The Master of Elves

I have read a lot of Pokémon fan fiction, and this one is very well written in my opinion. In the Pokémon world, love and being loved are the eternal themes. Believe in the elves, and the elves will give you miracles. I also really like the funny plot in the article. I hope the author will work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง. I hope to be as popular as the Elf Leader 🔥. Finally, can you please update it quickly? Urgent!

1. The writing style is generally commendable, 80 points 2. The plot is very good, I have been working for a day, and it is very relaxing to read this kind of book with happiness and no sorrow.

Jiangjiang is here, bringing army hot pot, Bobo chicken, dried tofu with eggs, fried tofu and meat with steamed rice noodle soup, and snail and lion rice noodles to watch the big book and make CALL while eating

It's very interesting, lighthearted and funny, 😍 water type 😍. It is recommended that the third or other subdued elf should not be too ugly or cruel (such as the Eel King), as it will ruin the plot, right? The author should also know this. Is he neglecting to introduce the background of the world? Come on! (If you said something wrong, please say it) Thank you!

Pokemon version of Avengers, it feels very exciting

I just voted for my first monthly vote, and the author gave me one update a day.

Kamen Rider

Thanks to Speaker Cricket Man for sending 33 commemorative tickets (poof) Speaker Cricket Man, I laughed every time I read it, Speaker Cricket Man? ? Speaker Cricket, do you look like a hero? Do you look like a hero? You are also a cricket man with a speaker. It's a huge difference. You can evolve for a while and then come back, ah. Or do you have a few speakers? Ah, I saw a weak Pokémon and asked me to help him. Do you have the strength to help him? Ah? Didn't you get directly crushed by others when you went up there? ? What else can I help? I didn't even say that Dolphin Man was in danger or being bullied by other people in the sea, such as this... Chihouba was bullying others. He is bullying this and this... Mililong. Then this Dolphin Man goes up and asks me to help! It turns out that Mi Lilong is controlling this Chihouba. Ah, sorry for the mistake. Right? Then this is such a hero of justice(?) What can Speaker Cricket do, ah? Still going to be a hero? You need that kind of strength to be a hero. You don't have the same muscles as anyone else. Look at their muscles. They are quite developed. Do you see that? ? The attack power is one hundred and sixty. Did you see your attack power? You are not as high as anyone except two. (Two), you are not as high as him when multiplied by two. I'll be honest. Can the attack power of the Speaker Cricket be doubled to reach 160? It can't be right? It seems not possible.​

Promise me, the third elf will be a clownfish. Try to get a combination of the weakest water type, and even a slimy dragon at the back. I think it's totally fine~ I'm the spokesperson for the weakest water type elf~

，       ，，，，，，，， At first I couldn't help but complain, but later I realized I was wrong. This book is indeed a good book, not a masterpiece, but for book lovers who like passionate fighting and daily-oriented works, it is worth reading. The shortcomings are the lack of control over the progress of the plot, and the early writing is a bit slow, but as you read it slowly, you will find that the writing is quite good. At present, if we can ensure this quality and change the name and introduction, it will be no problem to attract a group of readers and become popular for a while. Finally, I wish this book will become more and more popular and the author will get better and better at writing books.

One thing to say, I am reading Chapter 13 now, and the portrayal of your protagonist's sister is really annoying. You don't care about the money, you really won't spend any money later. Moreover, your sister's character is also very unlikable. Until now, I haven't noticed that she clearly shows her good and bad qualities towards her brother, the protagonist. I think that's not how you wrote it. But that's all I really felt when I saw this. There is no bright side at all.

The writing is pretty good, but the way my sister portrays her is rather disgusting.

The finishing touch is exclusive to Rayquaza, how come you, Gyarados, can still learn it?

It's lighthearted and funny, looks quite comfortable, and doesn't show any anger.

I couldn't hold it any longer and ran away after reading Chapter 13. My sister has never taken care of my money. The protagonist's sister also said that all the protagonist's money was in her charge in high school, and then she gave the protagonist a surprise after graduating from high school. Isn't this period of high school a time for elf development?

Can you please stop showing off? You've never finished it after Personality Master🌚🌚🌚🌚

I think the characteristics of this duck are probably not Tianen. The duck can pick up anything you want from boiled water.

What kind of Pokémon does the protagonist have? Isn't it possible that a Pidgeot can conquer the world? Don't you have something good-looking and strong?

Poisonous, disgusting, disgusting 🤮🤮🤮🤮 The protagonist gives away opportunities worth a quasi-god to everyone he knows. The protagonist's so-called companions never end the protagonist's wool, without any guilt, and never give the protagonist feedback. It's disgusting🤢How can such a person exist?

