Asian Girl Completion Manual

Shen Nong's Test of Poison is rated as a good book and non-toxic. If the full score is five points, I can give it 4.7 Points. This book has at least six volumes, and there are currently three updated volumes. The first volume has a Western fantasy flavor, and the last two volumes are a bit more two-dimensional. The general pattern of the book should be a road novel (it can be regarded as constantly changing the map and collecting the harem in each map). The first volume is about the Dragon Queen, the second volume is about the Son of the Sea and Queen Nali, the third volume is the God of the Sky, and the immortal witch who appears in the second volume... In addition, it reminds me that this book is micro-edited, and it can be seen that the author really likes coming from the abyss. 😃

I feel like there are too many female leads! 1. Dragon Queen - Raphael (Dragon Girl) 2. Son of the Sea - Jasmine (Killer Whale Girl) 3. Sky God - Valentina (Phoenix Girl) 4. Immortal Witch - Renee (Witch) 5. Duke Demon - Eliog (Devil Girl) 6. Iceberg Queen - Alagina (Human Race) 7. Queen——Elizabeth (human race) 8. Minister of Magic——Asuka Karasawa (human race) 9. Big Demon King——Bai Meng/Hao Laier (devil mother) ... Basically, each volume focuses on one or two female protagonists, and the other female protagonists will disappear for a long time... I hope that in the next plot, other female protagonists can appear from time to time, Shura Field yyds!

In fact, when I finished reading the second volume of the second volume of Children of the Sea for the first time, I still felt a little bit abrupt about the ending of Elizabeth, especially the fact that Osmanthus and Blake died because of her. So at first, although I was shocked by this kind of plot and story that was so unfavorable to the character, I didn't like it very much. But when I opened the second volume for the second time and read back with the ending, I gradually discovered many details about the character of Elizabeth and how the author conceived this volume. First of all, this volume is indeed about Elizabeth, not Jasmine. The first female character with a very heavy writing that Fisher encountered just after returning to Sainte-Leis was Elizabeth, and in the first chapter, there was a strong hint of what she would do next, especially what she said. In retrospect, it really summed up Elizabeth's character perfectly. And the reason why this volume is called Children of the Sea instead of Queen Nari, I guess it is because the author does not want readers to guess that Elizabeth is the mastermind behind it. I think it is a bit inappropriate for an online article. In fact, if you go back and re-read the second volume, you will find that Elizabeth's weirdness is throughout the entire early part of the second volume. The author cleverly buried her weirdness under the light of the Shura Field, so that the readers just watch the women fighting and ignore the true meaning of her conversation with Renee. What Renee said to Elizabeth completely exposed the conspiracy planned by Elizabeth behind the scenes. This is the most intuitive way to outline the two female characters. It also made me feel that the character of Renee is more unfathomable than being arrogant and interesting. At the same time, the author likes to lay out the relationship between Elizabeth and Fisher in many details. Elizabeth has a clear sense of what she does. She knows that the things she does are likely to lead to the death of many innocent people, so she went to church to confess when she was at Saint-Nali University. At the same time, many of the past stories between her and Fisher have been turned into Fisher's occasional flashes of memories, which is very easy to ignore. Because the image and dialogue she actually reveals to readers are all false. To see her true background, you need to analyze this character from the details given by various authors. This also led to the second time when I focused on Elizabeth, I felt that this character was a complex and pitiful person who came to life, because her hands were stained with a lot of innocent blood. I like the character of Elizabeth very much, and I also like the second volume, but I still have to give the author some advice on the many visible oversights and shortcomings in the second volume, 1. Don't bury the foreshadowing too deeply and too loosely. Most readers who read online articles will not carefully read the emphasis hidden between the lines. I think there are very few people who will go back and recheck like me. 2. Pay attention to the story rhythm of the bright lines. Elizabeth's hidden line in this volume is undoubtedly very good, but Blake's bright line is very boring to read before the hidden line is revealed, and the author has a way to make up for this. 3. Give or emphasize the author's clues about the future direction in advance. Especially regarding the strong new account of a dead heroine like Anna, although it has been proven that she is not dead, the author should have emphasized her specialness before and reminded readers that she will not die, instead of having death buffs plastered all over her face, which can easily dissuade readers. 4. The depiction of jasmine should be strengthened. The color of jasmine in this volume is seriously lacking. I understand the author's desire to focus on Elizabeth, but in my opinion there are opportunities for the author to deepen this character, such as during the attack on Shivali and the subsequent solitude scene. 5. Fisher's protagonist status and abilities should be more highlighted. Although I don't have a deep feeling about this, it may be because I have read more other novels, but other readers have this feeling, so I would like to remind the author. In summary, although the second volume of Asian Girl is not perfect, it is definitely excellent, especially the character of Elizabeth. The contradictory plot in her is really disappointing, and the love between Captain Black and Osmanthus is equally admirable. This is my first time subscribing to a novel on Qidian. I hope that Yarenniang will write better and better and give all the characters a satisfying ending.

