don't understand what is written. There is nothing special about it, but I want to deal with tailed beasts.

In the introduction, it was said not to write slanderous stories, but the first chapter dissed the Third Hokage and various ninja clans. Aren't you also writing slanderous stories?

From now on, it will be updated during the day and not at night. Tomorrow, I will write the changes and the new ones together during the day.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.