The author's name is very fitting. Tell me how many books have been ruined [Funny]

I can only say that the book "Character Master" is already at its peak and is very well written. The author has written so many books, but the writing style has not increased but has declined a bit.

Let me give you a suggestion, that is, there has been a bit too much sensationalism recently, and the pace is a bit slow. It's touching if it's moderately sensational, but it's a bit awkward if it's too much. Bonding doesn't have to be awkward. Some words are more useful not written than written, or just a few words will do. I still like this book very much and hope it gets better and better.

If you say it's bad, it's really bad. The main Pokémon, Kodak, has just reached the master level. This book is so bad that it actually fits the title. Shang Xiang💀💀💀

I subscribed to a chapter. I really hate the main character's sister. The writing is super annoying. The author is still smug in the comment area, which is even more annoying.

My assessment is that the author has collapsed

Ps: The writing is not good enough, so just make do with it 🙏 The territorial battle in the secret realm ended quickly with the strong participation of Gyarados, and the one who ranked first was none other than Gyarados. During the territorial dispute, Ghost Stone also came and joined Yang Kaibai. They took the Gyarados brand aircraft and quickly returned to the cave of the armored tyrannosaurus, and of course Semiy was also taken with them. But when they arrived in Shandong, they took out the fruits and prepared to eat them. . . "Xie Mi!" Xie Mi saw the familiar tree fruit. "Xie Mi, Xie Mi——" It pointed at the tree fruit that Zhang Hailin took out, roaring in grief and anger. Ghost Stone: Silicon Hissing Tower! Zhang Hailin: ... What are you talking about? You planted these fruits, and then when you came home after going out, you found that the orchard had been stolen? Gyarados: Klukkkkkkk! Yang Kaibai: So you "stole" these fruits from Xie Mi's orchard? Can reach duck: reach? Xie Mi: Xie Mi, Xie Mi, Xie Mi! Yang Kaibai and Zhang Hailin looked at each other. Zhang Hailin: I'm sorry Xie Mi, we were just sucked into this world at that time. We were all unconscious at that time, and only the carp... Gyarados, Kodak, and I were still awake. Gyarados and I found the fruit and picked it without thinking, and we didn't expect to destroy your orchard. I'm really sorry. Yang Kaibai: I'm sorry, I'm sorry, Xie Mi. Both of them and several elves bowed to express their apologies. "Silicon Tower" "Xie Mi" Soon, Xie Mi forgave them for what they had done. Then Yang Kaibai began to ask Zhang Hailin some things about the time when he was in coma. Zhang Hailin naturally talked about the time when he was unconscious, except of course the process of changing clothes. However... "Coda" You were unconscious at that time, she was taking care of you, and I went to wash your clothes. Zhang Hailin: ... Yang Kaibai: Thank you for taking care of me, Zhang Hailin. However, it seems that this is the only set of clothes I have. Shouldn't you... Zhang Hailin recalled the scene at that time and blushed. "You... You had a fever at the time. I... I just wanted to clean you up. I didn't... Think about anything else." Seeing her reaction, Yang Kaibai knew the truth, and his face turned rosy instantly. What I was thinking in my mind was, "Ah, ah, I, Zhang Hailin has taken notice of me. What should I do? Do I want to commit myself to her? Her family sells fruit, so there seems to be no harm in it." Let's wait for some food to be rescued, and train the elves by the way." Yang Kaibai looked at Zhang Hailin, Zhang Hailin was still blushing and did not dare to look up at Yang Kaibai. She didn't know what she was thinking, her face became redder and redder, and her neck gradually turned red. Yang Kaibai looked at her for a while. Thinking in her heart, "Look at Zhang Hailin, she is also a beauty, so why don't she give her body to her?" Suddenly, Zhang Hailin seemed to have made a decision, she raised her head bravely, her face was still rosy, and stammered, "I, you, I, Yang Kaibai, I will be responsible for you." This time it was Yang Kaibai's turn to be dumbfounded, isn't it? Just look at your body and you will be responsible for me. How are you going to be responsible for me. "That's it. I'll take Yaya and Ivy Snake to train first." With that said, Zhang Hailin hugged Yaya and walked out of the cave. There was a lot of embarrassment between the two of them. Yang Kai was dumbfounded on the spot, with the phrase "I will be responsible for you" echoing in his mind as he watched Zhang Hailin lead the elf away.

Alas, come back and burn incense 😠🤫😡

Did something happen to the author? There has been no movement for more than a year.

I just read over 100 chapters and it was very well written. Suddenly it turned out to be a eunuch. What a pity. Even if it costs 3 million, it would be better to write the ending in 300,000 words.

It's really uncomfortable. It's okay to be slow. I'll really appreciate it if you look at people's willingness. I've tried it several times, even if it's not finished, it's okay. I'm very angry.