I don't care, I'm here to talk about this book. As an old bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, I just put it here. This book will definitely be ranked in the upper echelon of Qidian novels. If I use one word to describe this book, then I think "exquisite" is the best. For example, the character creation Especially the heroines, for example, the character of Elizabeth was really written out of her soul. She had to say goodbye to her loved one in the support of the people. When I read this, it really made my scalp numb. It was really amazing to imagine that kind of scene. I even felt that the most blank character in the whole book was Fisher 😂 Just kidding And the author can obviously rely on this characterization to write some mindless and ambiguous articles. Readers can just read "Eating Dog Food Shura Field", but no, the plot is even better than the characterization. This ability of ambush writing has successfully made me find reading. The fun of "Ship of Hughes" is especially due to the author's solid writing skills. Some of the guessable plots are more touching with the blessing of writing skills, such as the origin of Sir Shu. In short, this book can be read twice or three times. I also believe that it will not be too difficult for Crab to become a platinum master in the future.

I'm really stupid. Even though the author said there was a knife in the book's introduction, I believed that the book friend in the chapter said it was just a knife. When Fisher discovered that the mastermind behind the story was Elizabeth, my heart dropped when she revealed what happened to her after graduating from college. Originally I just came here to complain and vent, but I saw many book friends in the comment area saying that the male protagonist still can't crush the enemy in the middle and late stages, and the Shura field is also very depressing... Forget it, that's it, see you all.

Maybe it's because I mainly want to read Love Shura Field for fun. I feel like the latest one or two volumes have made the world-destruction setting more and more complex and detailed, which makes reading a bit tiring. The look and feel is much worse than the previous volumes. Maybe it's a problem with my quantum reading🤔

After reading Chapter 32, I felt that it was still not to my liking. I felt that the protagonist of this book was similar to the style of early online novels, and his attitude towards alien races seemed a bit crooked. If you have human supremacy, you should not fall into the trap. There are no similar comments in the comment area. Before abandoning the trap, I would like to leave a comment for the reference of brothers who fall into the trap.

