Hello, Mr. Prosecutor

See you are following me, come and check in

Are they all interested in reading this book?

I saw you followed me, so I came to check it out. It feels like that kind of bloody TV series. I don't know what to say, come on.

They all got attention all of a sudden 😂 You are still just a seedling

We are all novice writers, so let's get together and give them a ticket.

I wrote a column called "Diandianquan". The author can learn and learn

When the mine was about to collapse and her life was in danger, this woman was still struggling with emotional issues. This man actually insisted on running with her. Even though she was so uncooperative, he didn't get angry or angry. Brother, this is already a routine from the last century, right? These two types of people no longer exist in the world. These are two poisonous points! But a normal person, a normal woman, would choose to run away at that time. After escaping, a normal man would also choose to run away at that time. That kind of woman deserves to die. Who would let her be pretentious?

Haha, I also saw people following me. Just came over to take a look. Come on, author!

You actually followed me. Although I don't like reading urban articles very much, but when did you sign the contract? Give me a kick and I will reward you with 100 starting coins (I am poor, I have no choice but to reward this little)

Suddenly noticed, come and take a look

How can I put it, the first two chapters are okay, but the third and fourth chapters are too detailed, too detailed, and very wordy. In fact, some plots can be ignored in order to highlight the key points. Moreover, it is already the fourth chapter, and it has not yet gotten to the topic, and the two keywords of "prosecutor" and "case" have not even been mentioned. Another question, if you read the first chapter again, do you think this girl is a bit unreasonable and arrogant? Maybe it can also be understood as naughty, cheerful and cute, but in reality I will not tolerate such a girl. If there is a misunderstanding, I will explain it clearly immediately. I will not tolerate a strange and unreasonable girl like Tang Hao. This is really abnormal.

Looking at the introduction, this is supposed to be a criminal investigation and suspense type, but there is too much romance in it, and it is too fake. For example, when you go to the zoo, a robbery is suddenly arranged, and the hero is forced to save the beauty. The ending of the robbery is too unreasonable. An ordinary rich man cannot beat two fierce robbers, let alone a knife in his hand. Besides, the robber must have protected the stolen property. How can he snatch it back so easily for you? If you want to write romance, it won't be reflected through such trivial things, let alone what kind of romance are you writing in your criminal investigation novels? Go watch that kind of TV series. The romance elements are also used to set off the case and the development of the plot. It's a big problem, bro.

Use your attention to attract me, right?🤭

Let me experience the feeling of being noticed, check in

Come on, brother, I have it today. Look after you!

No more moving, xd. Let me sort out my thoughts first...

Get noticed and check in. By the way, I would like to recommend the new book "The Age of Book Desolation", which I will definitely not eunuch. I beg for collection, recommendation votes, and investment.

I'm a little flattered by the sudden attention.

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