People Kill Gods in Tokyo

I have been reading this book since about ten chapters, and I quite like it. Let me tell you about your feelings. The author's writing style is pretty good, and the characters are relatively vivid, but sometimes he's a little off-kilter, which is innocuous. However, I can feel that the grasp of the plot is not perfect. The heroine's character appeared too early, and the description of her character is a bit bad. It is not very likable now. Let's see how it can be cleared up later. I personally feel that it is not easy to write. I hope the author will not be anxious and write slowly. I feel that the author's world view is relatively large, and there are many holes dug in the early stage. I don't know if I can fill them in. If I can fill in most of them, then this book must be considered a good book. Also, the protagonist's cheating feels a bit strong, but there is not much explanation. I hope that the combat power will not collapse in the mid-term. That's it, it's just food, you can take a look when you're bored.

It feels a bit like suppressing Pig's Foot. You can ask direct questions, but you hide it. You talk about how strong Grandpa Pig's Foot is, but you don't look at what Pig's Foot is for. Two broken fingers are not broken legs. I don't believe that I can't catch up with Pig's Foot, and I don't believe in the character of Grandpa Pig's Foot. I don't look at the character. There's something wrong with it. Salted fish hates trouble. It's not like you don't know how to pretend to understand. You hide your strength. This character is too soft. If it weren't for the halo of pig's feet, the female protagonist could have killed the male protagonist. The female protagonist's family has a big business and a big goal. What is the male protagonist? Can others really appreciate the male protagonist's strength at that time? For the time being, Xiaodu can still accept the wait-and-see approach.

I would like to give you a suggestion, don't use so many Chinese homophones, the concentration is too high.

Protagonist: She and I are not what you think! Supporting role: Isn't it! What is it between you? Protagonist: It's all a misunderstanding Supporting character: Then why is this Protagonist: Oh, it's very troublesome, it's all a misunderstanding ~ misunderstanding Supporting role: Then your relationship is Protagonist: How should I say ~ There is a misunderstanding in the middle, it's very troublesome to run away... (The heroine comes out of the protagonist's room) Supporting character: Sorry, I disturbed you! (Turns around and leaves) Protagonist: Oops~ It's not what you think. There is a misunderstanding. Why don't you listen to my explanation... Note: The female protagonist almost killed the male protagonist when we first met Another note: The first time we met the male protagonist The main character was affected Another note: When we meet again, the male protagonist is circling around the female protagonist, without any thoughts of revenge. The female protagonist plots the male protagonist's bloodline and wants to have a child with the male protagonist. The male protagonist refuses verbally, but is very honest physically, and is secretly proud of himself in his heart.

Let me tell you what I think. Liang Cao. I have just seen the protagonist strangle the young lady's neck, and then she was suddenly knocked unconscious by the young lady. I don't want to watch it at this point. The protagonist's plug-in is too perverted. To be honest, when the protagonist is here and the street is being simulated and upgraded, I don't believe that the protagonist will be knocked unconscious by the mind-reading young lady with special powers.

It can only be said that the protagonist is really a salty fish, but his world cannot support him becoming a salty fish.

When I saw the introduction, I felt that the introduction was a bit too general and too docile to focus on. This is not a physical book. Personally, I think reading novels is just to pass the time. A simple and clear introduction is better.

Actually, there was a problem at the beginning when the protagonist was injected with drugs and fell asleep, because if I were the protagonist's grandfather, it was impossible for his own child to be like this and he didn't investigate at all. If I didn't write it, I thought maybe the grandfather didn't want to investigate, let alone being hit by a car.

The character of Yachiyo Hanyu is so disgusting. She acts like a monster. The male protagonist is led by her like a dog. If he had a more grumpy temper, he would have slapped him. 😅

After reading so many novels for so many years, I came up with a little trick: the more words in the introduction, the more rubbish the character of the protagonist will be.

It's a pure light novel. I haven't seen this type of novel in a long time.

From my personal point of view, this is a relatively good slow-burning book. If you like a fast pace, it may not be suitable. The author's writing empathy ability is still good. The creation of each character has a feeling of being reflected in front of you, and the personality is also very distinct. The author has left a lot of holes in the book. If they can all be filled in, I am very much looking forward to the author finishing it. And I want to know, the author, do you want the male protagonist to be a salty fish all the time, or is the male protagonist slowly starting to change due to various experiences? After all, the content of the book is about killing gods, which gives people a sense of decisive killing. If I have this kind of transformation experience, I personally feel better. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better, speed up the progress of coding, and update every day, 360 days a year.

Those who think it looks good will naturally think it looks good. Anyway, I think it looks good and it suits my taste.

Yuuto Amamiya

It's good-looking, not a fake, but the author's illustrations are still good, hahahaha come on

The author hopes that the foreshadowing can be made more obvious, telling me that this is a foreshadowing, not a problem with the plot, otherwise it will appear too slow. Come on!

Boring, I want to watch the river of blood 😡 It's too slow

When will the protagonist be more mature? At least he won't be led around by the nose. Although the author's writing is like salted fish now, it is not completely salted fish.

It's too watery and boring, so I'm withdrawing it.

I like the work, but as far as online writing is concerned, there are many problems. I hope the author will make progress in his next book Also, let me know when a new book is released.

Take a look first, if you really spend 10,000 yuan, book it all

The plot unfolds too slowly. Looking forward to blood and fire

The first three chapters are so well written, why has no one read them? Let's look at the following ones.

Furotegawa Chizuru