I have read the Sky God volume so far, and the overall review is that it is a good book. Advantages: The writing is good, the worldview structure is far better than that of ordinary novels, and the original worldview is also good. The plot is a road movie, which can also be called a travelogue. The connection is very good, the plot is stable, and there is no mechanical illusion. In terms of characters, each has its own characteristics and has a good background and plot. Disadvantages: In order to conform to the temperament of the Odyssey novel, the world is explored from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist is very stable in all aspects (derogatory level). First, the protagonist shows no signs of improvement in terms of strength, and his combat ability and experience have not increased through travel. The first volume was considered the protagonist's best state. Later, in order to highlight the increasingly high challenges and crises, the protagonist's combat ability, combat awareness, and combat resources continued to decline. Secondly, in terms of the role of magic, the abilities possessed by the protagonist should be used to support "production" and "respond to crises". But because it is a travel film, the protagonist has not made any progress in these two aspects. Every time you cut to the next volume, the protagonist will start all over again. In Odyssey, there was progress on the way home. Why is the protagonist still regressing? The more obvious one is the third volume (with spoilers), . . . . . . . . . . . . In order to enter the North, a storm knocked the protagonist unconscious. With the protagonist's original or new abilities, it is completely impossible to overturn, but in order to meet the captain (one of the heroines), it seems very unreasonable. Second, the protagonist does not cooperate with other characters to enhance the awareness of crisis response. In the face of a crisis, only the protagonist is the main body of crisis response. Other characters (mainly various foreign women) are usually paddling, or simply part of the crisis. They stand on the opposite side of the protagonist in an active and passive manner, which makes various female characters have no sense of participation. Third, the protagonist and various female characters have relatively youthful thinking, much like Japanese light novels or GalGame types. Although the main body of each volume has been well outlined, due to space limitations, there are still many characters that are weak and contradictory. Personally, before the end of the second volume, I thought Elizabeth was a pretty good character with potential for future development. But the end of the second volume went beyond what I expected and I lost interest in the character. Let's see what everyone thinks.

Any large chapter can be taken out alone to write a fantasy or light novel. Moreover, both the background story and the character creation of this novel are of high quality. When a novel has these two powers at the same time, it is like Otto finally got his second leek box. Not only is he full and even a little over-nourished, it is really good.

I have finished reading the first volume and it is really well written! ! ! I haven't had such a relaxing and comfortable reading experience for a long time. It feels like a sudden refreshing feeling like eating a cucumber while eating butter hotpot.

The story of catching up with the whale girl, how should I put it? Some readers may have the same feeling as me, but I don't know how to say it. I think I can summarize it: First of all, it is a story issue. It may be that the plots of several movies have some similarities, which leads to some boredom. After all, there are some knives and so on, but I feel that this is not the point The focus is on the creation of villains. Of course, I cherish every carefully written character in my writing, and I have thought about the concept of each paragraph of the story for a long time. However, it is easy to be like the old king to his youngest son, always wanting to give them a decent reason and a noble and glorious image. But the problem is that the real hero is not the American West. In the film, there is a character who is always shining like the sun, and besides, he is also a villain. A real living hero should be human, glorious, momentary great, momentary cowardice, and struggling to live a life like ordinary people. This kind of sun-like greatness will only make people feel hollow. Coupled with his current villain behavior, it can only make people feel a little unbearable. Another part is the practical problem. Everyone comes here to rest and read, and they all want to be happy. The sword and sublimation for a while is okay, but it is a bit overwhelming to guess what you can guess again and again. After all, everyone is here to watch Monster Girl, so I still hope to gather around The story is written with the protagonist in mind, and the story around the supporting characters is to forget the protagonist and the entire background world, and the world view and historical view are in the clouds. Everything has been said, but everything is a one-sided society. It is not very clear, but this is acceptable I still want to watch Sweet Candy and the joyful Shura Field. Of course, the work is not a nipple movie, but the art can also be like the movies of Stephen Chow and Chaplin. When I watch it, I feel happy and faintly sad. I think about it from time to time in my life and feel it for a lifetime. Of course, this is very difficult After reading this for so long, this is about it. I really like this work. After all, it is a rare masterpiece. I hope the author will work hard and make progress slowly and get better step by step. Novels are like life. Only by growing up through step by step choices can you finally transform into a butterfly.

This book is so great. I stayed up until 2:30 to finish the first volume. I'm too sleepy now 😒 I'll read the rest tomorrow. It's a pity that I don't have the votes now, otherwise I would give them all to you. When I have more votes, I will definitely vote for you.

It's a fairy grass that I've come across very rarely recently. It's been a long time since I've come across a book with such a right taste that made me stay up late to read it. I have just read the end of the second volume. I hope I can continue to see amazing content in the future. Good luck to the author

It was a bad review from an indigenous person, and why did he immediately remove the slave mark after buying it, then threaten her with force and the safety of her companions, and then give her permission to kill him? Isn't it poisonous? Can't you give a direct order?

