A Humble Martial Artist

Huh, all the pigs with wives and children have to die and become eunuchs. If you don't have arrogant power, you can't watch it anymore.

In fact, the writing style is not bad, but there are many pitfalls. I can also understand leaving suspense for readers to follow. A few points, 1. My biggest safety has not been solved, and there is not even a solution. People can't see hope. The court is so corrupt. You can at least give the protagonist a clear purpose and let us readers follow it, right? 2. Knowing that the enemy is powerful, the article does not describe how the protagonist would change himself. I just saw a guy who went to save a gangster and learned martial arts. I originally thought he would have the skills to make a living, but in the end he just showed a rough move. It was 100,000 words long. There was no description of the level of martial arts, and there was no description of whether it was high or low martial arts. Just relying on a golden finger to make elixirs is extremely powerful. My thoughts after reading it now is that the book will be over once the protagonist solves all this. This is martial arts, right? Either be happy in the world, or serve the country and the people and restore clarity to the world. Everything is just frustration now. When the frustration is over, this book will be over, right? If readers can guess the result, author, do you think readers will still be motivated to read? The world view is currently completely dark, the local court covers the sky with only one hand, and the protagonist just wants to live in peace and contentment, is there no conflict? Either you don't write in such a dark way, or you become a dog and don't give the protagonist a path, at least he can see a clear path. The protagonist has to be strong but not powerful, and he has to have a future but not a future, and the villains are constantly getting stronger. Even more paradoxically, the protagonist just wants his family to live in peace. I see good authors opening copies of other people's books, and in hard times there is always a glimmer of light ahead. You can't see it. The noble man currently on the way, Hu Guanzhu, is also a younger brother, and was casually ridiculed by the second master of the bandit. Could it be said that this is a noble person? Don't tell me that there is a backstage behind you. You are writing like this at the moment. They are all in the same circle. If your backstage is hard, I will be hard too. If Hu Guanzhu has a backstage, there is no doubt that the creation of Hu Guanzhu has failed. They are all dogs. Hu Guanzhu's dog can't do it. Why can't it be done because its owner can't do it? Also, those mountain bandits wrote that they were too rampant. They just went into the city and killed hundreds of people. Based on the current population, the permanent population of my hometown county was only a few hundred thousand. According to the population in ancient times, a county had about 10,000 people. If you come here and kill hundreds at a time, will there still be a county seat if you come several times? You have to worry about things on the dark side, right? At least the court remains calm on the bright side, right? The imperial court is written as if it were a dead person. The local government is so outrageous. Every force basically has hostile forces, right? The county magistrate I wrote is here to plate gold. As long as you don't kill me, the life and death of the people have nothing to do with me. The question is, haven't you done all the gold plating? Still want to get promoted? Aren't you afraid of being caught in braids? This book is so frustrating to read. Nothing was explained, not the protagonist's line, nor the world view. After reading 100,000 words, I don't even remember what this country is called. The protagonist said in a mud pond that I have to keep my clothes clean, even though I am still an ant. It hurts to watch.

Tried running away. Is it written without thinking? A bandit can forcefully invite a bunch of people who are talented in martial arts. As the saying goes, the poor are poor in literature and the rich in martial arts. Those who can practice martial arts are all from the bottom? I understand that scholars are forced to do so, but a bunch of martial arts students are forced to do so. Why do you still practice martial arts? You just write everything for the sake of watermarks.

Are books sold so cheaply? Ten thousand words and five hundred articles. Not divided. No other benefits. Aren't you a worker? And this is ancient times! Do you have enough ink money to write a book? I ask you.

New author! The daily writing is very good, but some sentences are awkward in the text! For example: I wrote that the main character is getting more and more proficient in taking exercise pills. Didn't I just say that the pills were formed by throwing the medicinal materials into a bowl? Why do you still say that I am getting more and more proficient in pill training, which is a bit embarrassing...

The first few chapters were okay, but when I saw that I was no longer interested in writing a book, I had a hundred taels that could be used for at least a year, so I went to write a book. Whether I was a time traveler, I could write a book, or I could read a book in traditional Chinese with a writing brush. I had to slowly recognize the person, and I didn't know how to concentrate on learning martial arts.

The writing is okay, but the plot concept feels too childish.

The subject matter is okay, but the plot can be seen as a complete novice. The author usually doesn't read novels. If you don't, I suggest you learn more from the experienced authors in the writer's assistant.

After reading Chapter 66, I was quite moved. This is a society with a collapsed economic system. 1. An elixir costs 110 taels of silver (the actual price should be higher), and the cost of the medicinal materials does not exceed 20 copper plates. According to the convention of 1:1000, the profit is 550 times. Even the protagonist cannot hold on even if he is an emperor. The prescriptions for physical training and immortality have long been spread all over the world. 2. An iron gun weighing more than 100 kilograms costs only one tael of silver including craftsmanship. Calculating a kilogram of iron is 10 copper coins, the cost of a kilogram of iron is less than 4 copper plates (the author sets 1 yuan = 1 copper plate). Today, in July 2020, the price of domestic pig iron is about 3,600 per ton, which is the ex-factory price of a pound of iron at 1.8 Yuan. Taking into account profits and logistics costs, the prices of the two are basically almost the same. What an era is this! Such majestic metallurgical capabilities. 3. A silver hairpin with a maximum weight of half a tael was quoted at 80 taels, which is more than 150 times the profit. You must be fooling the devil. Heifeng Village should indeed go into the city to rob and kill people. Suggestion: If the author has time, try to sort out the details of the work...

It's good-looking, and it's an everyday article. Even if there are cheats, it won't be too offensive.

Do you know how precious ancient books are? It's so cheap at 10,000 words, and the plot is too draggy and incoherent.

That's so damn childish. Two hundred coins for a body-building pill? ! After seeing the effect of the protagonist's use, it's worth two hundred taels. It's just like playing. You don't understand the crime of holding a bib. What if the shopkeeper sends someone to arrest your wife, children, and family members to force you to take it? Withdrawn

Good book, full of daily atmosphere, traditional martial arts flavor ~ Come on

Isn't the written examination for the top military scholar a test on marching formation? ? And a last-minute strategy? ? ? In addition, there are also tests on riding, archery, boxing, and weapon kung fu. In the ancient Chinese feudal dynasties, the number one martial arts test was also conducted in a military camp with fellow test-takers.

It's such a mess, I just write whatever comes to my mind.

After reading Chapter 28, to be honest, I feel that there is no main line. I don't know what you want to express when writing. It just goes here and there. Poor grades are visible to the naked eye

There are also a lot of poisonous points. According to the standard, it is 20 taels per day, and one Duanti Pill is 100 taels? This is equivalent to 10 million, what background is there? Brother, people are going to check your background in these three acres of land, but suddenly you heard the sentence "My background is mysterious?" I'm numb.

Beating the wife and children is a trick. The bandit likes the protagonist's wife and even kills the uncle without even daring to make a trick.