I Can Hear the Inner Voice of Martial Arts

Are all the martial arts novels these days turn-based, with you taking turns attacking and then adding some trash talk to show off your low IQ?

Sigh! One should repay even the smallest kindness tenfold! Author, you either need to make the protagonist an orphan, or have him transmigrate into this world. He survives in someone else's body and then doesn't repay the kindness—is this your moral code? I suggest you rewrite it; I really can't stand this ingratitude.

The concept of martial arts skills being able to talk is interesting, but... The writing and plot...

To be honest, the main character's siblings are a complete failure; they're more trouble than they're worth. Besides, as mentioned before, they didn't have much of a relationship, and now they're still entangled in complicated matters. Giving so much money should have been enough to sever ties cleanly, but taking the money and then going back to the main character is just too greedy.

This younger sister is a complete disaster! I'm speechless.

Here's the original text for everyone to get a feel for it: "My God, it's said that those in the Black Tiger Gang who earn the title of 'Young Tiger' are either exceptionally talented or unparalleled throughout history."

Iron Qi?! The protagonist can't cultivate internal energy because his innate talent is lacking, yet he cultivates iron qi? Using iron as a spirit stone? Iron turns into earth without iron qi? Is this nuclear fission? Or nuclear fusion? What an amazing novel!

Anyone who has watched the "Young and Dangerous" movies knows that every country has its laws and every gang has its rules. It doesn't make sense for gang members to start killing each other from the very beginning. Don't say that the world and times are different; an organization must have order, that's for sure.

I still need to practice my writing skills, but I'm outta here.

The seven meridians and eight extraordinary vessels 666 😄😄😄😄