When I saw it on the shelves earlier, I felt that this book could be a god. From the writing to the plot and the characterization, it was all very good. But I heard that the backend of this book would be very tough and the normal dark plot would be completely acceptable, except that it would not abuse the heroine or anything like that. Also, I heard that a female protagonist was demoted to a female supporting role. I would like to know more about this situation. I feel that this approach is a bit uncomfortable unless there is no special reason. Let me tell you my opinion again. When it comes to writing a book, there must be various writing methods. If you want to write something that fits the background of colonial invasion, create such a grand world, and write something realistic, then it is essential to have all kinds of dark plots. Nine times out of ten things will be unsatisfactory. There is definitely no problem in writing a book like this. But nowadays, people's lives are quite stressful, and they may prefer something more relaxed. I like the Dragon Lady in the front very much, and our daily life together is also very interesting. I don't know if all this will change when we come back. Writing this reminds me of Ermu Let Go of the Witch, a very warm daily novel with a very grand world view, but it's a pity that I didn't pick it up later. In fact, compared to books with a more literary nature, many people still prefer to read a story that can make people laugh after reading it. I haven't read much. I don't know what the development will be before I say so much. The author's writing style is really good.

It's the first time I've seen this genre. It's pretty good. It's written in great detail. You can savor it carefully or just peck it. It's so delicious~😍

This book is okay. I originally read it to study the customs and habits of demi-human girls in another world. It turns out that the male protagonist is a scholar and is really studying demi-humans. Although they are all female, why not study the male ones? The protagonist is not a humanoid self-propelled cannon. He looks at demi-human girls with academic research throughout the whole process. However, occasionally he cannot control his lower body, plus Goldfinger has been strengthening the reproduction ability, causing the little flying stick to almost explode Then each volume digs a lot of pits and foreshadowing, and it explodes all at once at the end of the volume, which can be said to be the most uncomfortable for the audience who are following it. They know that this is a foreshadowing, otherwise they would not describe this place specifically, but they will not tell you what the purpose of this place is until the end. The protagonist in the BOSS battle does not have the combat power to crush him, so he can only rely on the protagonist to prepare in advance like a scholar. However, the BOSS ignores the whole process and crushes it, which is a bit frustrating. However, I came to see the BOSS battle to recover the foreshadowing and know the life of the protagonist Xiao Qiangban. , So I'll abuse it casually The only pity is that Muxi didn't talk to Jasmine in the end and just sent it like this. Alas, even if I say a word to Jasmine, I'm so happy to see you at the end. As for Muxi's own decision, I'm responsible for it. The world of adults can't be so beautiful. Is there a bug or something? Elizabeth can kill Jasmine with the sword borrowed from Jasmine's mother? Then Jasmine's mother is too cold-blooded, but thinking that Jasmine's mother didn't look back until her lover died, she couldn't get used to it.

This book is well written, and it can be seen that the author is serious about writing the book and has invested his emotions in this work. But what I want to say is that this book has a serious problem, that is, there are too many settings. The plot has always been online, but there are too many settings. After reading one chapter, a large part of it is explaining the setting, explaining why we are doing what we are doing, what 'Death Trinity' is, etc., But it affects the flow of the writing too much. It seriously hinders the flow of the plot during reading. The overly rigorous and complicated settings and various noun explanations make people dizzy. We might as well simplify the concepts of various settings, such as from a certain terminology or a eloquent introduction to settings. Condensed into: In order to..., Fisher wants to.... I hope the author has time to think about it and improve this issue at the end. {"NickName":"Yiwei","UserId":313004508}

All I can say is that although Xiao Yi's book is about harem, it is sweet but not greasy, and leaves a lasting fragrance on your lips and teeth! 😍😍😍

Except for the complicated settings in the middle and later stages, this is a good book.

