Become a Supreme Master from Tiga

To be honest, this paragraph really encourages people to quit. The adjective that best fits this paragraph is really both upright and upright. The author probably didn't mean to be disgusting. He just wanted to write about a conflicting situation and how to deal with it when both parties are justified. Unfortunately, the writing problem resulted in a very poor impression and was quite speechless. The objective logic here is smooth. The quarry is legal for quarrying, and humans must be higher than other creatures. Moreover, six people were killed directly without communication. There is nothing wrong with the mentality of wanting to kill monsters. I understand that there is no conflict between you protecting your home and you really shouldn't kill people indiscriminately. But first of all, this script has a serious conflict with Ultraman's worldview. If you use this background without referring to Ultraman's own worldview, it will definitely have a dissuasive effect. Secondly, the male protagonist's design is really bad. He does not consider how to deal with it, does not take a certain position, and does not try to reconcile with all parties. Let me explain, they only know how to "shouting slogans" and "self-movement". Even in reality, this kind of person is just disgusting. The standard is to do nothing but act and stand up. Even the mole wants to have sex with him, so he will forcefully lower the image of the male protagonist. If your male protagonist makes people feel like a despicable person, what else do you expect? How do readers like the story brought by this male protagonist? And it's really a matter of writing. As long as the male protagonist has a firm stand and doesn't "move himself" against the stance, it doesn't matter whether he is helping the monster, directly ignoring it, or helping to solve the problem, as long as the male protagonist has a firm goal. If you have seriously tried to act, the perception will be much better. For example, no matter if it fails or succeeds, it works hard. Even if it fails, no one will think that the Gopher is a clown. However, the male protagonist who just stands on the moral high ground and does nothing will make many people feel that it is like having just faced Batman back. . . That's it, I gave up the book and ran away. I always thought that the male protagonist had problems but the elf personality was really well written, but I didn't expect that an original script would create such a clown image of the male protagonist. I couldn't bear to look at it.

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Although I know that the author uses elves such as green caterpillars to suppress the combat power, I really don't like these elves. Everyone knows that the green caterpillar's ​​evolution into Rayquaza is a joke, but when mentioning the green caterpillar, it's said that Rayquaza is really a bad joke.

The First Green Caterpillar I don't say anything. The second gopher Haha Are you addicted to the whole job? How many more chapters can you have to wear down the readers' patience? Also, the Ultraman world is basically dull. I'm not telling you to write more depressingly, but don't laugh and laugh all day long, okay? The male protagonist is not Ultraman. I don't ask you to have Ultra spirit, but at least don't give people the feeling of a game life in it, okay? To be honest, I have long wanted to see Pokémon or Digimon fighting in the arcana world. I read a popular book by a certain cat, but I was disappointed. Leave it on the book list for now and come back to it later. If it's still like this, with its nonsensical, light-hearted writing style and over-the-top jokes, then that's all I can say. I hope the author will do well by then and there will be no shortage of readers who think like me.

Pokémon VS monster? ? ? What a little genius

I'm too self-indulgent, I want to be a person and I want to be independent, the poison test is over, you're welcome

I can't understand it. The writing in Gakuma is not clear. What is the protagonist doing?_(:з∠)_ Either it's because I didn't catch up, I didn't remember the plot, I forgot about it, and I didn't save it. Otherwise, I just saved it. It's clearly written that the protagonist wanted to be rescued, but he just ran over and said a few words, forget it, and then continued to be mentally active. What does this mean? You want to save and write together like this? Just say a few words to Gakuma and forget about it? Later, the gopher went up by himself, and then Kakuma was moved? Just turned into Z pure crystal and radiant stone? I always feel something is wrong. You said that the gopher stopped Tiga from zooming in and then Kakuma was moved, so I reluctantly accepted it. The protagonist just said a few words and then kept grinding in his heart. Can Kakuma do the same? Then the protagonist will benefit? Is this just to give something to the protagonist? Moreover, you can do nothing at all, relying on the spontaneous behavior of the gopher to have a little feeling in it. Is this a tool to give the protagonist a hook? Forget it. Although my resistance is not high, I can still withstand it. What does it mean to follow Mayumi next? Not to mention that the original drama has a boyfriend. This is a fanfic. (Although it's a little weird that I didn't choose Mayumi when there were so many other better-looking ones. Whisper BB) But I suddenly fell in love with the protagonist because she fainted due to force loss. It's quite sudden. What can I say about this heroine (anyway, I think the description is quite similar →_→). Anyway, I don't like to see it like this. It's a bit like she is purely giving girls to the protagonist. The same feeling (personal feeling, don't look for me if it's wrong, and don't look at it if you look for it (///ˊㅿˋ///) Of course I only saw this, I can't help it, my resistance is still low, if it is different from what I thought, then I say sorry Just Jiang Zi|･ω･｀) Yo-yo

The writing is okay, but there is one thing wrong. Mayumi has a boyfriend. I still remember that his name is Takumo. He is also a man who can bring hope. It turns out that you wrote that Mayumi is like a tea artist. What do you mean?