There are spoilers below—————————————————————————————— I have read the fourth volume so far, and it is very good so far. The writing style and plot arrangement are very good. One problem with the fourth volume is that the author has revealed the true identity of the witch, so in my opinion, the main character of the fourth volume was originally The title is that the search for the witch has become a description of the theme with the protagonist going back to the past, which made me lose a little patience in reading, because when I read that, I wanted this paragraph to end as soon as possible. I didn't expect that this volume would be like this, which gave me a feeling that the setting was good but the world was too small. In fact, in the fourth volume, I can write more about things between the spiritual world and the real world, such as another invasion of the spiritual world (I haven't seen it yet, so I don't know if it will happen in the future), and it can add some ups and downs to the plot. Of course, I won't be able to write it. I will read it slowly later, and I am looking forward to the fifth volume. The writing style of this book is also good, there is a setting and a plot, but it requires a little patience. All in all, this is my current feeling. If you open the comment area and want to see what everyone thinks of this book, then this book is still worth reading.

Why is this Yiwei crab so cute?

Without the underlying structure of the world, the world has no history. It is just a background created out of thin air, with no development logic at all The economic system cannot be copied, and the purchasing power of money is confusing The principle of magic triggering is not understood until now, and there is no technological derivation based on magic at all In the battle rounds, it is difficult to imagine that there will be an author who will describe at length what books the protagonist turns to and what he sees while the protagonist is fighting. The content and tension are completely 0, and the battle has no sense of reality. Not to mention any big scenes, at least there is some passion The enemy's IQ is extremely low, and he has been given a halo of intelligence reduction by the collective. There is no game at all, some means and no follow-up actions, just waiting for the protagonist to kill. In the author's creation, the enemy has no initiative. It will not react according to the protagonist's response. It went for a sneak attack, but no one was caught. Does the protagonist have some suspicions? Is the protagonist's address almost transparent? Then what? The sneak attack is over, gone, and there is no action. A sneak attack for the sake of a sneak attack. Such a plot is set up to advance the plot. It simply exists as a node with no preliminary preparation and no subsequent impact. For example, why is it a sneak attack and can it be abducted? Can we make some targeted ambush based on known intelligence? Are there any back-ups for failure? Not at all The Asian girl as the main character is indeed well written, the portrayal of several heroines is also very distinctive, and the portrayal of other supporting characters is also quite good, but the description is too repetitive. Elizabeth's empty eyes wish I could write a chapter a hundred times. The protagonist's eyes are dark and dark, are there black holes in her eyes? I understand that this is a feature, but it affects the perception too much On the whole, it is a medium-to-high-quality food and grass with a large amount and a full tube. It can be regarded as high-quality food and grass for readers with XP, but it is not recommended for those who have high requirements for combat and world authenticity.

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The biggest weakness of female authors is that they always focus too much on storytelling. The most important thing is logic and plot connection. I hope to be able to write the story in one go, but I always forget one thing, that is the explosive point. This explosive point is not the climax of the plot, but an illogical section that can release emotions. Kill the enemy with one punch, overthrow the conspiracy in one fell swoop, and grow up with the passion for gratification and revenge. This book has none of these, and it can even be said to be a common problem for female authors writing male-centric novels. Don't think that the so-called male videos are as simple as changing the main perspective to a male, having a heroine, and fighting. There are so many entanglements between people that it makes your head grow bigger. This book was so depressing at the end that I decided to give up reading it. I thought it was pretty good at the beginning.

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I want them all, no one less

Although it is said that they are all covered, they are still essentially separate lines. The so-called acceptance of the heroines means that they do not overdo it. In addition, judging from the extras, Fat Snake is essentially a shift system. Each one takes turns to accompany him for a period of time. This relationship has not changed much from the previous relationship. At most, the heroines will not be at war with each other when they meet. After chasing all the way to the completion of the book, this ending is really almost boring.

The clue provided by a book friend comes from "The Blue Files", which is very similar to the set Valentina, with white hair and silver eyes. Although I really didn't refer to this character when designing the third volume, it really looks like it.

What do you say about this book? Human supremacists should not read it. The same goes for P Society war criminals.