Damn it, Musket has opened a new book! If I hadn't looked back at Miaomiao, I still wouldn't have known.

I like Pokemon more than Ultraman, but I have to say that the combat power of [Pokémon] and [Ultraman] is too different. The monsters in Ultraman all start with tens of thousands of tons, have laser-resistant skin, and swallow nuclear bombs alive. Elves can only spit fireballs at each other in the gym. . There is still something to see if you take Ultraman/Monster to the Elf World. The elves went to the Ultraman world, and the soy sauce couldn't even be heated. .

The biggest problem with this book is that it conceals the existence of elves, which also leads to a lot of bugs, because it is unreasonable to conceal many plots, and there are too many inner dramas. It would be better to write about introducing elves into the world of Tiga, changing human society and the way humans live, such as the first Japan League Competition, etc., Or forming a group to fight monsters.

The monster Gakuma can still coexist well with humans. Open a garbage recycling station, use Gakuma's petrification light to turn garbage into stone, and then reuse the stone. The money earned from processing garbage and selling garbage stones will definitely allow people to protect Gakuma.

The writing is really awkward, it feels like a group of three-year-old children acting in a drama. Ultraman is filmed for children, so the way it is expressed is a bit childish, but you are the protagonist who has traveled to a real world, and it is very embarrassing to do this and create a lot of bugs.

I gave up when I saw the Kakuma section. Just say it clearly, procrastinate and get nothing done. What's the point of writing this section? Isn't it disgusting?

The theme is good, but too many elves are too weak. If you want to suppress the combat power, just start with a dreamy girl. Dreamy doesn't like fighting, and then slowly get your green caterpillars and gophers. This will ensure that everyone will not have so much resentment. After all, the system used to reward the protagonist with his elves is quite poisonous, but in the end, it always gives to the weak chicken, which is not fun.

That part of Gakuma really made me vomit.

I'm trying to persuade you to give up. Playing Pokémon in the Ultraman world is really not that good. Pokémon really can't compete with Ultraman, and trainers have a limited lifespan.

I haven't read it yet, but I read in the comments that the protagonist's Pokémon are the green caterpillar, the three gophers, and the Magikarp? Use these three funny Pokémon to make a living in Ultraman? Who is interested? Just ask who would be interested? Don't you think that using mythical beasts to fight monsters will at least make people like them handsome and cool? Even all the fighting elves with strange powers still say that the painting style is combined with Ultraman fighting monsters... I feel that the idea of ​​this book is very good, and I am a bit interested in it, but I just don't know why the author is out of his mind and wants to create a Pokémon that not many people like... I haven't read it yet and I know what the first three Pokémon of the protagonist are, so I lost interest in reading it. What else can this book hope to attract readers? I just read the book review. If the book review is misleading, please leave a message and I will delete the comment.

You all like to stare at the captain. Have you never seen a woman? Hui Jian has a family and children, but her husband died early. Her mother-in-law doesn't understand her and thinks she doesn't care about her family. Her children are like losing their parents (she can't go home several times because of work, and her work identity must be kept secret). She is often bullied in school. It's pitiful enough. She is a typical strong woman outside the home, but her family is not harmonious. She works as a victorious team and is too busy at all. A slight mistake may cause heavy losses to the citizens. She can't even take care of her own family. Why do I have time to fall in love with you?

According to your level of writing character masters, this article shouldn't be like this. The victory team forcibly subdues the intelligence, the elf's personality is unclear, the protagonist is like a superior bystander, and the world view of Tiga's world feels a bit changed.

I think it's better to continue Meow Meow, but I didn't finish this one.

I suggest the author to explode it, it's too bland now. Originally, which part of Kirialode God can be exploded but the author has a Magikarp, so I don't know what other scenes can be exploded. Then I suggest the author to introduce some macho men. Now these elves are too flat, the most ferocious one is Gengar, but he has no sense of strength. I suggest some steel-type rock fighting macho men, the kind who can punch to the flesh (or bring some people from Pokémon, I am not sure if this is good, so think again)

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it.

The writing is very good, but... I will burn incense for the first seven to three days.

This thing that enters the palace can also appear in the daily poison guide.

Keep going, hold on until the end, Habaer!

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I was put off when I saw green caterpillars and gophers.

Why haven't you updated it? It's been several days.